FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 4

hai.. meri sabsj di..

what a ff!! thank u for inviting me to romanceland.. by the way i want
first
class travel to and fro! 😳

well the 2 parts were superb!! loved the character of jai.. stud! but damn
sexii as well! 😛

plz do continue!!

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btw i hope there is no pia in this ff! 😡

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very nice start
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Originally posted by: sabsj

hi inavars, welcome to romanceland ....... i write as much as time permits me to .......... gurumaya ......... dekho yeh aapke baare mein kya bol raha hain 😆 have posted chapter 2, enjoy it.

i heard that!!! 😛

now i'm going to go to a corner and 😭

Originally posted by: sabsj

Dhak Dhak karne laga, oh mera jiya jalne laga .........

😆 😆 😆 image of Bani in the wet gold sari running round in a barn!!! 😆

LOVED this part hun - bani playing hard to get!! 👏 now all Jai needs to do is change out of those jeans in into a sexy black tux for their date!! 😳 😉

😳 WOW.
I can already tell that this ff will be amazing....nice and intense 😳 😃 .
I can already feel the passion... 😳
Jai is being a badmash.... 😆 , but come on how can Bani refuse him and those deep intense eyes... 😳 .
Yaar love the way you write...meri author 😃
First date already huh...hmmm...Banis eyes should pop out seing Jai in a tux! (Hopefully...unless he decides to dress casual...but i think whatever he wears she'll still burn 😉 )
Awesome part...now do tell part three kahan hai?
Yaar you are so sweet....meri liye likha 🤗
I am touched 😳
Continue soon...love the indirect passion and intesnity 😳
Luv ya
Sweetu

Sab dear im a regular passenger in your flight 😉 you see i get a wonderful and amazing journey from the captain and the attendent in your airway.And im so pleased with this one as well 😛 😳

What can i say read the two chapters and went into my dream world(no hun its about JB only 😉)love at first sight,interesting 😳 waiting....

Originally posted by: inavars

wow!! that was AMAZING 👏 👏 👏 love jai 😳 so bold 😉

thanks inavars, yeh jai bada hi bindaas banda hain. doesn't waste any time in wooing Bani 😆

Originally posted by: ziddi

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halia someone knows how to impress girl and ask them out, he is fast
wow bani i also didn't know that you can read the label upside down
Sabs i falling in love with this Jai Walia 😳
I wonder what will he look like in a cowboys outfit
plz write soon 😃

hi ziddi, this jai of ours is a sher, he knows he is the king of the jungle and does not think twice before approaching his prey 😆 sirf naam ka king nahin hain ........ kaam ka bhi hain.

bani bechari, kya karegi, this is just too much for her to handle, not that she is complaining.

as for jai in a cowboy outfit, girl don't even go there, that is one fantasy i am never gonna be able to get over, and believe me hot is an understatement 😆

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

woowowoww Sabsj !! u leave me stunned again with taht writing of urs !! amazaing !!! how do u manage to do that ?!
and the way u portray jai is simplyy amazingg !!! wooww 😳 😳 andd he surelyy knowss to impress a girl ! looollz
and d i soo dint knww that bani can read labelss upsidee down....looollzz 😆 will be looking forward to read the next part !! ahhem ahheem ..their dinner date !! 😉 😳 thnksx hun !! will be waiting eagerlii fro ur next uppdatee !! ..and i really lovee the well selected quotess u use !! 😃
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thanks dear, what can i say, apna jai hai hi aisi inspiring cheez, makes my mind go boom boom boom 😆 bada outspoken hain, he gets what he wants, isn't that why we fell in love with jai walia's character in the first place. arre dinner date toh sirf suggestion tha, ab bahut time hain before the ice maiden finally gives in. i am glad u like the quotes i use, i just love doing that, my update seems incomplete unless i quote something.

Originally posted by: lonely14

Meri jaan another lovely update!!!!! 👏👏👏 I think i should give you hugs on a daily basis, so that i get my updates quickly don't ya think??? 😉 awwwwww how cute were they?

awww my baby put the necklace on her, how i would die to be in bani's place right now(like you didn't know that already 😆). heheh the pick up lines were cute. lol.

dhak dhak karne laga??? haila haven't heard that song in a while, now i wanna listen to it. 😳 Can't wait for another one. Amazing as usual sabs(after all you are my baby too 😆) Shina

hai hai main mar jaava, meri toh jaan hi nikal di tumhare comments ne ............. i need daily inspiration u see, otherwise i suffer from writers block 😆

ur baby is too chaloo, likes to get all touchy feely, wants to ensure bani knows what she is missing 😆 chalo for a moment, let's pretend it was u instead of bani ........

i saw the dhak dhak song on zee music this morning, while writing, i don't know, i just could not resist adding it 😆 i was laughing trying to picture jb on the dhak dhak song, it was so damn hilarious.

now i have to figure out how baby gets icequeen to meltdown quickly 😆 wish me luck and pray that i remain inspired