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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-VI
After Bani accepted Jai's proposal of marriage they danced to the tune of not just the music but also the love they felt for each other that night.

Walia House,
Living Room,
11:00pm

The entire Walia family is a still amused and stunned when Jai told them that he wanted to speak to them now. He had also asked Jiggs and her family. On the other hand, Bani had called her mother and asked her to meet her at the Walia house as she has some news to tell her.

The entire Walia House was waiting for them. Even Tony wanted to know what was this fuss about.

At 11:30pm, Jai-Bani entered the Walia House they both had sullen faces. They both looked worried. Seeing them like this the entire family got worried.

Jai's father asked him what the matter was?

Jai looked at Bani and Bani looked at Jai. They both remained quiet.

This got the family members more worried.

Then Jiggs asked, "What happpened?"

Jai said,"What happened? Do u want to know what happened? Will u believe me if I told u what happened today? No, u would not? U know why because I cannot believe it myself?"

Jiggs said, "What can u not believe?"

Jai had that mischevious smile,"I cannot believe she said "YES". U know what, Bani and me are getting married. That is what has happened today."

With that both Jai-Bani start to laugh as the entire Walia, Kohli and Bani's mother just stand their dumbstruck. Jai Walia was getting married again.

They thought Jai was joking with them until Bani showed them the engagement ring and Jiggs told them that she and Jai had purchased the same this afternoon.

The entire family started to rejoice as hugs, ashirwaad and a lavish engagement and wedding planning already started to buzz.

Tony could not believe his ears. Now he is getting married. What is wrong with Jai Walia? This guy is acting normal everyday, if keeps acting like this I think very soon I will become insane. He for the hundredth time muttered to himself that the Walia family does not pay him enough to see Jai Walia transforming so uncharacteristically on a daily basis.

Soon sweets were served all over the place. And Jai-Bani were very happy and could not believe they were going to be united forever.

Jai came to Tony and shared a sweet with him infact Jai himself gave Tony the sweet and smiled at him. Tony went pleasantly surprised and shocked at the sametime.

The engagement party was set two weeks from today. And the wedding three months from now. Jai-Bani had decided to get married on Valentine's Day.

The Walia House,
Engagement Party,
Jai-Bani

The entire Walia House looked like a new bride. The lights were all over the place in the Walia House. The flowers were decorated right from the entrance gate to the lawn of the Walia House.

The list for tonight had the VIPs, the Ministers and other Page-3 celebrities.

Live Band and DJ both had been called.

The food consisted of Indian, Italian, Chinese, Continental, Kebabs, Mediterraian. The spread was exquisite and the every detail was looked by Ranveer and Saahil. Anu had taken care of the decoration. While every person had chipped in as when they were required.

Jai was wearing a nice black Sherwani and was looking smart and elegant.

Bani was wearing a pink designer saree with a Cartier diamond necklace and earrings. She looked like an angel who just graced herself from heaven.

As she approached Jai that evening Jai stood there completely dumbstruck and just could not take his gaze away from Bani.

As soon as Bani came near him. Jai looked in her eyes and before Bani knew what was happening he kissed her on her lips a long passionate kiss stunning the entire Walia family, the guests and the media who just could not believe their luck.

Bani was embarrassed and blushed at the sametime. Jai as soon as he realized what he has done just wanted to dig a deep hole and bury himself in it.

Ranveer came and said-"Mamaji, calm down!! If u do everything now, what will u do in ur honeymoon?"
Before Jai could answer Saahil came said,"Nahi Mamaji, I think what bhaiya is trying to say is this itni betaabi aachi nahi hoti, aare mami ke barre main be to soochiya, kuch move baad ke liya bachakar rahiya. And then he winks at Jai."
Jai tries to catch Saahil but he has by that time faraway from Jai and is laughing like a hyena. Jai is shaking his head and telling him I will see u later.

The engagement ceremony was a great success. Everyone was happy that finally Bani would be their Bahu.
But like they say with happiness comes sorrow.
And it walked in the form of Pia who was a upcoming model who had just landed with the assignment with the Walia Group of Industries to do a advertisment for their upcoming mall project.

