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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
Hope its Tony or Roshni .............Continue soon..............
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG that was awsome update.....i enjoyed reading and i am daing to read next part....👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
ooooo woww awesome cant wait for the next part!!!! plz plz update soon!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
haila...jai knows... 😲
what will bani do now...
update soon...cant wait for more...
hope bani spills the beans soon
and who is thsi mystery person...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh God this ff is mindblowing!!!!! 👏 I luv it!!! Hurry up now with the next part!!! Can't wait!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-VII
The car stops at a deserted building where the construction had stopped sometime back. Pia gets out of the car and walks to the building and there is a person standing and waiting for her.

Ranveer and Rano have left their car and are following Pia on foot. When they see the person who Pia is meeting they are shocked because it is none other than Jai Walia himself.

Since the building is situated in a way where only rays of sun is coming and both Ranveer and Rano are stunned to see Jai Walia hugging Pia.

Ranveer tells Rano this is not possible as he just left office and Jai was sitting in his cabin. He calls Aditya and tells him to come out and speak in private.

Then Ranveer relays what he is seeing and this stuns Aditya as he almost drops his mobile as he is staring at Jai walia infront of him having a meeting with some important bankers.

He tells this to Ranveer and Ranveer is more confused than ever. He tells Rano what Adtiya has just told him and even Rano is aghast as to how is that possible.

Just as they are trying to think this through both Rano and Ranveer look a third person coming from the shadows and when they look who it is the world slips through both their feet.

The person that they are staring is none other than Tarun Sablok. The man who is the guide and philospher of Bani. The best friend of Jai Walia is the culprit of the story.

This was getting interested. But it did not end there.
There was more to come as Tarun seems to be pointing at a fourth person coming to see them. And this time when Ranveer-Rano see who it is they look at each other with their jaws drop it is none other than Raashi.

This was getting more complicated. Raashi seems to be telling them something and they were listening to them. They tried to argue but Raashi would have none of it. It seemed clear that Raashi was the mastermind behind Bani's death. Ranveer and Rano slowly slip out of there and get to their car.

They both push the car till they have reached a safe distance before they turn the ignition on so as nobody comes to know that they now know who the players are?

Jai Walia knows that the woman is his Bani. Those eyes will never lie. He said to himself Bani u should have had ur eyes transplanted then probably I would have fallen for your lie. But u still cannot lie to me even today.

He knows Bani has gone for a meeting at the Walia Group of Industries she is meeting with Aditya. That means he can go and get the twins at the Walia House and he just does that. He goes to the hotel and picks the twins inspite of the protest by Doris their nanny.

Jai tells her to tell Bani to come and get twins from the Walia House tell her that their father Jai Walia took them and he takes them away.

Bani is in the middle of the meeting when Doris calls her. She sees Doris's mobile number and excuses herself comes out and picks up her call thinking maybe the twins are in trouble or something. Doris will not call unless it was an emergency. Nothing could prepare Bani to the news that Doris gave her.

Doris told her that the twins father Jai Walia came and took them to Walia House and asked Bani to pick them from there. Bani tells her not to worry and she will take care of it.

Jai Walia's action had completely shocked Bani she could not believe that Jai Walia had recognized her but how? It was not possible. Yet the twins had gone with their father.

Jai Walia brings the twins to the Walia House. Massi sees the kids and asks Jai whose kids are these? Jai tells her these are Bani's kids. Massi is shocked. Pia is giving Jai dirty looks like how dare he. But one look from Jai Walia and Pia leaves the living room and retreats to her room.

Rano and Ranveer are shocked to see Jai with his own kids. Both thinking does Jai know the truth? Jiggs is sweet with the kids.

Raashi keeps staring them and cannot believe that Jai brought these kids here. She has to come up with her next plan and soon. Otherwise all her hardwork and deception will be left to ashes.

The twins are enjoying the attention they are getting and run around the house playing and Jai seems to be catching them. The twins decide to play hide and seek with Jai and Jai is fine. The twins tell Jai to close his eyes and count till ten and then search for them.

All the family members are elated to see Jai in such a playful mood. The Jai Walia standing in front of them is a transformed one from the Jai Walia they are use to seeing sad and keeps to himself. He is aloof. If anyone saw Jai Walia right now he would not believe if someone told them that Jai Walia was a serious person. Jai cheats by putting his hand in front of his eyes but slowly opens his fingers to see where twins are going.

