Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 116

Originally posted by: abhita

Hey Sheena...

Hey Abhi, how are you?

First of all ... sorry sorry sorry... for not writing my comments earlier on...

No problem, sweetie! Trust me, I know how it is - we all have lives outside the forum, even though we love to be here!!😉

I kinda read your update at about 6:30 in the morning... as I said earlier on... I start my day with your updates...

Wow, thanks so much, that's really nice to hear!

Oh gosh... Jai retching... boy... that makes him seem so much human! :-P LOL...

LOL, I like his character because he does have feelings, temper, love, affection, serious stuff - (I have yet to see humor) but yeah, he is human!

I just loved the description of the race and the emotions of both the winners and the people close to the winner... you know who I mean! 😉

😆 Yes, dear! I know who you mean!! I thought it was only fair to talk about the feelings of the winners!!

I also think it was so sweet to get her sarees in his fav colours... I also could relate to her reaction to the news about her mom's death... the way she exclaims "You killed my mother!" made it so much real... but I seriously hope that this was the only thing the pandit was trying to tell Jai about... and also that Bani understands him and his feelings!

It's funny, I have yet to see a man who says that they love pink, everybody I am close to (Brothers, dad, hubby) they all say primary colors or muted colors never pink! So I thought I would go with greeen and orange (shade of the primary color) Let's see how the wedding unfolds...

Loved this part on the whole, and waiting for the next one with bated breath!

Thanks sweety, I will aim to do an update for tomorrow night!
- Abhi

Originally posted by: nikita28

Hi Sheena,

I really enjoy reading the updates. Every part of your fan fiction is an integral part of the story.....I love the way in which you describe every scene.....great work 👏.

Thanks Nikita, appreciate your comments!! 😳

Poor Jai, he wants her sooooo bad, I hope the death of her mother doesn't ruin there relationship 😭. I mean Bani should remember that her mother had thrown herself infront of the car...how could Jai have prevented it.

True, it wasn't his fault - If Bani has a fair and balanced mind, she should not hold him as the bad guy in this accident.
Please update soon.....waiting eagerly

Will do, sweety!
Nikita

Originally posted by: bkeero

Hey Sheena.

Hey Keero, howdy buddy? what have been upto lately, not updating your FF?
Sorry Jaan that I didn't comment earlier. Gussa nahin hona please.

LOL, sweety, it takes a lot for me to get gussa on anyone, except you know who! 😆😆😆

Your updates are always great.

Thanks sweety!

I loved the race. My heart was racing the whole time thinking Bani better win or else I don't know what. I bet it was really never wrecking for Jai.

Yes, every one was going, yeah vote for Bani or vote for Roberto - so even though a tie is rare, had to do it!

He was feeling so my emotions at that moment, I totally understand his concern for him not wanting for her to race.

Yes, it is truly a dangerous sport, just like biking and car racing..

Very thoughtful of him to buy her a gift she is stunning too.

HE does have a good taste!😳

oh is Pia kind of jeleous of Bani. What is the deal with that.

I guess it's sibling rivalry!

I don't want Bani to blame Jai. THis can't be happening right now jaan. Everything is finally going on the right track and now this.

I hope she won't - we will see!

Please tell me they will get though this. I don't want them to seperate.

Me neither, but que serra serra! fate and destiny - remember?

I hope you continue soon. You are a great writer and I will try my best to comment right away.

Thanks sweety, comment when you have time, don't rush - the note was meant for some other reason -

Lots of LOve

🤗

Originally posted by: mb101

awesome part!! wait lil confused so two ppl won right? 😕 but Bani was one of them i know that 😊 luved the description. i get to know more about horse back riding everytime i read your FF. the engagement part was so cute! but Bani running away from Jai because she thinks he killed her mom purposely? continue soon plzz!! 😃




Maro 😛

Originally posted by: fsam

Sheena just read this part, excellently penned. Loved the dead heat scenario. J/B relationship seems to have started on the right with honesty between them. Loved the fact that he confessed to killing her mother.

Their passion for eachother has been very aptly described. Bani is realzing her desires, for him as woman, very well shown.

Looking forward to the next part.

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Sheena what you talking about? we love the Bad guys...haven't you heard it before...the good girls go for the big bad wolf...
if not then i'm sure u heard of this song:
"who's afraid of the big bad wolf, big bad wolf"😆
Aur sheena hum besharam nahin hain...hum sharam walli hain with be as bebe😆
btw do u like my new motto: "Phata shirt nikla hero"

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hi Sheena

just a fabalous update,truly loved it.very interesting.love the way you describe the racing methods,i get to learn something every single day.

the saree and the comparison with the tree and there feelings for one another,just described so beautifully.the ring was the prefect gift.

he told her accidently killed her mom,hope she realizes it was not his mistake and is able to forgive him.just loved it.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

Originally posted by: pkbains

Hi Sheena,
I am not sure if you really lost any of your readers, I would certainly hope
not! I really enjoyed your recent updates, including the archery segment and
the more recent 'dead heat'! I hope that JB find a way past the demise of
her mother, though. Somehow that Kiran (Singhania) Dixit manages to show
up an mess things up for Jai in alot of places! 😕
Please get Bani over it ASAP!!

Thanks for a great update!!

Originally posted by: Taz234

Phata Shirt Nikla Hero....ooooohhh love that !!!! 🤣