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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG...Wowwwwwwwwwww.. I just love the Evil Bani....yet sensitive...... 👏 i am dieing to read next part...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-IV
Jai Walia stood there and kept looking at Bani while Tony went to get the lemon tea for her. Jai Walia and the Walia family were stunned at this woman. She had guts.
Aditya saw that Bani kept shifting away from his gaze while she saw Jai-Pia with such hatred and venom in those eyes but also saw a remarkable change when those very eyes shifted to Massi, Dadi, Raashi, Rano, Sahil and him. She gave the stern look to Jiggs and Ranveer.

Aditya had a feeling she is the real Bani. He had to find out because he knew one thing this woman knows things know one but either a enemy or a friend would know.

But now was the time to observe it was imperative that Bani does not find out that Aditya suspects her to be the real deal.

But Bani had another ace up her sleeve she said to the Walia family she has a friend visiting here hope they do not mind.

Just as she finished two people entered the Walia House and seeing them Jai was left numb and dumbstruck. The entire Walia family just stood up and could not believe that these people were Bani's friend. Seeing their reaction like this Bani knew that her friends had arrived and she turned and hugged both of them.

And then once Bani hugged them then she said to Jai- Mr. Walia meet my business partners- Barnali and Roshni. Oh!!! I am sorry, I guess u know them!!!!


Rano was shocked she could not believe that Bani was friends with two people that Walia House despised so much but then Rano knew her Bani Di was not the same sweet Bani she was a hardcore business woman with one goal the total destruction of Jai Walia, Pia and the Walia Empire. She will speak to Di about this later.

Bani spoke with Barnali and Roshni for sometime and they decided to meet for dinner she asked Barnali to bring her son along since she had not met for such a long time.

She then got up and looked and said to everyone she wanted to use the washroom. She did not ask them where she it was she got and went leaving the Walia family completely confused.

With the ease with which Bani moved along the Walia House send chills down the Walia family spine as they could not believe that Bani seem to know every nook and corner of the Walia House.

Who is this woman? And what is her motive?

Jiggs and Ranveer had a very uneasy feeling about this woman. Jiggs knew she had to find out who she is? Jiggs hated Bani to the core but always wanted Bani out of Jai Bhaiya's life but was devastated when Bani died because somewhere Jiggs realized that Bani had become a source of her living. Jiggs never liked Pia. She preferred Bani over Pia anyday.

With time Jiggs and Ranveer attitude towards Rano and Raashi had changed. Jiggs was now close to Rano and Raashi she loathed Pia and she still could not believe how she could do this to of all the people Bani her own sister who had suffered such ordeal and pain to make Pia happy in the first place.

Jiggs and Jai had not spoken to each other in 7 years when the truth about the alimony and divorce came out it was too late Bani had left Jai Walia's life forever and Jai had never forgiven Jiggs for that.

Bani goes around the house and comes back to the Walia House she reminds Jai for tomorrow's meeting and walks out of Walia House.

Bani leaves the Walia House and goes to her hotel. She recounts her experience at the Walia House she felt as if Aditya Uncle could see through her. She also had seen soft, caring eyes of Jiggs-Ranveer had they changed? Bani was uncertain anymore how she felt?

She was lost in her thoughts when the twins came and hugged her as if all her worries flew away. They use to always fight and tell that mommy loved him than the other. Bani started to play with them.

The twins were like she is cheating and started hitting Bani with a pillow and very soon all of them started having the pillow fight. Bani and her twins were standing on the bed and knocking the hell out of each other and her laugh was contagious.

Tarun had been observing her for such a long time it was very rare that Bani was ever happy and it was always nice to see her smile because she looked like an angel when she smiled.

The twins saw Tarun and were like Tarun uncle mommy is cheating and asked if he was their side or mommy side. And Tarun is like I don't know and the twins started to tickle Tarun they use to enjoy that and Tarun was like trying to save himself but just could not.

And in the end decided to give up and said he was on twins side and they were like now you are talking.

The rest of the evening passed nicely where Bani got to spend sometime with her twins.

The next morning Jai-Bani come face to face for a business meeting where Bani wants to understand if Walia Group of Industries is good enough to handle a international project. She ridicules the Walia Industry and Jai defends his company and work ethics. Bani is like ethics from you Mr. Walia is like asking a chameleon not change its colour?

That shut Jai Walia up for now.

Aditya was impressed with the way Bani conducted the meeting she was in-charge she was the boss. Aditya smiled and walked away from Bani.

