Painful Solitude - Epilogue pg206 - 30/03 - Page 160

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Posted: 18 years ago
..oh cordy yaar 😃 😃 😃 ....wht am emotional and yet awesome ending 😭 😭 😭(tears of joy 😆) 😃 😃 😃 .....luved it 😳 😳 😳 ....enjoyed reading the whole ff yaar....its was just perfect 😃 .......

i luv happy endings....all the walia clan are bak at the mansion 😃 😃 😃 ...so thats gud....so many kids...many that is great 😳 ...and looks like rano and sahil made up eventually 😃 😃 😃 ...so that was nice....gud thing pia...is keeping her distance 😃 ....cant blame bani for forgiven her 😕 😕 😕 ....thats bani for u 😆 ....hehehe....getting used to it now 😆 .......

krishu is just sooo sweet....she saved her pocket money...for xmas gifts 😳 ..thats was adorable....luved wht she gave tony.....great that u gave a him a gud part....there ignore him too much in the real thing 😆 ...though he is a bit fishy in that 😉 ...always upto something....hehehe

...jai is soo cute...haila!! kitchen mein 😳 ....sighhhhhhhhhhh 😳 they are soo in luv with each other...and its soo cute to see 😳 ......

great ff...cords...totally enjoyed it.....i hope ur thinking of another one 😃 ......luved it like always 😳 ...keep up the gud work 👏
Edited by TINK - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
loved it loved it loved it... 👏 ...

You know...this family is huge...but u atleast had less children in the epilogue that what i did...haha...

Loved it cordy.....such a perfect end to this story...no more solitude for 60 years....wow...Jai is going to cross a century...lol

Please start a new one soon...I want u to continue the story from christmas...please do that one next..
Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow, Cords....love how you've brought everyone back together....siggghhh...not a single question left un answered. FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
But haila....Saby got a kiss from Munna, no fair... 😭 😭 ...what about me?? 😳 😳 But hum toh hain he soul sista's, we'll share him amongst ourselves 😆
Waiting eagerly for the next ff...
cheers
Sims
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Posted: 18 years ago
Cords that was beautiful...totally loved it...
i love sabrina;s character...haha poor her..jai peecha hi nahin chodta hai 😆

ok i was all 🤣 wen i pictured tony in red jumpsuit wtih gloves on... 😆 ..darn im still giggling...

rano and sahil remarried?? wow that was something...dint quite expect it...but im not complaining 😉

gr8 story hun...

waiting for ur next ff soon
neetu
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great ff, wonderful ending. Loved Krishna being in total charge of gift giving and telling them all that they were insulting her when they were laughing at Tony.

Jai demanding toll charges in the kitchen, something new.

Hope you are going to start new ff, it's amazing to see what the scenarios ff writers come up after witnessing the fiasco in KS.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Sajnaa Ji Vaari Vaari Jaanu Ji Mein
Tu Hi To Mera Sansaar Hai
Aisa Mera Pyaar Hai

Charno Mein Jo Na Jagah Paanu Ji Mein
To Mera Jeena Hi Bekaar Hai
Aisa Mera Pyaar Hai

😆😆what............am happy........u can't blame me can u 😛

will be back with detailed comments soon

Snowy days and frosty night, everything looks cold and white
Hangin' 'round the mistletoe, hangin' 'round the mistletoe

Christmas day will soon be here, and everybody's full of cheer
Hangin' 'round the mistletoe, waitin' for you dear

Well, I've waited all year long and now the year is almost gone
Hangin' 'round the mistletoe, hangin' 'round the mistletoe

But if that's what I've gotta do just to get a kiss from you
Hangin' 'round the mistletoe, waitin' for you dear

Christmas is a special time to give and to receive
For every little kiss you give me I will give you three

You ain't gonna miss one kiss, that's one thing you'll never miss
I'm hangin' 'round the mistletoe waitin' for you dear

Waited till I'm cold and blue just to get a kiss from you
I'm hangin' 'round the mistletoe, waitin' for you dear


Edited by sabsj - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey My Sweet Chaitali,

Read your last three parts!!!!
Mind-blowing end to your ff!!!!
A Very Emotional last two parts!!!!
But loved it to the core!!!!
Haila!!! Maar Dala!!!!
Loved the how Kishu dominates the Walia House!!!!!
Loved the family is back together!!!!
Loved the Tony-Kishu scene!!!!
It was hilarious and emotional to the core!!!!
Cannot wait for your next ff to start!!!!!
Mind-blowing...too good!!!!
As per the tradition,
Dum Duma Dum Mast Mast....
O Humdum Tere Bina Kya Jina.....

And the second one...
Tere Aaane Ki Jab Khabar Mahake,
Tere Khusboo Se Sara Ghar Mahake....

Pls start the next ff...soooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish
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Posted: 18 years ago
Amaazing FF and amazing end...
Enjoyed and loved your FF completely..

Hope your will start a new one soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
So cute!!! Krishu is really sweet!!! They got another dau.!!! Jais amazin!!! Loved it!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fabulous ending!! i loved the scene between krishna and tony.. awww

am glad the whole walia clan is back!! really wnjoyed this FF. hope to see another one from you soon!

--could you please continue either of your FF competition entry! loved them both.. would love to know what happens next!

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