Return to Me- P10,Pg11, Updated!!!!! - Page 7

😲 😲 😲 Raashi is the master mind
and Tarun 😡 😡 😡 is an traitor, i didn't see this coming
Why would Raashi do something like this?
I am glad that Jai and Bani made up and cleared the confusion
Jai was being slick, taking full advantage of the game
Halia duplicate Jai Walia, i think the kids are his
Pia teri to mein 😡
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Rasshi a mastermind??? I can't wait to see where this story goes.


-Rimpy

Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-VIII
Jai has nothing but pure venom in his eyes already everyone can see the re-emergence of the old Jai Walia.

Jai Walia along with Bani vows to find out the truth and with that all of them what should be their next plan of action.

Jai tells everyone that now the time has come to act. Jai tells Bani for now I am going to keep ur identity a secret. I do not want the twins to be harmed in anyway.

Jai Walia tells everyone that all of them will meet at Bani's hotel in the evening. During the day, take some time out from work. He tells Ranveer to give his entire responsibility to Saahil and take some time off.

I will tell the family u r going out of town for business reasons but u will check it into a small but a decent hotel and I want u working on this. U will co-ordinate everything Ranveer. I am making you the main person here.

Jai continues and says- Rano will help u from time to time. Bani, I, Aditya and Jiggs will be there for you. But none of us can be seen together.

Jai further continues- All will remain the same. Nothing will change. I know it is hard to pretend but just pretend that nothing has changed for now.

Jai tells Bani that Ranveer will drop her to the hotel along with the twins. And he also told her prepare to see a the old Jai Walia back in action.

He smiled and said- I am back and I just want to say this one time it feels great. Also, now they will know what happens when Jai Walia decides to payback. With that he leaves the room.

Seeing Jai come alive was the best thing the family had seen in 7 years. Only thing was going in each of their minds-God !!! Save them!!!

Who think they can mess with Jai Walia and get away and here they had messed with his life, the reason for his existence and above all the one woman Jai Walia loved more than himself- Bani.

Ranveer takes Bani to the hotel with twins. Bani thanks Ranveer for helping her out.

Ranveer tells Bani- There is something I want to talk to you about. It has been on my mind for sometime Bani Mami.

Bani is surprised she says - Tell me what it is Ranveer?

Ranveer looks Bani into her eyes and says- I am sorry for everything I ever did to you. I am sorry for the hurt and humilation I made you go through. Even Ma, is very angry with herself I think she is too embarrassed to even say anything to you.

Ranveer folds his hands and says- I hope someday u can find it in your heart to forgive me for the torment I have put you through. I have already apologized to Rano and now we share a very special bond I hope someday I can also share that kind of bond with you.

Bani is touched by what Ranveer has just said. His heart-felt confession had tears coming from her eyes. She could see that he guilt written on his face.

She came forward and hugs Ranveer and said- You have nothing to apologize for. I have always treated you as my older brother and today I am happy that he has finally accepted me as his sister.

And from today onwards you will call me only Bani not Bani Mami and I will called you Bhai and nothing else.

Ranveer was stunned when Bani hugged him and when she told him to call her Bani and she will call him Bhai. Ranveer was happy because life had a new meaning to him. His eyes were also moist and he just nodded. And then both parted ways without saying anything.

Their silence made them accept their beginning of the new relationship both Ranveer and Bani were happy about it.

Jai Walia got up early in the morning. It was first time in 7 years that he had not touched liqour last night. He had decided if all went well he will never drink in his life again. He needed to think clearly. Clarity was the buzzword for him.

Jai was wearing a black coloured gown. He had not shaved in sometime. He use to leave for office at 10:00am or sometime not go at all.

That all was about to change this morning.

Jai caught himself in the mirror he saw he had not been taking good care of himself. He had no reason to before but now with Bani back in his life and the arrival of his twins life meant completely different for Jai Walia. He takes a electric shaver and shaves his growing beard.

He checks himself in the mirror and touches up where ever he sees little strand of hair in his face.

Once satisfied he takes out a Old Spice after shave gel takes out and splashes it on his face. The smell of the shave gel makes him feel alive.

Jai Walia takes out his suit and matching shirt, culf-lings, tie, shoes, socks and belt. He takes a quick shower and comes out and checks himself in the mirror. He takes the towel and rubs his head and sees his hair is all ruffled up.

Jai picks up the comb and sets his hair.

He then proceeds to wear his clothes and when he is ready with his Armani black suit with nice Hush puppies polished shoes he takes one last look of himself in the mirror and he finds himself to seeing the re-emergence of Jai Walia flashes of his old self.

It has been after such a long time that Jai Walia has taken the time to dress himself. Jai Walia is alive again and he wants the world to know that.

Jai Walia is more confident and one can see in his stride when he is taking the stares to come down this morning.

The Walia family is stunned to see Jai Walia this early in the morning. It is just 8:30am in the morning. Massi, Jiggs, Ranveer, Rano, Pia, Aditya, Saahil, Raashi and last but not the least Tony just are stunned to look at him.

