FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 44

Originally posted by: shish

Bas little time more, then you will be back home.

Anyway rest as much as you can here. Once back home and "Bani and Krishna" are together, then where and what rest.?? Life will be pleasantly busy.

thanks shish .... i really hope it is only a little time more before i can go back home.

this "bani" really wants to go home to be with her "Krishnaa", u have no idea how desperate i am (acutally u do). Am really looking forward to being busy ....... not the usual kind, but u know what 😃. thanks for everything dear, u have been a real angel in disguise for me.

Originally posted by: nibbles

Does not drink, smoke, gamble and is faithful............hmm...........I'm sure I can find someone like that Sabs!😉

Last two parts were awesome.........How can Bani think about divorcing Jai?!!!............he's just to😳

when u do find one ....... let me know, i'd like one for myself too 😆

as for bani and her thinking ......... no comments, some things are best left unsaid.

Originally posted by: Cordelia

EXCELLENT PART SABSJ!! you've ripped Jai and Bani from Kasamh Se and so neatly patch-worked them into a world of your own, i often forget that they are the jai and bani we see on tv!! 👏

i'm wondering what that question is now... i have an inkling but i shall wait for you to divulge.... 😛 😉

thanks guruji, i can't stand the jai and bani on KS of late, so the last thing i am gonna do is waste my time trying to redeem them ........ what i can and will do instead, is portray them as i would prefer ........ sabs style and not ekta style.

so was your inkling about the question right?

Originally posted by: Vedo

aww Sabs! part 11 was totally awesome!!
👏
lol! he tucked the $20 in her bra! 😆 😆
Jai's surprise was soo sweet! 😳 😳
loved the humor of the day as always! 😉
plzz continue soon! 😊

thanks vedo ......... loved the tucking part too, just could not resist it 😆 i could picture it so clearly in my mind, had to put it down ........

jai basically is a very sweet guy, but our madam is extremely short on patience ........ bechara kya karega.

next part coming up soon

Originally posted by: inavars

me first 😛 WOW👏

thanks dear, it is very encouraging when u get such positive feedback as soon as you make a post ........ makes all the effort really worthwhile.

That was AMAZING Sabs!! Loved the dialogues between them...I feel a little sorry for Bani...but Jai...he's stealing my heart away😳wait...he already did😆 (This is our secret...if you find THIS jai...not just any Jai...THIS jai from your FF...send him to me...I'll marry him😳...forget about Bani...I'll stop working and stare at his gorgeous face everyday😳..okay I'm done drooling!)

d'ont feel sorry for bani ........ and this jai ........ yes sure dear, when i find him, he will be all yours, as I have mine with me.

But seriously hun...you make them both SO REALL!!!! LOVE IT!!...can't wait for the next update😃

i tend to become my characters when writing, i guess that is what makes it real 😕

loved the humor😆

me too ........ am happy to make u smile

u should add 4 more...and you can officially publish it as the 50 things women do to drive men crazy😆

better yet...just add 4 more "cry" and it'll be perfect😉👏

😆 😆 no wonder our species ka naam itna badnaam hai

Originally posted by: sabsj

thanks rani, i know how happy u r at my recovery, that is why i adore u so much. 🤗

am happy u liked the last 3 parts ...... next time don't be away for so long, so u won't miss out on much. No Subzi, I sadly need to be VERY inactive for two weeks now😭 as I have gotten a HUGE project which is city-wide😃 and I only have two weeks to prepare!😲 Are the teachers crazy or what? But I am happy I got selected among so many.😊 Lots of people are jealous though.🤢

u r right, love is not an easy road ....... some turbuluence is required to keep it real. Absolutely. i was near tears after reading those parts as they were so realistic. The words spoke volumes about the feelings they felt.

thanks for the compliments dear, have seen a lot of everything good and bad in life, that is why am able to relate to it as realistically as possible. We all have, but few of us are talented enough to express that in words and write so well.👏

go ahead and save the quotes for future use ....... why should i mind, what is mine is urs (leaving hubby out 😆)......... sharing sharing Arre yaar! Your hubby is probably old enough to be my uncle/dad.😆 I just wish Bani would think in the same way you do.😆

will be posting an update soon. I am going to read it and then scamper off to research for my project.

take care and keep smiling.......subzi Same to you di

Originally posted by: Cordelia

😆 😆 😆 can't argue with that!! 🤗

u better not

Originally posted by: kav~

wow sabs its great!!!

and the humour of the day is sooo funny, it makes me laugh everytime(:

hey btw do you have the links to ur previous FFs i wanna read them (:

hey kav, am glad u are laughing ........... have sent the ff links to u, do read and let me know what u think.

Originally posted by: sabsj

poo don't cry my dear ........ sabar karo, sabar ka phal meetha hota hain ....... don't worry chance hi chance milega, afterall its a walia trademark ......... they don't give up so easily 😊

yes Walia trademark to hai...we never give up so easily...😊...

I just read the latest part...loved it...

one review.... on its way.... 😳

Poo