Return to Me- P10,Pg11, Updated!!!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
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Bani everyone knows that you are Bani Walia
I wonder what game plan Jai is going to use 😕 if the Khadoos Jai Walia is back i am so happy 😛
awwwwwww the kids meet their father for the first time 😭
yipee the kids are pushkhar's, so why did Pia and Jai get married? 😕
does puskhar know that the twins are his kids
i hope barnali and roshini don't betray Bani
please write soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
so every1 knows now that Bani is Bani Walia.... or shud i say their Bani.... 😃

aw ow JW wht r u planning huh???? 😉

Bhikmangi teri toh main..... 😡

plzzzzz buddy cont soon...... 😃 its really good.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
OMG...why is bani torturing our hero like that... 😕 😕
great update...cant wait for the next part...
and whats this...jigs and ranveer are good...ok not good but better...wow.. 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
OMG AWESOME cant wait for the next part aww jai met his sons!!!!!!!!! so cute omg u have to update soon it be torture if u take long so hurry!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
what happened to the update....i am waiting... 😕 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-VI
It is Sunday, the twins are getting ready to go and have a day full of fun with their mother Bani.

Bani decides to take them to a mall and buy them some new clothes, have lunch take them for a new children's movie and basically spend some quality time with her kids.

Bani and the twins are having a great time at the mall. Bani buys ice-cream for both of them and both are playing around while they are playing with the ice-cream Bani is busy paying for the ice-cream she does not see that her twins bump into none other than Jai Walia.

Both twins while fighting with their ice-cream accidentally spill both their ice-cream on Jai Walia who had bend down to tie his shoe-laces. Jai just cannot take his eyes from the twins.

Bani turns around and sees Jai Walia with her twins and she is stunned and cannot do anything to rectify the situation and she watches the twins helplessly.

Bani tries to hide and see if the Jai has left so she can take twins far away from him. But the opposite happens as one of the twins sees her and runs to her calling- Mama, Mama, Mama,

Bani has no choice but to turn and hug her son. In doing so Jai sees they are Bani's twins. He cannot hide his surprise. Jai could not believe this woman had twins. Where were they the night I had dinner with her? Probably she sent them away. Was she trying to hide from me? Why?

The questions did not seem to leave Jai Walia's mind. This woman Bani was a enigma to him. A jigsaw puzzle one he intended to solve soon but was not getting anywhere. He had to do something. He was lost in his thoughts until one of the twins caught him and asked him to buy another ice-cream.

Jai Walia smiled for the first time in a long time. Both twins came running demanding ice-cream and Jai could not refuse these sweet cute twins. Jai seemed attracted towards them and he had no idea why?

Bani saw Jai Walia smile and time froze for her. There was time she would give her life to see him smile. How much she wanted to scream on the top of her lungs and tell him that they were his flesh and blood.

The twins had such similar features as Jai Walia. With time people will come to know that they were Jai Walia's kids as nothing could deny that and Bani knew this only too well.

Jai bought the twins the second round of ice-creams. But their deamnd seem to rise this time they wanted chocolates.

Jai is like - Later guys.
Twins in unison- Now

The fight kept going on until Bani came and told the boys not to be rude to uncle. She loathed herself for calling Jai Walia their uncle.

A part of her kept telling her he is their father and will always remain so whether u like it or not.

Jai to Bani- That is not a problem.
Bani to Jai - No. U have been too kind. Pls do not spoil them.
But Jai had already left to buy them chocolates. And gave them a whole packet to each. The twins were over the moon. And they kissed Jai on his cheeks. And Jai was stunned and Bani had tears in her eyes.

She wished she could cherish this moment for her twins.

Just then Doris came from nowhere and took the twins away not before they hugged Jai one more time.

Jai came to Bani and said- Lovely kids. U r lucky u have such good looking children.

Bani to Jai- Thanks. I will see u around Mr. Walia.

Bani was about to leave when Jai caught her hand. The touch of Jai Walia even after so many years send a electric jolt all over her body.

Bani turned around and saw herself staring into Jai Walia's eyes.

Jai said- I do not know whether I should tell u this or not but I will say it anyways. When ur twins kissed and hugged me a part of still believes like they were my own kids. Silly I know.

Bani was speechless and took a little longer to answer and said- U know we all feel our childhood in our kids. Perhaps u saw and believed that they were ur children.

Jai to Bani- Perhaps u r right.

And then they get caught in a moment before Bani makes a excuse of getting late and leaves.

Jai smiles to himself and says even today your eyes cannot lie to me Bani. U have changed ur face, ur style but u could not change ur heart. I know ur my Bani. The one who disappeared 7 years ago. And Bani thanks for letting me I have twins from you.

Jai smiled and said to himself once again that u can run, ignore me but u cannot hide from me Bani. I will find out what u r upto? And I promise Bani u will confide to me in the next 48 hours. I have my Bani back.

U have to return to Me. Return to Me.

Bani cannot believe Jai Walia said that she is too stunned to think anything else and hopes he will not think about her. But she knows Jai Walia she knows she took longer to answer and could not hide her surprise when Jai said those words. Jai Walia will now do anything to find out who she is?

Bani smiled to herself exactly what I want him to do. She tells the same thing u have to return to me Jai and only to me Jai Walia.

Since Rano has met Bani she has been keeping tabs on Pia on a regular basis. When Pia all of a sudden walks out one afternoon without telling anyone Rano along with Ranveer follow her.

Ranveer tails her car and keeps a safe distance last thing he wants is to let Pia know that she wants to be followed. Ranveer tells Rano to call Bani Mami and tell her that they are following Pia.

Rano calls Bani and tells her exactly what Ranveer has told her. Bani tells them to be careful and let her know what she is upto.

The car stops at a deserted building where the construction had stopped sometime back. Pia gets out of the car and walks to the building and there is a person standing and waiting for her.

Ranveer and Rano have left their car and are following Pia on foot. When they see the person who Pia is meeting they are shocked because it is none other than........

Preview for Next Part-
The mysterious person's identity.
Jai brings twins to the Walia House.
Jai plans get the desired result.
Bani confides in Jai Walia.
Jai-Bani now vow to know the real truth together.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish
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Posted: 18 years ago
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g8 part. please continue soon. i just want to know who is the mysterious person. my guesses: massi, aditya, or TONY
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
great part manish
keep it up 👏
and upload ur siggy on tinypic
u will have better view
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
YIPPEE!!!!! they'll be together soon.... 👏

awesome buddy..... 😃

plzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz plzzzz cont soon.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
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I think that person is Pushkhar, or its Tony
I like how they told themselves that the one will have to return to them
I can't wait for them to reunite
the twins are demanding just like their father
loved how Jai send that her eyes can't lie even though her face has been changed 😳
please do continue soon

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