Forever Yours - Final Part pg. 101 Updt - Page 72

Sangs,

WOW, simply fantastic, out of this world. 👏👏👏

I must say you describe their feelings so well that sometimes i can't help but feel what they must be feeling.

I am trying to see the difference between your ff massi and the real one but the hatred for her is too strong to overlook so yeah i still hate her.

But i'll tell you this i am loving the JB of your ff yes both of them equally.

Honey now it's time for another part don't you think?😉

Waiting very very impatiently cuz i am not blessed with patience so hurry up. chop chop.😆

Take care,

Shina

Originally posted by: kubare

Aww......Sangs dear , what can I say except👏

Thanks a lot. 😊

It was an awesome and superb part.😃 So romantic😳 and so touching😃.

Thanks absolutely.

Ah....the kiss through the phone and also the one in the her room was , beautiful😳😛😃

Cant wait to read the next part from you soon.😃

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: simz99

Hey Sangs
Have just read all four updates in one go….haila…what a lovely lovely tale you have spun m'dear. Beautifully crafted and exquisitely worded….nobody does a sad ff like you, but this is heaps better 😃
Waiting eagerly for the next part…the sangeet, ched-chaad…the wedding and the c-night 😳 😳 …haila no hopes for another 19/6 in KS so have all my hopes pinned on you! 😉
Cheers
Sims

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Great part Sangs di!
👏
Thank you dear

I loved it! I am overwhelmed 😛

so Jai can't live without his beloved? 😆 😆 Well we all know that dont we? 😉

How chweet! 😳 Extremely

I wish it was me instead of Bani here 😳 😆 High hopes must say 🤣

please continue soon Posting next part now.

Rooj

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Thanks a lot Simi for liking it. But I guess yaar I am not a very descriptive person. SO I will keep the story simple.And yaar NO hopes for another 19/6 either over here 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Raaga_om

Omg Whoa our seemingly sweet unspoilt innocent mature viewbie has started sporting a different kind of wings! Growing up I see! I cannot wait to see what you will spin when the growing up is complete! 😉 😆

In few words, just shut up Aarthi. 🤣

Honestly the new update had me perspiring profusely and goosep***les raining across my skin, if such a man is your lover and indeed if such is the prelude to every marriage, I am ready to get married tomorrow!

Well let me speak to Auntie then ASAP. What say? 😉

You struck me dumb dids. Especially since such an explicit (For you!) scene is come from a writer like you whose forte is pain and emotion.
This not done. Having raised hopes, I will keep torturing you untill you give a full blown one you know what I mean! 😉

I will keep its simple and straight, so dont pin your hopes on me dear. 😛

Beautiful wonderful all the superlatives combined!

Jiyo!

-Raaga

p.s: When can I come to your house for writing lessons?

😛
You can come anytime so I get to box your ears, not for writing lessons. Me giving writing lessons to a Pro?