FF: A Bitter Harvest.The End. XIII Pg 74 - Page 53

Dear Armana
Finally my computer has allowed me to post a comment...so here goes:
The way you write is like magic. The fluency of your words is like pure liquid. The intensity is like a hot blazing sun.
The elegance and beauty is that of the moon!
All in all, i am just trying to say that you are an amazing writer and never stop!
Just beautiful 👏 👏 👏
Standing ovation 😉
Will be waiting for the update.
Sweetu.
P.S. Can i call you T.? ( abreviated form of teacher...do tell me. Thank you.) The advice you gave is helping. Thank you.

Ah yes, good one cordelia....she is Ms.Dickens!

😳 Your ff is awesome, the last part was so worth the wait, thanks, it was very beautifully written 👏

Armana......boring it definitely was not. Loved it completely. 👏You really are a wonderful writer who brings out each an every emotion of each and every character and what they are feeling or their expressions so beautifully, that one feels each and every emotions of theirs or its more like being there.🤗

Avanti is such a darling, she really is.😃 KJ is just to adorable for words and like any baby at that age.😛

Jai and Bani what can one say about them, they are meant to be together. Love the sutlety with which you protray such intimate scenes or show intamacy.😃

Cant wiat to read the next update from you soon.

Hope you are feeling much better now.

Love

Krishna

Hey sweety, i just read you FF from start to finish on Shina's orders and now i realise y, such a brilliant, heartbreaking,emoitonal,FF, i love the way you write so sweet and simple, your charcters are not over the top or drama baazi just emotionl wreck's 😆,post the next part soon i'm looking forward to it so much.

sharan XXX

Originally posted by: sweetu144

Ah yes, good one cordelia....she is Ms.Dickens!

dear me, what have i started?! she's gonna kick my a*s! 😕 😆

Dear Armana...

Its too good... Continue soon.. Also Congrats on ur winning Fanfic competition.. I know it has been a long time but I only registered today...

I regret for not searching for ffs in this forum much... i read very few.. The temperory marriage was one outstanding one...

this one, i wish i started reading it from the first day... but then it would have edged me with anxiety till the next part.. it saved me one way... i just love it... your knowledge and reading experience had a greater effect on the story than the jai/bani magic, really... even if it was not them it would have been a great job..

i started reading it after saw in a post as "why can't jai become like that in yuor ff".. so i wanted to have a look, but honestly speaking i am blessed for that..

it will not bring out tears though, but made us think... except that the poor Tarun had to be in that relationship i wish everything is excellent..

👏 👏 hope to see the next part soon

Rose

i was wondering where it is disappeared.. i think people are so much bored with ks that looking something worthy 😊

Hey Armana ...... hope you're doing ok. Waiting for your next part........

Please update soon. Please, please, please. KS has become such a farce nowadays I really look forward to your updates. It's a real pick-me-up.
Somali