Bani continued to get on Jai Walia's nerves and Jai had a hard time to understand what was happening?

Finally, Bani asked Jai to meet at her hotel room for a busines discussion and dinner.

She ensured that the twins were nowhere in sight. Last thing she wanted the twins to meet their father Jai Walia. Jai would recognize them as the similiarity between the sons and the father was uncanny.

Jai reached the hotel on time and went to Bani's room. There he saw Bani was ready for the meeting.
Jai decided to talk business with her and she kept talking about how to take the project to the next level.

While discussing the project they kept stealing glances at each other and Jai Walia was getting uncomfortable here.

Bani could feel the tension in the air decided time had come to tell Jai Walia the truth.

Just as she was about to reveal herself to Jai just then someone knocked the door of her hotel room and she went to open it and saw that the concierge had brought an envelope with her name written on it.

Bani thanked and tipped the concierge and then proceeded to open the envelope. What she saw took the colour out of her face. The envelope contained a letter and photographs of Bani's plastic surgery.
The letter said-
Someone knows ur little secret,
Want to know who?,
If you tell Jai Walia,
Then he will die just like you,
U came back from the dead,
He will not be so lucky,
As for ur twins,
Lets just take one step at a time,
Reveal yourself,
And People around you will die,
Want to see Rano die?
For now keep quiet,
Let Jai live his life.
And by the Enjoy!!!!!!!

Someone else knew Bani's real identity. Bani decided to tell Jai Walia anyway. This was not the Bani who will get scared from someone trying to play jokes with her. But twins and Rano were her weakness she decided to keep quiet and find out who it is?

Preview for Next Part-
Barnali,Roshni, Bani and Rano meet for lunch.
Bani reveals her relationship with Barnali & Roshni
Aditya confronts Bani and she breaks down.
Jiggs-Ranveer-Bani join hands to destroy Pia.
Barnali-Roshni give clues as to who could have send the letter.
Jai accidentally meets the twins and Bani watches helplessly.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish


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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
great part..... 👏
i wish he would know soon...
Hurry up....post the next part soon.... 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
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interesting, spooky, suspense thriller, i like it
wow Bani is business partner with Barnali and Roshini
i wonder who can said that message to Bani 😕 dost ya dushman
poor Jai
i am glad that Ranveer and Jigs changes, i can't wait until they join hands to destroy Pia 😡
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
A mystery letter!
Great fun on Halloween!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
what a mystery letter and kaun bhayja? who is her enemy? Aditya?? Pia ko toh pata nahin hai, nah? Ya tarun? maybe he loves bani and does not want to loose her to jai? So many possibilities yaar? can't wait for the continuation. 👏 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
mystery letter????? 😕 is it Bhikmangi whose doing all this stuffs???? 😡
if its her then i'll break her legs.....

owww i wanted to ask u sth... let me ask b4 i forget..... so JW has two kids from Bhikmangi also???? 😕

Poor Bani... but i am sure the way she's changed she'll help herself out.... 👏 👏 👏

plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz cont soont..... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
OMG...i getting more and more hooked every time...
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cant wait for the next update... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
really unique! great ff so far!
JW is no longer worthy of bani. i think she should just forget about him...look at him, he married pia after his wife/her sister died? had kids? i think she would be much happier with tarun. he gave up his friend just for her....without any conditions! tarun rocks..they should be together...this whole JW thing isn't working anymore...

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great job! please do continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-V
Bani decides not to tell Jai Walia anything for now until she found and unmask the face who new the identity of her new face.

The rest of the meeting with Jai Walia went well. Bani played the hardcore business woman to the point where Jai Walia was becoming visibly uncomfortable with this woman.

Bani ordered dinner through Room Service. She had previously ordered all of Jai Walia's favorite and was about to shock Jai Walia once more.

The room service came and Bani asked the server to set-up the food at the dining table. Which the server did after that she signed the bill to her room and left him 20% tip over the bill.

The server was very happy and Bani asked his name as she told him she will personally compliment the GM about his service and professionalism.

The server was very happy and left with a huge smile.
This was going to go a long way.

She will use this man again when the time was ripe to strike again.

Jai Walia and Bani Dixit sat for dinner and Jai Walia was once again spooked to find his favorite vegetables, dal, pulao even the dessert Gajar Halwa. Jai did not know how to react and was intensely looking at Bani. A part of him was alaramed.

