Painful Solitude - Epilogue pg206 - 30/03

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Chaitali

@Cordelia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1621

Originally posted by: pooja.walia
Cordy,
Awsome part 👏

thanks poo! 😃 or should i say, Mrs McDreamy?!!! 😉 😆

Krishna is such a sweety... aaawww...🤗
Finally the lil girl got her Mr.Dost and Daddy...
I loved the way she met him...totally Walia style...

😆 very true!! she is a walia princess after all! 😉

And the picture frame part.... it was tooooo good 👏

Very well written... 👏

Aur kitni taarif likhoon... but seriously u deserve all of it 👏 👏

thank you so much dear! and thanks for all the lovely comments you made throughout!! 😳

The Picture is now complete.... 😃 😃 😃
An awsome ff dear... a job very well done 😳 👏

😳

Poo

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Chaitali

@Cordelia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1622

Originally posted by: nibbles

Finis?

😭

Okie, I'm done!!😆

Shuper Dhuper end Cordy......Jai going round buying all that stuff for Krishu was heartwarming!!😳.....Can this guy be any sweeter?!......Adored all the decorations he decided to put up, keeping his little princess's tastes in mind!👏

Loved Krishna kicking him on his shin😆, before planting a great big kiss on his cheek (just remember I'm next in line!!😳)

Waiting for the epilogue!!😛

And ofcourse, another FF!!😉

thanks nabs! no he just cannot get any sweeter, he is the sweetest!! 😳 😉

she is a walia princess after all, he had to decorate in style na?! 😆

i will tell krishu to keep her dad in position, you are puckering up right now!! 😛 😉 😆

the epilogue is already up huni, and a new ff... probably not for a few weeks!! 😉

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Chaitali

@Cordelia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1623

Originally posted by: jigna_07
awwww cordy that was very beautifully written
they are a happy family now
how cute and sweet
please start another FF soon
please

thanks jigs! 😃 they are finally happy, it's been too long na?! 😉 😃

i will start another in a few weeks, thanks for all the great comments on this one!! 😳

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ovaltine

@ovaltine

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1624

lovely story Cords. enjoyed all parts. 😊 . Thank you for writing this beautiful story. Loved your Krishu and her endearing personality. Seems she knows how to win the hearts of all family members. You even brought the entire family together again in the end but Pia?? I haven't forgiven her yet! Saahil and jig became goody2shoes, No more baddies 😭 😭. What about this Sabs, getting to kiss JW 😈 won't hubby be jealous 🤢 . Better get her out of WM and back to writing her ff for us here in IF. She is getting distracted 😉 . So JB have another daughter, are they working on a son now??
Great work and love to read more. 😉 👏

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1625

Namaste Cords Ji--hope you are doing okay. 😊

that was just beautiful.the prefect ending to this prefect story.very cute,funny,romantic and indead very touching.all the emotions you protrayed in this ff I could feel them.beautifully written.Krishu is so cute,indead a Walia.Jai and Bani are so cute,bless them.I totally enjoyed reading each and every part of your ff.looking forward to your next masterpiece,cant wait. 😊

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1626

Tareef karoon kya uski jisne tumhe banaya ...

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and ur creative spurt

Thanks for the Epilogue,it added to the story's poignancy and simple sweetness.

Hope you start the next one sooner

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menal

@menal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1627

i am a very impatient lady 😆 😆 and i can't usually wait long for updates so whenever a new ff is started i just keep tabs on the updates and wait till the title says "last part" or "epilogue" so that i can read the whole ff at the same time....and this friday when i saw epilogue on your ff and i knew what i am going to do this weekend ......and i finished reading it
was awesome just like the way you describe their solitude.... 👏 👏
good job 👏 👏
take care, god bless you
menal

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priyanka

@mahimn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1628

Cordy,

For the final comment I had to go through all the parts and I loved the ending to such a beautiful story. But Bnai maintaining contact with Pia is something I cannot digest, even if it just once a year affair.Sorry .

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Divya Harji

@divya_123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1629

haila u ended it
sorry for the late reply had to read almost last 5 or 6 parts... i couldnt read it daily

awesome cordy 👏 👏 👏
liked the way u described each n every relation..

fab story and now i m waiting for ur other new ff.. 😃

👏 👏

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Jojo

@Jojo_han

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1630

Congo Guriji.......to you and your family due to the arrival of the baby ... finally you have finished the FF...... 😭 😭 😭

I got your P.M sweety...sorry couldnt reply till I read the parts I have missed so far....... so no thanx.....how about I give you a ..... 🤗.. instead.... 😉

I went back and reread them all over again.... Cant say other than it beautifully and outstandingly well written.... 👏 👏 👏 👏

Now.. how about you start something new and soo amazing.... I promise to be loyal... you know I'm fanaa over you and your FF's.... 😳 😆

Till than God bless us all... 😃

Jojo...

Edited by Jojo_han - 18 years ago