Pia Chopra was known as a man-eater. She knew how to seduce men and take advantage of them. .

She decided that she is going to make Jai Walia fall in love with him. Her mission to break his engagement. And she loved it because she was bad to the bone.

Rohan Khera, decided to come back to Mumbai after his stint in London. On his return he was shocked to see the engagement of Jai and Bani. He decided time was right to make Bani's life miserable.

He knew Bani was scared of him and he was once again going to take advantage of this. He will blackmail her and if she does not agree to his terms he will threaten to go to Jai Walia and expose her with his lies and prove it if the need be.

Pia had an appointment with Jai Walia. She went to meet him for the advertisment assignment. She went to his cabin and when Jai saw her he was stunned and marvelled at Pia's beauty. He could not believe how stunning and amazing Pia looked. And from nowhere he wishes what if she was mine instead of Bani?

Rohan Khera calls Bani and tells her that he wants to meet her. His voice sends chills down her bone. But Rohan is in for a surprise as Bani has changed and what she plans to do to Rohan even he cannot imagine in his wildest dream. She decides to meet him and teach him a lesson. She decided that she will not let anyone come between her and Jai. No one.


Preview for Next Part-
Bani gets insulted by Pia infront of Jai and he does not say anything.
Jiggs gives Pia a piece of her mind.
Confusion and Misunderstanding between Jai-Bani begin to crop up.
Bani decides to break her engagement with Jai.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,

Happiness Always,
Manish



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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
awwww.....i was so happy that the engagement and then the preview its sad again.....what can we do about this pia....

CK❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
jigs standsup for bani...yes
awesome part
cant wait to read what happens next
take care
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
omg again pia, hey but i don't find pia to be more beautiful than bani.

g8 part. plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Oh God Manish, I didnt like the part wherein Jai sees Pia and wishes that Pia was his rather than Bani!!
Thats not love....and for mere this thought I think he does not deserve Bani!!!

But your plot is cool!!!! Please continue.....I wanna see how bani teaches rohan a lesson!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
Khulam Khulam Pyar Karege Hum Dono 😆 thats for Jai kissing Bani infront of public
Pia and Rohan 😡 Get lost
I hope Jai realizes Pia's plan
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
interesting part.love the new twist.cant wait to read the next part. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
Thank you for all your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-VII
With the wedding preparations begin full swing. With the guest list being prepared, shopping to be done. Gifts to be purchased and so many nitties and grittes to be worked out.
The Walia family has already divided the work between themselves. Each has so much to do. Jiggs is co-ordinating everything with the rest of the family helping out. She is already in talks with the top florist regarding floral arrangements, she is talk with the best of the designers for Bani's different outfits for the wedding and Jai's outfits for the wedding. Anu is helping Jiggs with the selection.

But again the Walia family is in for a shock as sometimes even the most carefully laid plans can go completely haywire if not checked and put back on track in time. This is what was about to happen.

Bani and Ranveer were busy with the new mall launch and all invites had been sent to ensure that the launch was a great success to begin with.

The Mall Launch Party,
The entire Walia family is attending this event. They are very proud of Jai he has achieved so much. They also praise Ranveer, Bani and Saahil who are Jai's backbone without whom he could not have survived.

Jai is with Bani he is smiling at her and but his thoughts are somewhere else. He just cannot get Pia out of his mind and just as he decided not to think any further about her in came Pia and guess what Jai all of sudden without realizing left Bani's hand and walked to Pia and like a tame dog waiting for his owner to come and pet him.

Bani was shocked but did not say anything. Both Jiggs and Ranveer saw this and this also did not sit well with them. Jiggs saw where Jai was heading and saw Pia as soon as Jiggs saw Pia her blood began to boil she was furious with Jai that how could he leave Bani in a lurch like that.

She did not like Pia and Jiggs knew if Pia came between Jai-Bani then only god can save Pia as Jiggs will leave no stone unturned to destroy Pia. Ranveer shared the exact same sentiment.