She knew too many things about him and he had no clue about her.

Jai knew one thing her every move so far had been very calculated. So his move had to match her move. Jai Walia kept quiet and tried to decipher the woman in front of him and something in him said that this woman was his Bani.

Bani on her part kept Jai Walia at bay. She wanted him too be spooked and scared out of wits. The more miserable he will get the more calmer she will feel. This is what she thought it would be.

But today also, a part of her wanted to hold the man who she never stopped loving but could no longer come back in his life comewhat may.

The dinner was quiet and Jai Walia left Bani's room and returned to Walia House. That night Jai kept drinking even more than usual as he could not get Bani out of his head. He kept thinking about her body movements, her actions, her glances and her reactions.

There was something so similar about her yet he could not point his fingers on something concrete. But we was definitely interested. After such a long time Jai Walia was feeling alive again, somwhere in him his heart again started to accelerate exactly like it did when Bani was around him and Jai Walia made a decision and he was about to find out that not every decision u make works against you some work in favour of you.

Jai Walia knew exactly how to find out the real identity of the woman claiming to be Bani Dixit yet not Bani Walia. Jai said to himself you can run Bani but u cannot hide from me.

He decided time was ripe to get his plan into gear. Jai will keep the drunk act because this way nobody will suspect what he was about to venture out to do. Jai smiled and looked in the mirror and a grin appeared on his face.

Jai Walia had been born again and this time know one will have a chance to know what he is upto. With that in mind he dialed a number and began to speak to a person that he had not called in the last 7 years.

Rano got a call from Bani to meet her for lunch. Rano agreed and said she will be there.

Rano met Bani in her room at the hotel. The lunch had been ordered from the room service. Rano walked and hugged Bani. Bani brought her to the living room of the hotel suite where she had two more guests- Barnali and Roshni.

Bani told Rano that she had invited them so she could let know how my enemies became my best friends and my own became my enemies.

Bani tells Rano that it was Barnali and Roshni who had saved her life. They were the ones to call Pushkar and tell what had happened to Bani. It was when they came to know what Jai Walia and Pia did to me that Barnali came and told me that she will support me and transform me into a business tycoon. For the world Bani Walia had died so know one will be searching for her. I took advantage of the death that I faked and then Barnali took me to USA.

Bani continued- Roshni came into the picture much later she hated me and I hated her. But now the only factor common for hate among us was one man- Jai Walia and that is when we decided to work together as now know one will ever suspect that all of us were together.

Bani continued- That is how I know them. For me Rano, they are my friends now. They pulled me through a period of turmoil when my own left me to die. It is time that Jai Walia and his new wife Pia Walia pay for it.

Rano heard everything and then said the same thing that Jai Walia could not do something like this but Bani just did not want to listen to this. Even Roshni and Barnali asked Rano to tell them what she had told Bani and when Rano told them about the mental condition of Jai Walia and the repeated suicide attempts even they looked a little concerned.

Roshni and Barnali told Bani that she should take every step intelligently and soon the win will be hers. They said they will be in touch and will call later for the dinner plans. Bani bids them goodbye.

There is something that has been disturbing Bani for a long time and she decides to ask Rano, she cannot ask Rano this question otherwise it will show her concern towards Jai Walia and more so her jealousy.

Bani tells Rano that she cannot forgive Jai Walia and Pia as she lost their first baby because she was trying to save Jai Walia and then she pawned their mothers bangles for that sinster sister so she could have kids again and what did she do she had kids with Jai Walia her husband from the past.

Rano cannot help but grin that her Di can put and change her face as many times as she wants but she cannot change her heart because Rano knew it beats and will always beat for Jai Walia.

She knew that her Di was jealous and she decided to play along with this it was time she had some fun with her Di after all she knew her Di wanted a reply of that as a big "NO".

Rano is like why u want to know about Pia to hell with her and Jai Walia I mean after they caused so much pain to you how can u even worry about them?

Bani is like about to loose her temper but controls it and tells Rano that she has to know because she wants to know who far the betrayal of her husband and her own sister went.

This time Rano saw the rage and said fine if u really want to know. They are not Jai Walia's kids they are Pushkar's kids and when the entire Jai-Pia ONS came into light Pushkar left Pia at that time Pia was pregnant and she also like u had twins but a boy and a girl.

Bani is like fine. Rano is like I have to leave before someone things where I have disappeared to and I will have a difficult time to explain things to anyone. She hugs Bani and leaves.