Jai Walia is looking fresh, handsome and one can see that this man has been re-charged or rather has been re-born again.

Jai comes and smiles at Massi and says- Goood Morning Massi how r u?

Massi is like - Fine Jai. U up early?

Jai is like- Ha Massi I am going to the temple.

That one sentence has everyone just look at Jai and wondering what is he talking about. Jai Walia going to temple. The man who did not believe in God or miracle is going to the temple.

Massi is like - Jai u r going to the temple? Dressed like that?

Jai smiles fully knowing Massi cannot believe that Jai is going to the temple. Jai says- Haan Massi, after that I am going to office since I have to chair few meetings.

The second shock of the morning. Jai Walia had never chaired a meeting in the past 7 years. Though he went to office and had private meetings but he had left Aditya take care of the rest.

In the past 7 years Jai has taken a back seat in business and life. That had changed just yesterday.

Jai is like - I am getting late. Aditya see u in the office.

He turns around and says - Ranveer that meeting in Banglore make sure we get the deal. U will be gone for about 2-3 weeks so pack accordingly. I hope u do not mind.

Ranveer smiles and says- No problem Mamaji I will go and ensure that the deal is ours. I will pack and leave right away.

Jai says - Ah!!! of course, I forgot Ranveer I have booked ur ticket business class to Banglore. I have asked the manager to deliver the ticket here. And do keep me appraised. Bye and good luck.

Ranveer said - Thank you Mamaji.

Pia could not believe that Jai Walia had transformed over night. Till yesterday he was a forgotten man and Pia was enjoying everything and he did not indulge with her. But was about to change also.

Jai Walia turned around one more time and said something which know one expected him to say least of all Pia. He said- Pia when I come back this evening lets go out for dinner. It has been sometime since we have spend with each other. So be ready I will have the car pick you up by 8pm. Jai Walia knew what Pia will be thinking.

Jai Walia also knew what needed to be done.

Jai Walia was about to teach her a lesson even after her death she will think twice in her reincarnation not to mess with Jai Walia.

He said to himself - Pia u r going to pay and pay dearly. Just wait and watch by the time I am done with you u will want death but that will not come easily and you will want to live but I will also let you do that. Just wait!!!!

Pia was too stunned to react she just nodded her head and left thinking that what was wrong with Jai Walia?

The morning also brought something new for Bani. She knew that she was wrong about Jai. Just to know that the man she loved and cared for is the same man who was willing to give his life because she thought he wanted to kill her.

Bani decided she will follow Tarun and find out what he is upto. Lately she had noticed that Tarun had not come around to see her. She goes to Doris tells her she will be back after sometime.

Bani takes her car and goes to Tarun's apartment. While reaching she calls the landline number from a nearby PCO to know if Tarun is in the house or not. Tarun picks up the phone after 3 rings but Bani hangs up immediately.

She figures even if he has a caller-id on his phone and tries to trace the number he will come to know that it is a PCO number that way he will not come to know that Bani is calling and hanging on him.

Bani leaves the place immediately not hanging around too long for people to recall her if Tarun comes to check and tries to find out who was trying to call him.

Bani does not have to wait for long. Tarun comes out and sits in his car backs it out of the parking lot takes a right turn and he is on his way to meet someone. Bani is following him in her car.

After driving for sometime Tarun stops at a nearby hotel and waits for someone to come. When Bani sees who has come to sit in Tarun's car her heart misses a beat. She is staring at Jai Walia's duplicate.

They sit in the car and drive away. Bani is now wondering where are they going and keeps following them.

Raashi has left the house and is on her way out. 10 minutes later Jiggs-Aditya follow her to see what she is up to. Both Jiggs-Aditya cannot believe that Raashi was capable of such a thing.
Such a sweet innocent face she was quiet.

She had shown she was scared of Jiggs-Ranveer now it seemed that had only been a part of her gameplan so when she made her move know one can think it will be her.

Jiggs-Aditya once again come to a same deserted building and see Raashi going there and they follow her.

Rano- Ranveer are following Pia and they also come to the same building where they had come before.

Bani, Jiggs-Aditya, Rano-Ranveer all end up in the same place and in their eagerness to get closer they almost collide with each other but thankful to their presence of mind they just have a muffled cry between them.

All of them wonder why they are meeting here? Maybe someone else may come here. And then someone does come and when they look at who it is none of them can believe their eyesight of all the people who could have been a traitor to Jai Walia they see........... and just wonder is there anyone else left in the family to trust since everyone is turning out to Jai Walia's enemy.

All of them think just one thing and that is u can trace a enemy if it is outsider but how do u deal with a enemy when it is one of ur beloved family members. Jai will be in a state of shock when he comes to know about this.

Preview for the Next Part-
The real mastermind is revealed.
Jai-Bani visit temple together
Jai and others meet at Bani's hotel.
Jai excutes his first part of the plan to destroy Pia.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

hey manish what a place to leave the story. i think massi is the mastermind behind the conspiracy. g8 part. please continue soon.

great part 👏 .....
please cont soon......

