FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 16

Originally posted by: india06

Absolutely SMOOTH this prose as well as this JW. B is a picture of underplayed dignity.

They will capitulate ultimately that is a given ....the attraction exists between these antipodes ......its sure gonna be a helluva ride.Looking forward to it.

Originally posted by: kubare

Armana,

Just read part four and have to say👏, you still haven't revealed the mystery between Bani remembering his face not his name and Jai remebering the voice and thinking of she "sounds just ike his angle" but not her face or anything else.😉😛 The suspense is really killing me...Arma....please, please dear put me out of my misery.😛

Loved the way he dismisses her and is then annoyed at her for ignoring him completely, and being different from all the other woman.😆

Ah....so he is attracted to her 😳and she to him 😳but he thinks she is an innocnet!!!😳 The question is is she...???😕 Is that the mystery???😉😃

Cant wait for the next part from you soon.😃

Love

Krishna

And the bold purple is back!🤗
Dear K, don't be miserable about the raaz. in time it will be revealed. in the meantime, why not just enjoy the ride?😛

Originally posted by: fsam

Armana read part 4 was superb as usual. You have beautifully protrayed the friction with an underlying current of longing between 2 people who recognize each other but don't want to face each other.

The statement made by JW in the previous part comes to mind, "I don't sleep with strangers". Definitely a decision made after the fateful night 7 years ago.

Looking forward to the next part.

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

ok read part 4, amazing as usual 👏 👏 👏
dear can't wait more so the mistery gets revealed 😕
waiting desesperatly for the next part 😉 .

Originally posted by: inavars

AMAZING FF Armana 👏 👏 👏 Seriously, it's so beautifully written!!

Please do continue soon 😳