Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys

yet again i thought of another fanfic for our J&B...thanks to your encouraging words i get motivation....

This is the intro...do read and let me know what u think and if you would like to continue.

Introduction:

The three sisters sat worried and confused and didn't now what had happened…..Due to a plane crash incident their parents and their dads business partner had died….but only the eldest had come to terms with the fact….being the eldest out of the three sisters life hadn't been easy for Bani….a fragile 15 year old with her suitcase stood in this big mansion of a house that belonged to their uncle's son….Mr Sidharth Walia had been business partners with Mr Dixit in many of the business ventures….the only family the three sisters had was their parents……Banis mum's side of the family had cut ties with her when she had married Nishikant and thus they never knew them…..and their father never had any relatives….

It was raining and Bani was soaking wet when the other two were busy helping themselves to the cup of hot chocolate offered by the butler….

Bani looked around…..she didn't know what to expect…..very hesitantly she was told by wakil uncle that mamma and papa were no more and sid uncle was in the intensive care fighting for life…

According to Nishikant Dixit if something should happen to him and his wife than the soul responsibility of the 3 girls would go to Mr Sidharth Walia……and Mr Sidharth Walia having so much love and affection for the three girls had agreed to it whole heartedly sighning the papers…

Now Nishikant was no more and Sidharth Walia was fighting for his life and death…..

A young yet married lady came from the far side….

"papa bhi nah kaise kaise log ko ghar meh aane dete hai..in aanartho ko aab dhekna pade ga"

Taunted Jigyasa….who herself had a son not much older to Bani's age …followed by another son of Bani's age and a girl of the middle sisters age….

Bani looked up with her teary face now scared of this woman….Pia the middle sister a year younger than Bani replied back…"hum koi ananrth nahi hai…hamari baba abhi ayege aur humko lejaye ge…waise bhi hum toh sidharth uncle ke ghar me hai…aap kaun ho???"

Bani shushed him while the youngest Rano came to her sisters side and hugged her….she was merely 12.

The lady was none other than Sigharth's older and only daughter Jigyasa…..before jigs could say anything an older but very hubbly character came back from Jigyasa and said

"oi Jigyasa tum bacho pe bhi bigar padi….kaab sudro gi"….a mad jigyasa cursing "lo inki kami thi" left

Dadi: areh putar aao na…tum toh bheeg gayi ho…..kapre badal lo…mera kamra waha hai…..

Bani went in while the lovely Dadi looked after feeding Pia and a scared Rano…..on her way Bani collided with a 17 year old….Jigs son ofcoz Ranveer

Ranveer: dek kar nahi chal sakti…

Bani: quietly sorry…and ran to Dadi's room

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Jai Waila was involved in a major merger and was informed that his father was involved in a serious plane accident while returning from Bankok…and as admitted to the Mumbai hospital fighting his last breath….Jai had left everything and fled to see his dad…he was everythin he had…mum was no more and Dad was the only thing left of him…his elder sister was never there……A 25 year old…very young and handsome…just had entered the business world some few years back…confident ….self centred walked into the hospital room…knealing infront of his father…

Jai: dad

Sid: Jai…beta…guess this is it

Jai: no dad…I will make sure nothing happens..i have called the best doctors dad

Sid: nahi beta…im done….par mere jane se phele I have to say something to you

Jai: kaho na dad……he was in a emotional state but not crying…Jai was too strong for that…

Sid: mere partner ….Dixit sahaab…


Jai; ha dad joh aapke shipping sector meh partner the…

Sid: ha beta woh aur uski patni nahi bache…..magar maine wada kiya tha apne dost se ke meh uski bachi ko…..samaluga beta….he was having difficulty breathing….woh mere responsibility hai beta…..not being able to breathe……mere baadth tum..tum holding Jai's hands……tum apne papa ka yeh wada nibhao ge nah beta….unka is duniya meh aur koi nahi hai…..

Jo badi hai…who bhouth hi samajdahr hai….apne umar se kuch zayada….woh samjhe gi kya hua hai……karo ge na beta

Jai: in a very emotional state…ha dad….i will…I promise…

Sid: kabhi unko shikayad ka moka maat dena beta…..Dixit mera bhouth hi acha dost tha aur yeh ek walia ka wada hai……ghar ka aur business ka kheyal rhakna…Ranveer, Sahil aur Anu ka bhi…Jigs ko samalna……with that he took his last breath and left….

Jai while doing his dads chita…remembered all the happenings the past week….

He met the 3 girls very briefly not really looking at them..but only talking to them…they were to go to chandigar to stay with Masi upon Masi's request and study there till they are old enough to go to college and will continue in Mumbai….Masi was more than happy to have 3 daughters to her…….Bani had been scared of Jai's sight and had not dared to look up to him…Jai had thought …such a frail young girl she is…so less confidence…..th girls were packed off to Chandigar to Masi much to Jigyasa's happiness….the Dixit Shipping entity was to come under the Walias and looked upon till the eldest of the three had turned 21 and would be turned as the soul keeper till she learned to handle the business well and it would be handed over to them…Aditya was the incharge of that……

Jai came back to reality and realised that his dad had put a lot of responsibility on his shoulder and at a younger age he had a lot to achieve….Jai Walia from this day had become the more serious man from the rich hunk he used to be.

His current girlfriend Roshni Chopra had left him to go on doing her modeling assignments in Europe and America and had given priority to her career than her personal life….hence this made Jai bitter towards commitment and love…..Jai Walia engrossed himself into work …..and only work

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hope u like it so far....😳

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Dazzling Diva thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool introooo...cant waitt for the resttt 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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whoaaaaaaa so bani along wit pia and rano r in chandigarh wit masi.. and when bani's 21.. they'll bac in mumbai.. so when bani's 21.. jai should be 31.. cuz he's 25 and she's 15.. hmmmmmm.. and roshni left him to do modeling.. hmmmm.. jigs is still a 😆.. and bani and jai's fathers were business buddies..so bani ain't really "poor"...cool..can't wait fo d nxt part.. that was gr88888..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW Raania!!!! 👏👏

Loved it!!

Plz, plz continue!!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
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😛 Oh my...you are spoling us...but hey i am so not complaining!
I am so happy that oyu started a new one!
Can't wiat till the next part...and JB scenes 😉 !
I love the way you write!
Do hope that you will continue soon..
Wonder what jais thoughts will be about seeing Bani!
Continue soon.
Luv ya
Sweetu.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sounds like a great fanfic please please continue!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 haila bani 15 and jai 25 awww

awesome starting dear 👏
plzzz post the next part soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love it please continue 👏 ......!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it's wonderful but could you pack pia off to america as well like pronto!!!!!!! 😆 😆 you know before she become's a handful for bani 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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girl girl OMG ur just amazing 👏 !!!!this one is 4r u ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
ur writting two and third one already crept ur mind!!! the way u write,ur narration is simply superb i think u should consider writting seriously.....
i just love to read ur other two stories and at times feel dy are miles away 4rm the KS.
The early two jst rock and this one is like going to break every thing.cant wait!!!
keep goin!!!!waiting 4r ur nxt updates.

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