Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178

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slowcheetah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#201

thanks for the part. can imagine howembarassing she must be feeling and facing the girls again. more tomorrow? 👏

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Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#202

Hiiiiiiiii Rammm...i have never recieved so many PM's ......lol 😆 feels so good though 😳 ...thank you guys 😛 and dont worry i will update all my fanfics in time 😆 ......jst to keep u out of ur miseries here is a short sweet funny update...enjoy while i make some masala ones....

love you all and thank you 😳 .....

PS: oh my presentation went pretty good...my bosses said i was in a very jovial mood and mentally i thanked all of you coz it was of this forum and ofcz coz Pia got a slap hehehehehe 😉

Part 18....enjoy 😳 😳 😳

Masi: areh Bani beta badi hi jaldi agai…??
Bani: running and hugging masi….aareh masi aap believe nahi karogi..?
Masi: laughing while Bani spun her around….kya hua??
Bani: he came to school…can u believe it….apne BMW me college meh aye…mujhe dhoond ne…and than …oh my God Masi I was so embarrassed …sara college mujhe ghur raha tha…..and than he took me to lunch just coz I missed breakfast…..khadoos ache bhi hosakte hai…..laughing…

Masi: slapping her lightly…chup mere munna ko agar khadoos kaha toh…

Bani: sory sory…..running up the stairs to her room….turning around and shouting…masi

Masi looking up: kya

Bani: woh khadoos hai…..laughing she ran in her room

Masi: hmmm toh yeh baath hai Masi pondering to herself…..mera munna itna bada hogeya hai….aur samajdhar bhi……smiling going to the kitchen

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All throughout Friday night it rained….early Saturday morning Bani woke up to the beautiful drumbeats of the rain on the balcony……she loved it….opening her curtains and pushing the sliding door open she watched as the sky cried out its heart pouring its life away…….next on the other side of the wall Jai woke up too…..hearing the same music to his ears…..lazily lying on the bed looking outside he thought of Bani and rain…how she loved rain and how much he loved rain now just cos she felt that way for it…closing his eyes the song in his head….chuk dhum dhum chak dhum dhum and bani dancing with all those kids….he smiled……Getting up …puttng the covers aside he sat on the side……getting up and going to his side of the sliding door…opening it up looking outside…..beautiful……toofani mausam tha aur Jai ko beautiful lagraha hai……

Brushing his hair to the side he thought of the meeting he had today and grunting made his way to the shower……he didn't want to go to work today…last Saturday was so much better…..if only!!! Kher chalo Jai …u have to win this contract……

Bani coming out of her shower brushing her wet hair almost done when she heard shouting……wow someone is in a bad mood today!!!

Jai: Masi ???? Masi???? Didi????Didi

Bani wondering wht happened to him…why is he shouting…..finish brushing her hair she went out in the hallway….nobody but the door to his room was open

Jai: Tonyyyyyyyyyyyyy???? Jigs Didi….Masi…anyone??????

Masi: looking at Bani from downstairs…..: areh Bani beta dek zara kiu gala phar raha hai…meh mandir meh hu….pooja karahi hu….aur aaj Saturday hai toh saabhi sorahe hai….

Bani: meh masi??? Her eyes popping out….

Masi: ha beta …tu ja…nahi toh …..

Bani swallowing hard..: yeh masi bhi na…meh aur is mood meh khadoos ke pas….jane kya hua…

Hesitantly she entered the room……near the bed was Jai standing trying to buttom his shirt up……light purple in colour…..a towel on his waist and socks on his legs…the most funny sight….Bani couldtn believe her eyes. ..yeh toh adhe nange hai….turning to leave before she heard his voice…

Jai: masi dheko na…yeh button nikal geya aur yeh hai hi nahi and I am getting late…I have a very important meeting in hour and a half…..i have to …looking up…

Bani turning not looking …: woh…

A smile playing on Jai's lips…..: what a pleasant surprise Miss Dixit …gdmrng…..
Bani: looking sideways….gdmrng….
Jai: masi
Bani: masi pooja aur saab sorahe hai
Jai: dheko nah…yeh button and im late and im afraid I don't do this….pointing the needle and thread to her….with both hands….hair all ruffled not combed and eyes playing with her…

Bani: undecided: aap doosra shirt…..

Jai: im already dressed BAni and im late to change into anything else….will u please help me…thanking his buttons in his head….

Smiling so cutely at her…

But BAni didn't look…damn he was in a towel….his bottom of the leg showing and looking so funny in those socks…..Bani walked up not looking at him…taking the thread she wet it with her tongue and that put the dhaga in the needle…uff Jai thought licking his mouth..no Jia no….…..taking the button from Jai's hands …Jai smiling and looking down at her delicate frame……she smelt so good…..morning shower and hair not dried……touching her hands while she took the buttons….

Taking his that exposed his inside vest he wore……..which didn't cover much since he was a big guy…..trying not to smell his cologne or his peppermint breath blowing on her……she focused her look on the button……it wasn't easy standing away so Jai moved a bit closer his wet towel touching her knee…..

BAni: hey bhagwan meh faint na hojau??? Looked like Jai forgot his towel state……..sewing the button her gaze not moving anywhere but the task at hand…it seemed to be the worlds most important task for her…aur kiu na ho jab concentration itna hard ho……the first button done she moved forward to bite it….Jai cringed inwards…his stomach doing a summersault……Bani felt it and froze for a second and than continued with the second button……1 2 3 breathe Bani breathe button toh hai….

