Forever Yours - Final Part pg. 101 Updt

GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 18 years ago

#681

hey sangs...that was another awesome update...loved the changes in the feelings as u portrayed them...
And the kiss on the phone...that made me blush...
these two are definitely the best couple i have witnessed and ur wrting is just the icing on the top...
Rivs

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Sheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#682

Sangita,

That was a great update, loved it!! The budding romance between JB described very sensitively. The kisses over the telephone, the shower scene and the promised kiss - tres romantique!!! 😳 😳

I am looking forward to the sangeet.

👏

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preet

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Posted: 18 years ago

#683

Sangita Di
you have once again blown me away.Just fabalous. 👏
loved there banter over the phone,very romantic.I am still blushing. 😳 😳 😳
Jai is going to be very good student I'm sure since he has a teacher like bani. 😉 😉 😉
Looking forward to their sangeet.the gift he got her you described it beautifully.very touching. 😃 😃
cant wait for the next part. 😃

preet 😊

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timepasskar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#684

Sangita,
I am speechless....there was flirting, romance and so much more... 😉 U go girl......u should continue the streak and write more happy romantic scenes....Can't wait to read more....I knew u wrote well with the emotional stuff...but u pen everything incl. cute, dreamy parts well too...

Nidhi

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HKK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#685

Sangs! I am speechless! What an awesome update- you portray such a tender relationship btwn JB.. 😳 <- that was me when reading it!

Continue soon! 👏 👏 👏

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india06

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Posted: 18 years ago

#686

Tentative transition of relationship,very appropriately paced.

That was a fresh,melodic,tender BnJ moment.

Lovely read,thanks

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sukhjinder kaur

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Posted: 18 years ago

#687

👏 👏 👏 Sangita..its mindblowing..fablous...oh waiting for more JB moments 😆

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khrhun_sheen

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Posted: 18 years ago

#688

😳 , okay now that my cheeks aren't looking soo red, I'll continue! Wow, that was great. Good to see Mr. M is outta the picture. Aww their relationship, JB's is soo cute, so only 11 more days till the wedding, *sigh*, phir bani tera kya hoga?? 😆

Sheen

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Sangita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: cutelady
Haila another part ahhhhh!!!!! looks like someone up there likes me 😛

I am sure God loves you a lot. 😊

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Sangita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#690

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny
tht was soo 😳
Thank you dear.

i love bani and jai's realtionship and bani mistaking jai for rano 😆

Thank goodness, it didnt turn out as in the serial. 🤢

i feel like some chocolates now!!! GO ahead 😃

thanks for making it a long part 😛 You are welcome

wonderful update 👏 Thanks again 😛

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