Twist pe twist....lekin very good ones.....can't wait for destruction of Pia....jaldi se agla part likh do.......

i cant belive you turned taurn into an evil man. i had such i hopes for him. oh well..i guess it will have to jw then.
i love the duplicate part. it reminds of desi movies from the 80's where duplicate roles were considered to be great! hahaha.
great job!
please contiue soon!
dipu00

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yah the old Jw is back
i wonder who did every one saw it can be Sahil but i think its Massi for some reason or tony
can't wait for the suspense to clear

Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-IX

Bani, Jiggs-Aditya, Rano-Ranveer all end up in the same place and in their eagerness to get closer they almost collide with each other but thankful to their presence of mind they just have a muffled cry between them.

All of them wonder why they are meeting here? Maybe someone else may come here. And then someone does come and when they look at who it is none of them can believe their eyesight of all the people who could have been a traitor to Jai Walia they see........... and just wonder is there anyone else left in the family to trust since everyone is turning out to Jai Walia's enemy.

All of them think just one thing and that is u can trace a enemy if it is outsider but how do u deal with a enemy when it is one of ur beloved family members. Jai will be in a state of shock when he comes to know about this.

This person had died a long time back as far as the Walia family was concerned so how can anyone be back from the dead? That too after 18 years. Jai was going to be in state of shock as much they were.

The figure is walking towards the group. The members of the Walia family who are hiding can see that the people waiting for the person seems to be stiffened when the person just walks in.

There is tension among the group.

They do not want to say and what not to say. This person is dangerous and can go to any extent to do damamge control.

The Walia family hiding can see the person clearly they cannot believe the person standing could be evil. So much love shown to Jai and now this. The person staring at the group was none other than Jai's long dead and now suddenly alive Chacha Bhanu Walia.

The man who had done everything to destroy the Walia family was back from the dead and know one even knew that he existed.

He spoke to the group gave them instructions and slapped the JW's duplicate for not doing his job properly and then laid them there next plan and then all of them left. The entire Walia family waited for some more time before all of them left.

All of them decided to go for lunch. All of them discussed the new twist in the tale.

Aditya- What is this man doing here? I thought he was dead.

Jiggs said sadly- Apparently not.

Ranveer said- What is his story?

Aditya-Jiggs together- U do not want to know.

Bani is like- Well, apparently he knows everyone of u so well. I am still trying to think his link to Pia, Tarun and Raashi. How are they connected?

Rano- I cannot believe Pia would do something like this to her own sister. I cannot believe she had the same parents like us di.

Ranveer is like- Now what? Mamaji has to know.

Bani is like-Bhai, u think it is a good idea.

Ranveer is like- Bani it is. And it is the right thing to do.
Bani is like- But Bhai what if......?

Ranveer is like - U think too much.

All seem to be looking at two of them Ranveer calling her "Bani" and Bani calling him "Bhai".

Jiggs tells herself so Ranveer has finally told her what he had in mind. I also have to speak to her. Will do today once we are alone.

They eat lunch in silence and decide to meet at 6 pm in the hotel room.

That evening in Bani's hotel room. Jai was shocked and rooted to hear that his Chacha was back. He was dead and now he is back a lot of things started to get clear in Jai's mind and a plan began to come to his mind.

He told the plan and that stunned everyone. It was a dangerous plan but if it worked it would solve all their problems. He took Bani aside and told her want he intend to do with Pia.
Bani smiled and wished him luck. All she said she wanted to be there when he finished the plan.

Jai promised he would not have it anyway else.

With that Jai leaves for his dinner with Pia.

Ranveer knows Jiggs wants to talk to Bani and asks Aditya and Rano to come and so mom can talk to Bani.

Jiggs comes to Bani- Bani I have been wanting to talk to you for sometime now. Perhaps Ranveer also told you. I know what I did is unpardonable. I feel responsible for your miscarriage had it not been for me and the divorce case u probably would have had three kids than two?

Bani is touched and but does not know how to react. She has tears coming in her eyes. She says- Jiggs Aunty, Why are u saying these things? What happened was not anyone's fault? Bani says she has always treated Jiggs as her mother.

Mother who is angry with her daughter for the reasons unknown. Bani says she will accept her apology if she accepts Bani as her daughter and allows her to call her "Maa"

Jiggs is stunned and touched all she does is hugs Bani and they have a tearful union. Bani in order to lighten the mood says - two kids are enough. These two are just like their dad throwing tantrums at me.

If I had a third one I probably would gone mad and yeah, the fourth one is the worst u know my hubby the most childish of all. 😆

Jiggs and Bani smile and talk about what needs to be done next.

Pia is waiting eagerly for her dinner with Jai Walia. She is about to know what happens when things start to go terribly wrong?

Preview for the Next Part-
Surprise!!!!!
U will be shocked to the core.

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yeh Chachu Bhanu koun yeh? 😕
loved Jigs and Bani part
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