Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178

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Miss_Diey

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Posted: 18 years ago

#211

OMG i believe that i'm dying cause of laugh. Your ff is simply amazing, fantastic, wonderful. It's really a great job. I read all the parts of your ff in the way of university ( i print all your part) i was smiling and people look at me as if i was crazy. 😆 😆 😆 But please update soon. I can't wait to read another scene btw Jai and Bani 😆 😆 😆

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Jazmin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#212

😆
OMG...that was hialrious...i so needed that...priceless scene...kinda like the one in kuch kuch hota hai w/ SRK...hun cant wait for the next update...great job...still rolling on the floor... 😆

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Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#213

😆 yeah we all dream of seeing jai like that someday..... 😉

Part 19

All day Saturday Jai got caught up from one meeting to the other and he didn't realise what the time is when his stomach started to grunt…he had not eaten anything all day and it was around 8pm…….looking at his watch….oh well that's it……leaving the office

At home Masi and everyone else were planning Jai's birthday ……he was going to be the big 30 and Masi wanted it to be a glamorous occasion…….every member of the household was to do something in their own way…

Masi: areh Bani beta woh likha nah……
Bani: ha masi sabhi hogeya…..looking at the door ….it was 8 pm and no sign of him…uff kaam hai ki musibat……itni der
Masi: areh bani kya hua….
Bani: nahi masi kuch bhi toh nahi
Rano: looking at the door and than her siser laughing: aareh masi kuch kuch hota hai
Dadi: areh Rano mere paas hai chale……
Rano: nahi Dadi meh toh theek hu…shayad Bani Di ko dhekna hai….
Bani: chup warne aaj phir pitegi….

Just than Jai entered the house…..

Everyone looking at him started to laugh

Dadi: areh Jai putar tu theek toh hai na
Jai: ha kiu masi…loosening his tie look on Bani…who was busy doing something with her pen on the paper not looking at him…a smile playing on her lips at the mrngs happenings
Dadi: nahi sure kar rahi hu ki subha ki tarah kuch bhool toh nahi geya….
Jai: dadi aap bhi….

Everyone laughing….
Jai: masi bhouth bhook lagi hai…subha se kuch nahi khaya….
Masi: munna yeh kya baath hui…din bhar khali pet khaya……mad at him…..maine soch liya…ab teri haath pile kardu…..

Jai's gaze moving to Bani's….as if by some inner thoughts…..Bani not looking but her ears like a prowling cat listening to the conversation……

Dadi; ha putar…koi toh aye teri kheyal rhakne ke liye
Rano; buddy tumhe kaise larki chahiye….
Jai: looking at BAni…mujhe
Masi: ha beta bata….toh hum tere liye ladki khoje……

Jai: thinking …mujhe nah….jo salwar kameez….churi…bindi…..Bani going red and smiling…….waisi ladki na bilkul nahi chahiye….

Dadi: kya???? Even Masi shocked????
Masi: toh kaisi munna

Bani's face fell as if someone slapped her…….but meh kiu pareshan horahi hu….: masi mujhe under kuch kaam hai

Masi: areh beta baitho shayad thumari college meh koi ho…ha munnna……

Jai: meri dream girl toh barish meh bheegti hai...naachti hai….Bani stopped doing what she was doing

Rano: hmmmmmmm

Jai: joh dhal aur puri khati hai…..woh bhi jab uska dil kare…

Bani's ears turning realy red…..yeh kya keh rahe hai

Jai: joh jaab baateh kare toh un baato meh kho jaye……looking at bAni….

Masi smiling…….: acha….beta aur…..

Jai: jisko dekte hi din bhar ki thakan door hojaye…..aur jaab who muskuraye toh ….

Dadi: ai hi Jai putar tu toh mera Shah Rukh Khan nikla…..toh kya???
Jai: toh aisa lage ki badal garajne wale hai aur barish hogi…..

Jai smiling and looking at Bani who was red as her salwar she was wearing …….she didn't know who he was talking about but for some reason she knew…..

Bani got up and left….quietly without anyone noticing but Jai

Masi: aab hum aisi larki kaha khoje tere liye….
Jai; aap ne poocha maine kehdi Masi…..jaab mile toh kehdena……Happy hunting …winking at Masi and leaving to change…..