After sometime there is a knock on Bani's door and Bani opens and is stunned to see none other than Aditya on the door. She asks him to come inside and walks away to the living room.

Aditya says he has come to talk to her.

Bani is like- About what?

Aditya is like - About why are u doing this?

Bani is like - I am doing what?

Aditya is like- U think Bani I am going to sit here and play 20 questions with you.

Bani is like- I do not know what r u talking about Aditya Uncle?

As soon as the word "Uncle" slipped from Bani's mouth she knew she had missed the trick now she was screwed.

Aditya got up and said- Why are u calling me "Uncle" I am stranger to u?

Bani does not reply because anything she says will go against her.

But Aditya being Aditya is rentleless and keeps talking to her and keeps repeating himself until Bani's defences begin to curdle up and soon she breaks down crying in his arms.

Bani tells Aditya what happened and Aditya cannot believe it. He tells her he look into it. She also tells him Rano knows about her identity. Aditya says nothing but says one thing she is wrong about Jai Walia but he will let her figure this one out.

He tells Bani that he was, is and will always be with her but also cautions her that in the game of hate and revenge he hopes she does not go that far that when she finds out that Jai is not guilty of what she thinks he is that all roads to return back to her love and her life Jai Walia closes on her.

With that Aditya leaves making Bani ponder on the last statement of his. She again gets conflicted.

Jiggs and Ranveer have been thinking about this woman named Bani. And decide to meet her.

Bani is again talking and contemplating her next move when there is a knock on her door and this time the wind brought two people who Bani hated the most and who hated Bani the most - Jigayasa and Ranveer walk into Bani's room.

They enter the living room of her suite. Bani is pretty surprised seeing them. It seems the entire Walia family has decided to grace her with their presence.

Bani asks them- What brings u here?

Jiggs says - U ofcourse!!!!

Bani is like- What is that suppose to mean?

Ranveer says - It is suppose to mean that we want to know what u want?

Bani is like - I want to destroy Pia and Jai Walia and that is my goal.

Jiggs-Ranveer look at smile at each other.

Jiggs is like- Looks like we can help each other out.

Bani is like - How? and more importantly why should I believe u?

Jiggs is like- I hate Pia and I will do anything to get her out of Walia House. And secondly, we can tell u things which u may not know about Pia.

Bani is like - Why do u think I need ur help at all?

Ranveer is like- Well, I think we will make a great team and things will go well if we join hands.

Bani is like - Fine I will join hands but u will have to promise me u will help me destroy Jai Walia also.

Jiggs and Ranveer look at each other and says- I will not destory Mamaji, he has already suffered a lot. Let him live in peace. As it is he has never been able to get over ur death Bani Mami.

Bani is shocked and stunned and looks at them the word "Mami" had the desired effect.

Jiggs and Ranveer tell her that they heard Rano-Aditya talk about Bani and came to know u were the our Bani.

This leaves Bani even more stunned "OUR" from the mouths of Jiggs-Ranveer and they tell her that when they confronted Rano-Aditya they told them what Pia did to u and Jiggs-Ranveer said that they were shocked to know this.

Bani does not say anything but they shake hands to destroy Pia completely.

That late night Barnali and Roshni come for dinner and Bani shows them the mysterious letter and both Barnali and Roshni ponder who could it be and then something strucks both Barnali and Roshni and they tell Bani that leaves Bani speechless. And then Bani with the help of Barnali and Roshni decides to see if her fears are true or not.

It is Sunday, the twins are getting ready to go and have a day full of fun with their mother Bani.

Bani decides to take them to a mall and buy them some new clothes, have lunch take them for a new children's movie and basically spend some quality time with her kids.

Bani and the twins are having a great time at the mall. Bani buys ice-cream for both of them and both are playing around while they are playing with the ice-cream Bani is busy paying for the ice-cream she does not see that her twins bump into none other than Jai Walia.

Both twins while fighting with their ice-cream accidentally spill both their ice-cream on Jai Walia who had bend down to tie his shoe-laces. Jai just cannot take his eyes from the twins.

Bani turns around and sees Jai Walia with her twins and she is stunned and cannot do anything to rectify the situation and she watches the twins helplessly.

Preview for the Next Part-
Jai comes to know that twins are Bani's son!!!
Jai-Bani get caught up in a moment!!!!
Rano follows Pia and is stunned to find who she meets!!!

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish


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