Then Jai finishes his count to ten. And shouts here I come. He is like where are u? And sees one hiding behind the couch that Massi and Dadi are sitting and catches him. He keeps looking for the other one and he is like where is he. And finds him hiding behind the pillar with Ranveer-Rano as his cover and catches him also.

The twins tell him he cheated and Jai is like I never cheat. Twins are like ok. One more game. Jai is like anything ready to accept their challenge. They say blindman's bluff. Jai is what is that?

The twins are u don't know that? they point at Jai and laugh and Jai is like u tell me first. they ask for a hankerchief or any cloth which cannot been see through and then Ranveer ties the cloth on Jai's eyes and leaves them to catch the twins. Actually twins involve Jiggs, Ranveer, Rano, Massi and Dadi. Raashi leaves saying she has something to do.

They quickly remove all the furniture and began to play everyone spreads around and Jai is in the middle. The twins are enjoying them. They keep disappearing behind the elders. Jai catches Jiggs, Ranveer and others but never the twins.
He now is hearing their voices and goes and catches another person he is about to leave but the smell tells him that it is none other than Bani.

Jai decides to have some fun. He catches Bani by the waist and pulls her closer to him and whispers in her ears that he wants to talk to her alone. He knows that she is his Bani.

Bani is stiffened by what Jai tells Bani and then takes off his fold and takes her hand and walks away in their room leaving everyone gaping and wondering what this is all about? Ranveer-Rano are dead sure Jai knows the truth but how? They have to tell Jai-Bani what they saw today and decide to follow them.

Jai takes her into his study and tells her why she is doing this? What did he ever do to her? Can't she see the love in his eyes? Can't she see that they belong together? And that he loves her so much.

Bani looks at his eyes and says where was all this love when he slept with Pia? Where was all the love when he betrayed her in Dubai? And where was all the love when he tried to kill her?

The last statement hits Jai right where it was meant in his heart. Jai pulls Bani close and says- U think I can kill you. U believe that. What makes u say that? U tell me u have any proof for saying this?

Bani tells him she saw him laughing and hugging Pia where she left to die in the burning car? Jai justs stands there rooted to his place Jai cannot believe Bani has accused him of murder?

Jai's anger goes full tone. Jai says what r u? Mad in the head. U think I can ever hurt u? U think I will kill u? If u think that then I have nothing to say except this

And he moves to the desk which is laying in the corner for the room. He goes and pulls his drawer open takes out a revolver and puts in on his side temple and says Bani goodbye.

Bani stunned that Jai wants to shoot himself. Bani runs and snatches the gun and throws it away. She embraces him strongly and apologizes to him. She knows that Jai can never hurt her but at the sametime cannot forget what she saw.

Just when this was happening Ranveer-Rano enter the study and Jai is startled to see them but Bani is not and asks them what they found out?

But Jai stops them. Jai tells Bani first to tell her story and Bani recounts her tale and with every narration the eyes of Jai Walia have nothing but tears in them but at the sametime Jai eyes also have anger and hunger for the person who put Bani through this.

Just then Jiggs and Aditya also come.

Bani futher tells them that barring him everyone knows who she is and Jai smiles and say well at least that has not changed I am always the last one to know.

Bani smirks at him.

Rano-Ranveer start telling them what they saw. Know one can believe what they are saying it is not possible. But Raashi and Tarun. Jai's duplicate and Pia. God!!! now what????

Jai has nothing but pure venom in his eyes already everyone can see the re-emergence of the old Jai Walia. Jai Walia along with Bani vows to find out the truth and with that all of them what should be their next plan of action.

Preview for the Next Part-
Transformation in Jai Walia stuns everyone.
Jiggs-Aditya follow Raashi.
Rano-Ranveer follow Pia.
Bani tracks Tarun.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish


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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
The story is getting very interesting now..... Can't wait to see what happens next and the emergence of a new JAI wow... You've woven a beautiful storyline.... 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
very nice suspense revealed....not one of those where u can guess the actual story b4 it happens...love it...waiting for the next prt.
damn i still cant believe tarun....damnn...good shock
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
man this ff is really getting interesting.... duplicate of JW.... woooh... & Raashi is behind all these but Y????? 😕

plzzzz plzzzz buddy cont soon... cant wait to c wht do they do nxt???? 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
only one thing to say do update soon.........i am dying to read next part........ 👏

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