Bani leaned on the hallway breathing…...kya yeh sach hai...sapna toh nahi.....as she opened her eyes she got the shock of her life seeing Jai right infront of her

Jai: tum kiu chali ai…
Bani: woh…mijhe trying to move but couldn't
Jai: tumhe looking at her lips….
Bani: licking her lips…mujhe kuch kaam hai
Jai: maine tumhe thanks nahi kaha
Bani: jee
Jai: smiling …he loved it when she did that…..for sewing my buttons….in the mrng….
Bani smiling at that thought of him in his towel and than getting all red again thinking it…
Jai: notiched the expression…..tumne mujhe kaha kiu nahi
Bani: looking up her hands on the walls now…he was too close….: kya
Jai: ki maine towel pheni hai
BAni; meh ….woh….smiling…aap ….meh…..
Jai: when will u talk to me properly miss BAni Dixit……
Bani: meh…..aisi toh koi baath nahi
Jai: so what u think of my choice of girl
Bani: looking down…..woh…meh…..achi hai
Jai: achi hai nah…..kisiko janti ho tum
Bani: meh….looking at him
Jai; one eyebrow up…tum????? Looking at her up and down
Bani: nahi mera matlaab woh nahi tha…meh woh …..aapko apni birthday par kya chahiye…
Jai: hmmmmm thinking
Bani: looking away trying to get away from him……..

Pia:Di???/ Di??? Coming down the hallway from the other side…..

Jai held Bani in his arms and hid from her view…thank God Pia didn't come this way but went down the stairs…..

Bani in Jai's arms her heart beating a 1000 beats…….her chain entangled in his shirt button……getting back but not able to….

Jai: thairo……taking out the chain and putting it back…touching her chin and cheeks……Bani meh….

Bani: mujeh jana ha….she couldn't take it no more….he was making her dizzy…his smell his whole being was too much for Bani to handle…..

Jai moving back…he didn't want to scare her…..he had to take each step as it comes….: mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai…..slowly softly......

Bani: moving forward not turning…:kya???her heart beating ...he steps shaky

Jai: nahi abhi nahi…looking at her back….baadth meh…..aur ha….gift kaal zarur batau ga!!! With that he went in his room….

Bani turning slowly her heart beating ….smile on her lips looking at where he just was seconds ago….

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya

Jai went in his room and smiled….taking his tie out he stood at the door to the balcony and smiled…….

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin

Shayad media ne theek kaha tha…I have found my dreamgirl smiling he hit the shower!!!

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Bani walked across the hallway to the rooftop…….slowly carefully…..not realy looking where she was going

Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se

Smiling she sat on the steps and put her head back….smiling ….can it be she thought…aisa ho sakta hai…kya mujhe…….?????...woh mujhe.....not able to adjust to what her heart was saying!

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar

hope u loved it...dekte hai...aage hota kya hai??? 😉

Edited by Raania - 18 years ago

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#214

halia , that was so cute, sweet and romantic😳
the way he describe Bani, reminded me of SRK😳
Both are in love, i hope Rano tells Massi that its bani, and I hope Rano guessed that its her sis
awwwwwwwwww he is being so caring about Bani's feeling and gentlmen that he is taking it slowly
please write part 20 today can't wait to read what he ask for i have a feeling its somehting to do with the sari

Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#215

maar dala im gonna go sit in a corner and blush till i pass out.. could u plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post part 20 today.. im anxiously as u can see.. waitin to see wat d gift is gonna be 😉 cuz dude.. haye rammmmmmmmmm 👏

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: ziddi
i am saving my spot

that is CHEATINGGGGGGGG.. i was first

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91118

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Posted: 18 years ago

#217

OMG!! just read the last two parts...amazing 👏 👏 👏

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal
that is CHEATINGGGGGGGG.. i was first

everything is fair 😆
ok baba you were first
just don't go to the motw thread, until i log off

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NaV

@SIKinLoVE

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Posted: 18 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: ziddi

everything is fair 😆ok baba you were firstjust don't go to the motw thread, until i log off

y not?? aye mamta can u help me blackmail raania.. i wanna read part 20 TODAY!! im too anxious now.. i can't wait till tomorrow

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Miss_Diey

@Miss_Diey

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Posted: 18 years ago

#220

Bani you're in love 😆
Raania, you know wat you can post 2 parts if you want 😆 😆 . i'm so addicted to your ff. Please update soon can't wait birthday parties. I guess we will see a slow dance part btw jai and Bani 😛

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