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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you for all your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-IX
Jai was shocked with the turn of events in his life. Jai's own family was against him. Jiggs and Ranveer had walked right out after Bani had left.
Jai's parents were not happy with him. The delimma for the Walia family was too much to take. The wedding cards had been distributed.

The gifts had been purchased. The wedding date was just in a weeks time. And now the entire wedding preparations had come to a standstill.

Jai was lost in his thoughts when Pia came and started to console him. She had crocodile tears in her eyes. She was telling Jai that world is always bad to people like Jai. Jai Walia should move on with his life. Girls like Bani come and go. Jai was too lost in his thoughts to even listen to what Pia was saying.

Jai knew one thing and one thing only. His life started and ended with Bani. Enough was enough. Time had come to lift the curtain from the facade. He had enough of this and was tired of the fact that he was loosing his own battle.

With this in mind he decided to first get rid of Pia for the time being. Jai told Pia to wait as he had something important to discuss with her but he had to make a phone call first before discussing their future.

Pia was stunned to hear that Jai Walia wanted to discuss "their" future. That alone Jai knew would occupy her mind for sometime.

Jai once left alone, locked his study room. And made three calls. After discussing with each one of them it was decided to wait till tomorrow morning before coming up with the final act. Jai was not convinced but the callers agreed this was for the best.

Bani was very depressed her life had once again played a cruel joke on her. She could not believe this was happening to her. She decided to call Rohan and Rano time to get her plan rolling.

She had to time of the attack was the most critical because it will determine the effect that would be left on the person she wanted to hurt the most.

With this in mind, she called Rohan and told her to be ready to roll for tomorrow evening. She told him and Rano to be present at the Walia House tomorrow at 8pm.

Jai had organized a grand party to celebrate the success of a huge business deal that made Walia Group of Industries now become a part of the global hospitality arena. This deal had marked the entry of Walia Group of Industries in the foreign market.

Jai and his family was present here. Since it was a company function and on Jiggs and Ranveer's insistence Bani was present with her mother. Roshni came with her father.

Pia Chopra was also invited with her family which made the entry of Rohan and Rano even more natural so know one suspected and knew this made Bani even more happy as the target would be taken completely by surprise.

All the players were in the same room. Time had come to raise the curtain from this facade.

Jai came to the centre of the room and took the collar mike and attached it to his coat pocket and spoke - "Ladies and Gentleman good evening, tonight is a great night for the Walia Group of Industries with the deal and collabration that we have signed with Thompson Hospitality marks the new chapter in Walia Group of Industries.

With this we will now enter International market, though the challenge that we have undertaken is enormous so are the gains. And I am sure with our dedication we will make a mark in the International market in a short span of time. So ladies and gentleman enjoy the party tonight."

With this there was thundering round of applause for the success of the Walia Group of Industries.

Jai said, "One last thing, before we enjoy the party tonight I would like you to welcome my future wife and companion who I am going to marry next week, Miss Bani Dixit."

With this there was another thundering applause and Bani came smiling and hugged Jai and Pia looked stunned she could believe this was happening. How come Jai-Bani were still together when Bani had broken the engagement just last night. She look confused, angry and insecure.

Seeing her like this brought a smile on Jiggs and Ranveer's face. And Jiggs came to her and said- Pia, Pia, Pia what happened surprised to see Jai-Bani still together? U know they were never separate to begin with? So what happened in front of you was all a facade to make u understand something?

Pia was numb she had no clue what this woman was talking about.

The entire crowd just stood still to witness what was happening.

Just then Roshni came from behind and said- "U do not remember me do u Pia? Why should u? U destroyed my brother's life? Had it not been for you my brother would have still been alive and with us. Your betrayal made him commit suicide?

Do u know who I am talking about? Do u? she screamed at Pia tears flowing from her eyes. Bani came and gave Roshni support and she cried hugging Bani.

Pia now remembered that she was talking about Rahul Mehra the man she had conned in thinking she was in love with and fooled him into thinking they were getting married left him at the altar and never came back.