As Bani finished the second one which was right on top at the neck she had to tip toe to cut it……Jai enjoying it lifting his neck up…….

Masi walked in with the most astonished look on her face: Munna tum kiu…. stopping….Jai and Bani both turned to look at her…..Bani on her tip toes…and Jai his neck lifting up….Bani quickly done taking a distance from jai….

Masi: folding her hands…oh toh isiliye chilarahe the….thank you Bani beta…tum nahi hoti toh kya hota???sir par ghar uthaleta yeh ladka…….smiling a bit……

Jai a bit uncormfortable too…..well feeling sheepish…buttoning his shirt and doing his tie….going upto the dresser busy doing his hair and than turning back….: well Masi I have a busy day I really need to rush….mere joote……

Bani: couldn't help smiled…..and looked down: Masi meh nasta

Masi laughing out loud…: ha beta Jai ke liye nasta taiyar karde looking at Bani……Tony finish karta hi hoga …..

And than turning to Jai

Masi :munna toh taiyar ho….?? Suppressing a laugh
Jai: ha masi…making a confusing look on his face
Masi: acha toh neeche milte hai…joote Tony se saaf karwaya hai kaal..neeche aja…..

Jai not clicking to him about his towel made his way to breakfast…Tony surprised looking at him….: kya…nasta …
Tony: suppressing a smile yet not hinting it…..Bani madam neh lagadi hai sir….table par….
Jai: phele Bani..phir Masi and than now Tony…whats up with this people…….as he made his way to the table…Bani so the towel again and looking down…..a bit shy a bit smiling

Bani: woh…aap

Jai: smiling yes Bani…puling his chair when Masi also walked in…laughing…as Jai was about to sit down he noticed the towel he was wearing…..looking up at Bani who was trying hard not to laugh a bit embarrassed too…..feeling stupid…..

Jai: getting up quickly….backtracking his steps…woh meh…umm..i will go…um..i will be back……turning back running up the stairs….colliding into Aditya……who gave Jai a surprising look……

Masi and Bani burst out laughing…….they just couldn't control it…soon joined by Aditya ……

15 minutes later all dressed up Jai made his way down…..: ahhem meh office meh nasta karluga….see u in the afternoon not really looking at anyone….

BAni not looking at him but eating her toast smiling….and Masi and Aditya laughing

Adi: Jai…dhekna aaj kuch aur na bhuljao….

Jai: making his way fast outside…embarrassed and than smiling…no wonder Bani was looking so flushed….hmmmm he thought putting his laptop bag and files in the car…not bad at all Mr Walia….

Walking into the conference room of the Walia's with a smile…..: yes gentleman shall we begin????
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TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#203

that was awesome.......jai cracked me up 😆 .....lolz in a towel 😆 😆 ....to guuuuudddd.....i luv the sewing the button scene 😳 ....massi cracks me up too....she knows everything....and she always teases them 😛 😛 😃 ........i can't stop blusing 😳 😳 ....plz plz cont soon raania....i wanna see wht happens nxt...ooohhh before i forget....bani talks soo much...but hardly breaths when jai is around....I LUV THE AKWARDNESS.....it makes me smile 😃 keep it up 👏 👏 👏

luv
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Edited by TINK - 18 years ago

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lonely14

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Posted: 18 years ago

#204

Now that's something i would want to see!!!!!!

hahahah reminded me of that srk scene in kuch kuch hota hai. lol couldn't stop laughing!!!!!!

haila now i am in my dream land imagining jai in a towel 😳

That was amazing!!!!!!

Shina

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#205

OMG Jai almost going into the office wearing a towel😆
Did he wanted to have a line of girls fainting by seeing him in that state

Bechari Bani, she must be laughing😆
I bet when she sees him she will burst out laughing each time and maybe Jai can tickle her😉or hold her hand and tell her not to laugh where they can stare
Bani sewing Jai's shirt button cute😳
I wonder what will Massi do,she should tease her Munna by saying that Bani has grown big and they should think of finding a rhista for her and to see her reaction and vice versa, or she should tell him that they have found a girl for him to see his reaction😉😆
Please write soon can't wait for the birthday

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NaV

@SIKinLoVE

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Posted: 18 years ago

#206

oh god.. omggggggggggggggggg.. that was halarious.. i was laughin like crazy.. cute scene btw.. button sewing after a favorite when it comes to jb 😉 .. luveddddddddddd it 👏

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sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#207

🤗 Thank you!
So you didn't make me wait long 😃
Glad you liked the pm 😆 😆 😉
Next time i will try and coax something out of you...but still am happy that you posted.
I love this ff...and this part was so cute.
Jai Walia in a towel and Bani seeing him 😆 😆 😳
Like it when she was sewing his button...that had my imaginationin a craze! 😆😆
I love the way you write...seriosuly you make my imagination run
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Can't wait till the next part...
and i wonder what Bani will give Jai Walia...a kiss perhaps? or maybe the pleasure of him seeing her in a pink sari??
Ah well...
I hope you'll post another part today. 😳 Yet it is entirely your choice...just a wish of mine.
Continue soon.
Luv
Sweetu

Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago

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nikhat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#208

haila jai in towel i cant imagine
soch kar bhi muje kuch ho raha hai
great cont soon

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Nina

@shahni4

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Posted: 18 years ago

#209

Raania
loved Part 18 and the button sewing...simply awesome....and Jai in his towel LOL!!!
Simply beautiful writing make the characters and their emotions come alive!!!!
Can't wait for the next part --- update soon !!!!