FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 5

Well Well Well..looks like everyone has decided to spring a pleasant surprise...yesterday it was sangs with her ff and 2day its u !! wow....am one happy creature this week ...let KS go whichever route it wants to...as far as am concerned i seem to be more enjoying whatever is happening in ffland as at least things are more under control there !

Diff start btw...and once again am at a loss trying to figure out which way it will go ! and settings are so diff....well looking forward to read the next parts...

Swathi

ps: btw i did post a reply to the msg as u had asked me in the pm. know it was late.but better late than never I guess !!!

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

hai.. meri sabsj di..

what a ff!! thank u for inviting me to romanceland.. by the way i want
first class travel to and fro! 😳

well the 2 parts were superb!! loved the character of jai.. stud! but damn
sexii as well! 😛 plz do continue!!

😉 btw i hope there is no pia in this ff! 😡

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hi dear, how could i forget u, u are one of my frequent flyers, tumhara haq banta hain. and of course first class travel on this flight only, no economy or business 😆 Captain Jai and Flight attendant Bani refused to take off without u on board.

and no peabrains are allowed on my flight ........ she falls under the hazardous category and is "strictly prohibited on flight".

Originally posted by: stonex

very nice start
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👏 👏 👏

thanks stonex

Originally posted by: Cordelia

i heard that!!! 😛

now i'm going to go to a corner and 😭

arre guruji, main hoon na, why fear when sabby is near ........ main usse dekh loongi

hey sabjs good to see you back with such greatness
this fanfic is strting off great please continue i luv eyour stuff and
uff jai bhi na you really knowhow to make hime mor eirressistable than before if tah is at all possible

so the cowboy is very good at breaking codes.. 😳
Awsome part... 👏 👏
bechaari bani...can't seem to hold her self together around him 😆 ....not that I blame her.... 😳
Saphire Pendant.... 😳 😳 😳 ...haaaaiiii.... kaash wahan main hoti,,, 😳
He doesn't wanna waste ant time...very straight forward and direct.... 😳


"Sometimes you put walls up not to keep people out, but to see who cares enough to break them down."

THIS WAS JUST BEAUTIFUL 👏

Poo
PS:I saw the Sabsj airline welcome...well u have this passenger on board... 😊

Originally posted by: Cordelia

😆 😆 😆 image of Bani in the wet gold sari running round in a barn!!! 😆

LOVED this part hun - bani playing hard to get!! 👏 now all Jai needs to do is change out of those jeans in into a sexy black tux for their date!! 😳 😉

i nearly fell off my chair laughing trying to picture jb in the dhak dhak song 😆 bani our ice maiden, will melt, not to worry, this jai is just too much for her to handle not that she does not want to, but still women ......... they always play hard to get 😆

Originally posted by: sweetu144

😳 WOW.
I can already tell that this ff will be amazing....nice and intense 😳 😃 .
I can already feel the passion... 😳 Jai is being a badmash.... 😆 , but come on how can Bani refuse him and those deep intense eyes... 😳 .
Yaar love the way you write...meri author 😃
First date already huh...hmmm...Banis eyes should pop out seing Jai in a tux! (Hopefully...unless he decides to dress casual...but i think whatever he wears she'll still burn 😉 ) Awesome part...now do tell part three kahan hai? Yaar you are so sweet....meri liye likha 🤗
I am touched 😳 Continue soon...love the indirect passion and intesnity 😳 Luv ya Sweetu

good good feel the passion, there is a lot more coming ur way. Jai is a stud no. 1 and Bani is just playing hard to get. Kya karegi bechari, no one ever gave her so much bhao before 😆 so she is trying her best, lekin pighal rahi hain. oy oy ..... there was only mention of a date, don't assume it is gonna happen ...........

part three should be up by tomm, unless my fingers give way before that.

Originally posted by: pondy

Sab dear im a regular passenger in your flight 😉 you see i get a wonderful and amazing journey from the captain and the attendent in your airway.And im so pleased with this one as well 😛 😳

What can i say read the two chapters and went into my dream world(no hun its about JB only 😉)love at first sight,interesting 😳 waiting....

hi there, long time since i heard from u. welcome aboard and enjoy your flight. Captain Walia sure knows how to keep his frequent flyers entertained. He makes sure no one gets over him ......... 😆 competition bada sakht hain

wow sabsj ur fanfics are always unique and excellent

fabulous parts 👏 with awesome unique story

do continue it soon very soon 😃