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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
good god!! this getting too much!! u sure now how to keep us glued to this ff!!! 👏 👏 👏 wonder what the story is behind chacha bhanu walia???
Update jaldi karna!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
I can't wait for the suprise. I liked the new part but I have a hard time digesting Bani calling Ranveer Bhai and Jigyasa maa. Its to wired, other than that this is one cool fanfic.

-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
NOOOO i dont want to b shocked nemore... i mean i want tooo but......

I want some cute scenes between J&B.... plzzzzzzzzzz..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pretty plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😃

this part was good.... & that name is sooo funny.... Bhanu similar to Bhalu.... 😆

plzzzzzzz cont soon..... & yeaa some cute scenes.... only few.... plzzzzzzzzzz 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Auditi

NOOOO i dont want to b shocked nemore... i mean i want tooo but......

I want some cute scenes between J&B.... plzzzzzzzzzz..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pretty plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😃

this part was good.... & that name is sooo funny.... Bhanu similar to Bhalu.... 😆

plzzzzzzz cont soon..... & yeaa some cute scenes.... only few.... plzzzzzzzzzz 😛



Yaa i agree with you............would love to have some cute moments of J&B....Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzz😃

the story is going great.......keep it up👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
Dear Guys,
I am leaving for America tomorrow.
As I need time to settle down there.
Hence I will not be able to update any of my ff for the next two weeks.
I will be back on the KS forum by Dec 10.
After which I will update all my ff.
I hope to see you soon again.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
hi manish

have a save fight and hope u get settle down soon in USA.
will be waiting for u to update ur ffs.

hima
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.
Many Thanks for the patience.
I am back and will start updating my ff as regualrly as possible.

Here comes Part-X
Hope you enjoy it.

Part- X
Pia is waiting eagerly for her dinner with Jai Walia. She is about to know what happens when things start to go terribly wrong?

Jai Walia drove to the restaurant where he had invited Pia for dinner after all he had to play his cards right and then only his objective would be achieved.

Pia could not believe that after such a long time Jai Walia wanted to spend time with her. Pia was dressed in a black sleeveless and neckless dress she had a diamond necklace and earrings to go with it.

The dress along with high-heeled shoes made her look tall. Light make-up on her olive skin and she looked like a million bucks at least that is what she thought.

Pia had no clue when illusions break and a person realizes that he is no longer in his/her comfort zone that is when the worst happens.

Jai Walia came a little late as he got down from his Black Merc he once again went over the plan in his mind.
Just before he went inside to meet Pia he called someone on the mobile and said,"All is set and ready to go."

With this he closed his mobile and put it in his pocket and went inside his private restaurant where he knew Pia was waiting for him.

Pia had also seen Jai Walia's Merc coming inside the hotel and she made a call on her mobile," Well, the target is here be ready."

With that she had disconnected the number and kept the mobile in her purse.

Jai took a deep breath before he opened the door of the restaurant as he entered all of a sudden the lights of the restaurant went out and came back after few minutes.

As the lights came back out Pia saw Jai Walia staring at her and she was looking back at him.

Jai Walia smiled and said, "You look beautiful and ravishing tonight Pia."

Pia blushed after a long time and said, "Thanks Mr. Walia."

Jai came closer to Pia and said, "Not Mr. Walia Pia call me Jai. U know just "Jai"

Pia was having a hard time breathing now. She could not believe that this was happening to her and I mean Jai Walia was being nice, romantic and what not. Can dreams really come true?

She did not want this moment to go by. After all, this is what she had lived for all her life.

Then the music started playing and Jai asked her for a dance and both were dancing arm to arm and cheek to cheek.

Pia was completely mesmerized by the sudden change in Jai Walia and could not believe what could have brought that change.

Jai Walia smiled and said to himself if this is what u think is a surprise wait to see what I have in stored next for you.

As Pia and Jai keep dancing all of a sudden she sees that woman Bani walk in. Then she sees Rano, Aditya, Ranveer, Jiggs and finally she is shocked to the core when she sees Jai Walia walking in with them.

If he is Jai Walia then who is this man she has been dancing with?
Bani walks up to Pia and says, "Surprised little sis????"

Pia is too stunned to say anything. She cannot believe the words that this woman is speaking. She called her "Little sis". Who is this woman?????

And more importantly what is happening????

Bani says to Pia, "Well Pia u have been wanting to know who am I??"
Pia justs keeps looking at the woman.

Bani says, "Well, Pia I am Bani Walia. U know the one u tried to burn alive in that car with this duplicate of Jai Walia."

Pia is shocked and stunned and says, "Di what are you talking about??? I never did any such thing."

Bani says, " Come on Pia, do you think I am stupid???"

Pia says, " But Di…"

Bani cuts her and says, "Do not call me Di…."
Next thing Pia knows she gets a resounding slap across her face. This time it is Jai Walia.

Jai tells her, " What did you think I am some kind of zombie that people will fool me all my life?"

Pia is now frightened to the core as she slowly begins to realize that the ground beneath her feet is beginning to run, more like sprint from her legs she is trying hard to control her feet but all she can see herself slowly being buried into a deep abyss where there will be know one to save her.

Jai looks at her and says, "This man who u brought to impersonate me, is a man who understands the language of money. And I paid him three times more that what you had promised him and look now he is on my side.

You forgot a basic rule of life Pia what goes around come around. The same man who you hired and spent so much money to look like me is the same man I hired to expose you. Life has a way of like they say equalizing itself."

Jai continues, " You took my wife away from me and my kids. You left her die a dog's death and because of you she has a new face and scares that will not blemish for the rest of our lives.

You made a simple, loving and sweet Bani into a woman who wanted revenge from her husband because she thought I wanted to kill her.

You Pia are a disgrace not only to womanhood and sisterhood but also to the human race. People like you should be roasted on a live grill."

Pia has tears in her eyes she cannot believe what she is hearing this is not how she had planned her life and now it was a complete shamble.
Jai continues, " I want to know how you are involved in all this and what has my uncle got to do with it? Also, how are Tarun & Raashi involved in this??? Speak up if you want to otherwise there are other ways also………..

Pia is completely broken down. Her tears are covering her face now and with it all her mascara seems to have mixed with tears. She goes down on her knees and cries her heart out.

She is just hallowing like a wild animal and all she that comes back to her is her hallow soul and emptiness which was the truth about her life.

She tells Jai and the gang everything as she is relaying the final piece to the puzzle, there is a sudden flash in the darkened room and next thing Jai and everyone else see is a figure of Pia lying in a pool of blood and looking peaceful for the first time in her life.

All are shocked to see Pia dead and are more stunned with the relevation she diclosed mintues before her death.

Preview for the Next Part-
Who killed Pia????
Jai and Fake Jai exchange places
Jai comes to know the reason behind this conspiracy.
It shocks and stuns him to the core.

Would love to know your comment.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish



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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
Welcome back 😊
I really missed your ffs.
Great part as always.
Can't wait to read the next.
plz cont. soon.
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
OMG....it is really great to see you back with update.....i was waiting for your update.........as usual it's lovely update.....i hope you are doing fine ..con soon

love
Anki. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
Welcome to US and welcome back to I-Forum
I also missed your ffs, i hope you update them all when you have time
Served Pia,😡😡😡 right
I wish someone shot her in the show
Loved the slapping marathon she got
I bet Chacha hired someone to kill her
Please write soon😛

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