FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Vedo

wow another one!! yayyyy!!! 👏
I'm gonna read it asap! 😉

hey vedo ..... yayyyyyyy, ur reading this ff of mine too, great 😃 i hope u enjoy reading it as much as i am enjoying writing it.

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Haila.... 😳 Mujhe lagta hai ki tumhara and horses ka...kai janmo ka rishta hai... 😉 .... One of these days I'll start wanting a cowboy or rancher myself... 😳

She gave him a long, appraising look, and he met her eyes without blinking. Her immediate impression was of thick, dark hair and wide, brown eyes.kya baat hai... first look par ye haal hai...to aage kya hoga... 😳 😳 😳

"You can close your eyes to the things you do not want to see, but you cannot close your heart to the things you do not want to feel."

👏 It was beautiful....Loved it Poo

PS: the beginning sounded like a flight attendant... it was sooo cute... 😃

haila poo, u know me na, i have this weakness for cowboys 😆 no worry pal, hum dono nikal padenge ek din, tumhare liye cowboy dhoondne ... maybe we can go to Texas like Bani did in my last ff .😆

bani bechari to gayi, can't blame her na, hum to jai ko tv pe dekh kar mar mite hain, woh toh sakshat uske saame khada hai ....... woh bhi jeans mein ........ kya karegi bani

chalo dekhte hain ki aage aage hota hai kya.

btw, after reading ur comment on the flight attendant, i changed the beginning, padh lena 😆 Welcome aboard Sabsj Airways 😆

👏
halia someone knows how to impress girl and ask them out, he is fast
wow bani i also didn't know that you can read the label upside down
Sabs i falling in love with this Jai Walia 😳
I wonder what will he look like in a cowboys outfit
plz write soon 😃

woowowoww Sabsj !! u leave me stunned again with taht writing of urs !! amazaing !!! how do u manage to do that ?!
and the way u portray jai is simplyy amazingg !!! wooww 😳 😳 andd he surelyy knowss to impress a girl ! looollz
and d i soo dint knww that bani can read labelss upsidee down....looollzz 😆
will be looking forward to read the next part !! ahhem ahheem ..their dinner date !! 😉 😳
thnksx hun !! will be waiting eagerlii fro ur next uppdatee !! ..and i really lovee the well selected quotess u use !! 😃
👏

Originally posted by: angel n

Very very interesting angle on the lovebirds. very well written as well. - i guess with the western theme Jai had to be unshaven - but i love RK/JW clean shaven - personal bias - pls continue

thank u angel n. once in a while, a ragged look can surely do wonders to a guy like jw. but don't worry, ur personal choice has been noted, will keep that in mind for the future. 😆

Originally posted by: Cordelia

first a big MWAH!!! for starting a new ff!! thanks for the heads up sweetie!! 🤗

uffff kya image hai!! 😳 sexy JW drinking away in jeans and tee, casually lounging watching our bani dearest... continue soon cheliji, hame aap se bahut umeede hain!! 😉

gurumaya, thanks for the MWAH ....... sab aap hi ki kripa hain. hum aapka aur aapke umeedo ka puri tarah se khayal rakehnge.

Meri jaan another lovely update!!!!! 👏👏👏

I think i should give you hugs on a daily basis, so that i get my updates quickly don't ya think??? 😉

awwwwww how cute were they?

awww my baby put the necklace on her, how i would die to be in bani's place right now(like you didn't know that already 😆).

heheh the pick up lines were cute. lol.

dhak dhak karne laga??? haila haven't heard that song in a while, now i wanna listen to it. 😳

Can't wait for another one.

Amazing as usual sabs(after all you are my baby too 😆)

Shina

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

A big cuddlyy huggy 🤗 forr u to strat another fanifc !!
the first part was absolutely amazingg !!!! u r just simplyy fab at writingg !! i am soo amazedd !! nad left gaping ta the screen !!! simplyy woowoww !!!!
i cud soo imagine jai ..with those jeans and tee !! and bani gettin all attracted towards him !! awww ! 😉
thnksxxx hun !!!
plzz cont soon ! will be waitingg eagerlyy !!!
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thanks for the hug dear ........ well had i known i was gonna get these many hugs, I would have written 10 ff's by now. am glad u liked the starting. have posted chapter 2, hope u enjoy that too.

Originally posted by: Tazmanian_Devil

yay another one!!
ur gonna spoil me one day!
Ohh a rugged jai with his intense stares 😳
i can just imagine him standing there uff, ok ive stopped drooling now! 😆
brilliant start plz continue soon

Luv Taz

hey taz ............... see i told u i will write one soon, i took your not so subtle hint after all 😆 rugged jai and his killer looks, what a deadly combination na ......... well i haven't stopped drooling.

Originally posted by: inavars

wow hun!! that was AMAZING 👏 👏 it felt like i was reading a real novel 😳

please please write long parts unlike some people *cough* cordy *cough* lol 😆

hi inavars, welcome to romanceland ....... i write as much as time permits me to .......... gurumaya ......... dekho yeh aapke baare mein kya bol raha hain 😆 have posted chapter 2, enjoy it.