Forever Yours - Final Part pg. 101 Updt - Page 70

Originally posted by: who am i???

Hello sangs Hi Archu

Well first i am angry!!! still Flashback and over that where is my entry???? Well as far as I can see there's no entry at all.

jokes apart!!!!Excellent part as usual,ur magic with words continue 👏 Thanks dear 😊

The way ur establishing two friends love story is good!!! esp the kiss yaar i never knew kiss over phone would be so wounderful and romantic and i blushed 😳 😳 😳 I never knew either 😆

hmmm my anger is gone!!!!!!! wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww the little scene b/w my munna and his baby was good!!! it was so well written,esp bani mistaking jai to be rano was good. I loved writing it too 😛

Well even i am waiting to know which subject will bani teach JW 😉 Me too she's already in the teacher mode 😉

Can i get to see j-B dancing on their sangeet in nxt update!!! Lets hope so, cant promise 😉

finally praying to God that coming week should be very exciting for u with loads of rest and good mood so u'll update soon!!

Rest in office? U r crazy 😕😉😆

Originally posted by: baran

😉 kia update yar 👏

Originally posted by: strawberry007

Hey Sangs

Okay so I was literally blushing. 😃😃😃 So you were ☺️
All I can say is that your part was fabuloso mindblowing amazing WOW!!!

Thanks a lot 😊

You have such good writing skills, and whooo I cant wait until your next part!

Whoa! Give me some time, ok? Havent started thinking too.

Cont soon!

And again superb job(I forgot this word above) 😆 Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: rivya

hey sangs...that was another awesome update...loved the changes in the feelings as u portrayed them...

Thanks Rivs, glad you liked them 😛

And the kiss on the phone...that made me blush... Really? Whats wrong with all of you? 😆😆😆

these two are definitely the best couple i have witnessed and ur wrting is just the icing on the top... I am honoured by your compliment. Thanks a lot.

Rivs

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Sangita,

That was a great update, loved it!! Thanks Sheena 😊

The budding romance between JB described very sensitively. It had me sweating 😕😆

The kisses over the telephone, the shower scene and the promised kiss - tres romantique!!! 😳 😳 Well French words I see, Me know NO French 😭😭😭

I am looking forward to the sangeet. Me too 😃

👏

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Sangita Di
you have once again blown me away.Just fabalous. 👏 Thanks Preet 😊

loved there banter over the phone,very romantic.I am still blushing. 😳 😳 😳

Haila, whats wrong with you all? 😆

Jai is going to be very good student I'm sure since he has a teacher like bani. 😉 😉 😉

Me sure about that part too. 😉

Looking forward to their sangeet.the gift he got her you described it beautifully.very touching. 😃 😃 Thanks a lot.

cant wait for the next part. 😃 Will try to write somethign soon.

preet 😊

Originally posted by: nian

Sangita,
I am speechless....there was flirting, romance and so much more... 😉 Thanks Nidhi 😛

U go girl......u should continue the streak and write more happy romantic scenes.... Will try. Thank God, you all cant even see the mean FF brewing up in my head. 😈 😆

Can't wait to read more....I knew u wrote well with the emotional stuff...but u pen everything incl. cute, dreamy parts well too... Thanks a lot dear. I am ☺️ now.

Nidhi

Originally posted by: Hkaurk22

Sangs! I am speechless!

What! A KS Ph.Diian speechless? Not a good thing 🤣

What an awesome update- you portray such a tender relationship btwn JB.. 😳 <- that was me when reading it! Me too ☺️. You know the source of inspiration right? 😉

Continue soon! 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: india06

Tentative transition of relationship,very appropriately paced.

And it took so much of my mental energy 😉

That was a fresh,melodic,tender BnJ moment. Thanks a lot India.

Lovely read,thanks. You are welcome.

Originally posted by: siumi

👏 👏 👏 Sangita..its mindblowing..fablous...oh waiting for more JB moments 😆