Return to Me- P10,Pg11, Updated!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is a new Jai-Bani fanfic.

Fanfic Preview: This is a story of Jai-Bani unlike any other that u have thought of or even heard of. It is different and will keep u guessing what is about to happen next.

Prelude:

Jai and a woman are fighting with each other in a room at Walia House and suddenly there is a sound of gunshot.
Both woman and Jai look up someone else has been shot in the struggle between Jai and the woman.

Jai rushes towards the woman who has been shot and then picks her up and rushes to the hospital.

She has been shot twice one near the heart and one on the chest. She is unconsicous. The doctors treating her are worried because she has lost a lot of blood and they are operating on her.

Jai is walking or rather pacing up and down and cannot comprehend that this has happened. Yet again the fate had laced his happiness with tragedy.

It has been over two hours, the light of the operation theatre is switched off now.

The doctor comes out and tells Jai Walia, " I am sorry Mr. Walia we were unable to save your wife Bani Walia. She is no more."

The world of Jai Walia collapsed then until he saw Bani again..............

Part-I
Bani Dixit as she was known to the people who worked for. She was a very successful business woman. She was far away from India. She was now based in USA. She was in Providence, Rhode Island, a small town on the east coast. It was 45 minutes away from Boston.
Bani fell in love with Providence and Boston. Her walks at the Harvard Square on the weekend were something she use to enjoy a lot. She was fond of Newberry Street where u could find so many Indian shops and eatries.
Bani was into Hospitality Industry. She was into event management, malls, movie multiplexes, ,media management, PR and lot of other fields that she was venturing. She was a avid reader and a poet by nature and had written a lot of poetries. She was now getting into publishing industry and was about to open a chain of book stores with a coffee shop across different cities in USA.
Bani had just signed a million-dollar deal with the Walia Group of Industries. But the truth of the matter was the Jai Walia did not know that Bani even existed. She had faked her death 7 years ago. In the eyes of the world Bani Walia had died seven years ago.
Bani had changed her appearance with the help of a plastic surgery . She with a heavy heart parted with the face that God had given her. She now wore contacts. She had changed her appearance so much that sometimes even she could not recognize herself when she saw herself in the mirror.
But was the woman she saw in the mirror now was the real Bani or the one who loved her husband Jai Walia? Which one was real?

She knew the answer and it still ached for her to know that she loved the man who was the very reason she was leaving to avenge herself and the mockery of her life and love that Jai Walia had made.

There were only two people who knew that Bani Walia was not dead and they were the people she trusted and had cherished their friendship over the years.

Her friend Pushkar, who was in India now taking care of the Indian operations and gave her all the information regarding Jai Walia and Walia Group of Industries.

And the second person was Tarun Sablok, Jai Walia's best friend who had helped her and decided to close all ties with Jai after he came to know what Jai had done.

Tarun came and told Bani- The tickets have come for India. Are u sure about this Bani?

Bani said- I have never been sure about anything in my life than this.

Tarun- U know that u still love him and u think u will be able to hurt the man who u still care so much about.

Bani said- Tarun, do not worry. If Revenge is the game, Bani is the name. And u forget one thing Tarun Jai does not I am alive and he does not this face.

With that both Tarun and Bani left for Boston International Airport. They were flying from Delta Airlines.

After 16 hours direct flight Bani was stepped foot in India after a gap of 7 years and said to herself Jai Walia here I come save urself if u can!!!!

Pushkar saw Tarun and Bani and hugged Bani and took her directly to the partneship party between the Walia Group of Industries and her company. On their journey towards the venue Pushkar briefed Bani with all the necessary details.

Bani walked along side Pushkar and Tarun and walked into the banquet hall and the person standing and talking to someone was the man she loved the most and that was the same man she despised the most.

Bani walked up to Jai Walia and said- Hello Mr. Walia, I am Bani Dixit.
Jai stunned to listen to Bani's name turned around and was shocked to see her but something did not seem right, she was not his Bani. After all how could she be. She died 7 years back.

Jai and Bani continue to stare each other.

Preview for Next Part-
Bani stuns Jai by telling him details that know one besides his wife Bani could know.
Jai is stumped.
Bani tells Pia her sister that her bad time is about to start so she should be careful.
Pia looks scared.
Bani tells Rano to be also on the lookout and she has some surprises coming her way.
Rano looks confused.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

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pooja.walia thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start... 👏 👏 👏
you really seem to be on a spree....best of luck... i hope to read some really nice stories of u'rs...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg....... i really have no words... its giving me creeps to imagine what the future has in store for these two...

its great! its totally different! and OMG i cant wait! continue soon =D

-pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok...wow...wow...WOW!!! 👏 👏 👏
that was totally different and totally great...haila
I would so love to actually see this play out on tv
update soon...hun cant wait...
why is bani after rano...what did rano do...
pia and jai i understand...ONS
lekin Rano...chalo...aage aage dhekte hai, hota kai kya.. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dude!!
awesome start!!!1
i am sooo waiting til the next oen goes up!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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V. Nice and Different Story
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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o wow bani is evil here man!! plz contiue soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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halia Manish another ff 👏
super, are you preparing us for halloween 😆
Bani got a plastic surgery 😭
can't wait to read
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW!!! great beginning, plz continue soon!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Really great start.... 👏 .....can't wait to see your next part..

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