That Rahul Mehra an upcoming enterprising businessman had committed suicide in the most grusome manner he had jumped from the 35th floor of his apartment when he came to know what Pia had done with him. Roshni was Rahul's sister and had been waiting for a revenge for such a long time.

Then Jai Walia came and said- The day Roshni saw your picture in the newspaper with the headline that you were the new model for the Walia project she callled to warn me, I did not pay any attention to her. Then she called Bani and thank god Bani listened to her. Then Bani, I and Jiggs met Roshni at her apartment and that is when she told me what u are all about.

I wanted to throw you out of that project but Roshni wanted to teach you a lesson she wanted revenge pure and simple. See, the thing is Pia it is good to be smart and think that you are invincible but you should never think that the person sitting infront of you does not have a mind of himself.

After much debate, it was decided that we will help Roshni for one she was my ex-wife and but what was even more important was to ensure that this does not happen to anyone else again.

So, what you saw happening between me and Bani was all planned from the start. Everything including the last night breaking of the engagement was planned to a T by all of us.

In the beginning besides me, Jiggs, Ranveer, Bani and of course Roshni know one knew about this. But in order to make this break-up of engagement more realistic it had to be done in front of the entire family to have the desired effect. So I had to tell my family the truth.

You know once I told my family the truth, my butler Tony who is like a family member to us wanted to end your life and was willing to serve a prison sentence just to see me and Bani happy. He had more morales and than you will ever have Pia.

Pia and her family are stunned, Pia is dazed she is in a shock but the irony is the best is yet to come.

Jai continues- The day you brought Rohan back into Bani's life u made the biggest mistake of ur life. U see Rohan was a changed man. When u asked him to come and help u with breaking me and Bani up. Rohan called Bani and told him what u had in mind.

Then he set the meeting with himself and Bani and also took Rano who is his fiancee and your sister with him as a witness. Your sister was never with you. When u convinced her to use Rohan against us she could not believe what u were asking her to do.

So she decided to tell Bani everything and that is when Bani called me from the restaurant and we knew that our last act was set.

Jai continued- The day u insulted Bani in the party I wanted to strangle u. U r comparing yourself to Bani. If u took 100 re-births u will not even come close to being one-fourth of what Bani is let alone trying yourself to be better than Bani.

Just then Bani cut in and said- It is not ur fault at all Pia it is ur parents fault. When u have parents who are money-minded and then children will only inherit what their parents are. I am surprised that Rano is your sister and thankful she is nothing like you or ur family.

Pia's father was quiet said- U have no right to insult us even we have respect.

Jiggs smiled and said- Respect is given to people who deserve it not to people who are deceitful in everyway.

Jai Walia told her family- U and ur daughter have messed not with Jai Walia alone if u did I would have forgiven you but u messed with my family and the with my happiness and above all, u messed with my life, Bani so u have to bear the consequences.

Jai calls the police who arrest Pia and her parents for fraud, having fake marriages and for being responsible for other people's death.

Jai looks at Bani and says nothing will ever separate us nothing.

Preview for the Next Part-

Jai and Bani Wedding.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish


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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
what a twist!!! good lord you kept me going!! keep it up!!!

andy
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
wow! 👏 👏 👏
This part was really a suprise!
Looking forward for Jai and Bani's wedding

Plz update soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
oh wow!!!

ppl with brains... 😆
more imp leads with brains.... 😆
haila!!!! 👏 almost like kekta mai..outta the blue..

gr8 surprise....
Edited by destinyz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
Hey what a great twist! Great part! Please contineu
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
OMG, i don't believe that i missed many parts. I'll print all the parts and i'll read them on my school way. I'll come back to give your my view. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
Just loved it. What a Twist in the story Jai get a grip of yourself before it to late for anything 😡 aur yeah pia ki to meh 😡 😡 😡
pls update soon. waiting for it. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
Fantastic Manish!! I have already started feeling the right emotions!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
what a twist Manish. I read the second last part twice to make sure i am reading the same story. i never expected this to happen, but a good one that J*B r getting married.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
fantastic manish!

the twist was wow! it was gr8!!

pia.. serves u right!

👏

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