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Sangita

@sangitadas

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Posted: 18 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: khrhun_sheen
😳 , okay now that my cheeks aren't looking soo red, I'll continue! 😆😆😆 Hope you are better now. 😉

Wow, that was great. Good to see Mr. M is outta the picture. Out for eternity so dont think abt him at all. 😕

Aww their relationship, JB's is soo cute, so only 11 more days till the wedding, *sigh*, phir bani tera kya hoga?? 😆
Well I guess that is what Bani is also askign herself? 😳

Sheen

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#702

Aww......Sangs dear , what can I say except👏

It was an awesome and superb part.😃 So romantic😳 and so touching😃.

Ah....the kiss through the phone and also the one in the her room was , beautiful😳😛😃

Cant wait to read the next part from you soon.😃

Love

Krishna

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 18 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: sangitadas

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simz99

@simz99

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#704

Hey Sangs
Have just read all four updates in one go….haila…what a lovely lovely tale you have spun m'dear. Beautifully crafted and exquisitely worded….nobody does a sad ff like you, but this is heaps better 😃
Waiting eagerly for the next part…the sangeet, ched-chaad…the wedding and the c-night 😳 😳 …haila no hopes for another 19/6 in KS so have all my hopes pinned on you! 😉
Cheers
Sims

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#705

Great part Sangs di!
👏
I loved it!
so Jai can't live without his beloved? 😆 😆
How chweet! 😳
I wish it was me instead of Bani here 😳 😆
please continue soon
Rooj

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Raaga_om

@Raaga_om

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#706

Omg Whoa our seemingly sweet unspoilt innocent mature viewbie has started sporting a different kind of wings! Growing up I see! I cannot wait to see what you will spin when the growing up is complete! 😉 😆

Honestly the new update had me perspiring profusely and goosep***les raining across my skin, if such a man is your lover and indeed if such is the prelude to every marriage, I am ready to get married tomorrow!

You struck me dumb dids. Especially since such an explicit (For you!) scene is come from a writer like you whose forte is pain and emotion.
This not done. Having raised hopes, I will keep torturing you untill you give a full blown one you know what I mean! 😉

Beautiful wonderful all the superlatives combined!

Jiyo!

-Raaga

p.s: When can I come to your house for writing lessons?

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pooja1_76

@pooja1_76

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#707

Yes,

waiting for the next part....

please continue soon

pooja

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preeti73

@preeti73

Explorer

Posted: 18 years ago

#708

Sangita,

Excellent update once again.....
The whole flirting part had me all blushing.....
You have a way with words!!

Please continue soon.

Preeti.

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#709

Caught up with the last two part Sangs!!😛

JB are absaloutely adorable!!.......Gosh, one kiss and I'm blushing!!😳😳😳

Loved the idea of him gifting her a vermillion box!👏.....so sweet!😛

Mayank is a certified creepo!!......Urgh, I'm glad Jai gave him a good solid punch!😃

Also loved the slight banter between Jai and Bani over the phone!😳

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91118

Suspended

Posted: 18 years ago

#710

I was so sure I commented...but I guess I didn't. I did read the update as soon as you posted it though. 😛

And these emoticons aren't as effective because they're a couple days old...but this is how I felt after reading the update 😳

I'm glad Mayank is out of the picture...but if he is the typical bad guy...we never know when he might enter again but that won't happen, right?! 😉 hint hint 😆

LOVE JB...they're absolutely adorable...and Jai is such a sweetheart...he got her the vermillion box😛

AWESOME part Sangita!! 👏 👏 Update soon 😛

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