Jai started to escort Pia and finally Pia and Bani faced each other for the first time. Pia to Jai was like I cannot believe you are marrying someone like her. She is not even your class. I mean what is wrong with you Jai? How can u marry someone who is not only a middle class girl but also after your money?
Bani was stunned to hear this. Tears began to come in her eyes and what shocked Bani more than Pia's retort was Jai's silence as if to say that wish I had thought of this only earlier.

Seeing Pia was getting Jai's support Pia decided to instigate Jai's mind against Bani, but before she could say anything further Jiggs was standing in front of her.
Jiggs told Pia that why does she not shut her mouth before she is thrown out of the party. She also says that she is a mere model and nothing else.

Bani is now part of the Walia family and if she so much look Bani the wrong way leave the insult she will destroy Pia and then Pia will know what hell on earth means. With that Jiggs walks. And Pia is stunned. She wants to know who she is and that is when she comes to find out through someone she is Jai's elder sister and even Jai does not have the courage to say anything to her.

Bani is stunned that Jiggs supported her and not Jai. She walks away from the launch in tears. Ranveer tries to reason with her but she walks away.

Jiggs after the party goes to Jai and tells him that if he is in two minds about marrying Bani then it is better he thinks twice before he destroys her life. She also said that if she though he is her brother if he wrongs Bani in anyway than she will always side with Bani and not him.

Jai himself is astonished that how come he let Pia insult Bani like that. What is wrong with me? I was the one who proposed to Bani. I was the one who wanted to spend my life with her and now what is wrong?

The next day, in 7 years of working with Jai Bani does not come to office. She calls and tells she is taking the day off. This sends buzz in the office because Bani has come to work even with a 102 degree temperature to the office.

Ranveer knows why Bani has not come? He calls her and but she does not take his call. He leaves her a voice mail and sends her a sms asking her to take care and then calls Jiggs to tell her that Bani has not come to office today. Jiggs is shocked.

She tells Ranveer to keep a eye on Jai and if Jai and Pia get together in any form to inform her immediately.

Bani has not come out of her room all day. Her mother has gone and tried to speak to her but to no avail. Jiggs comes to meet Bani and goes directly to her room. She sees Bani in tears and just lying down staring at the ceiling. She is numb by Jai's behaviour.

Jiggs goes to Bani and puts her hand on her shoulder and seeing Jiggs there Bani just hugs her and cries her heart out and Jiggs is in tears also. Jiggs tells her not to worry as she will not let her get hurt.

If Jai ever hurts her she will break her relationship with her own brother but will always support Bani, as like Anu, ranveer and saahil Jiggs tells her that Bani is like a daughter to her and she will always protect her and will not leave her alone.

Bani comes to office the next day and decides to confront Jai and know if he feels that this relationship should be called off.

Just as she is about to enter the cabin she sees Jai and Pia embracing each other and they both look so comfortable with each other. Bani feels disgusted at the sight and walks away. She goes into the office and decides to do two things right away.

Bani decides to resign from the Walia industry and to break her engagement with Jai Walia as she can no longer be with a man who does not love her.

With that in mind, Bani types her resignation and formulates a plan for later that night as she has to meet that Rohan and she plans to give Rohan a taste of his own medicine.

She wipes her tears and decides she will not feel sorry for herself.

Preview for Next Part-
Roshni makes a entry in Jai's life.
Jai is stunned when Bani hands him her resignation.
Jai-Bani get into a fight.
Pia tries to further poison Jai against Bani.
Bani slaps Jai and throws her engagement ring on his face in front of the entire Walia family.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish




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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg manish that is great please continue i can;t wait to see what happens next

plz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
OMG Manish, I was happy when Jai kissed Bani during their engagement. 😳 😳 😳

But then the Volte Face - the Pias in the world will never learn to keep themselves away from happiness, will they? 😡

Jai and Pia embracing - God why do I have to see it everywhere? 😡 😡 😡

Loved Jigs supporting Bani and Ranveer too.

Looking forward to Bnai slapping Jai ..

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