I have two incomplete fanfics which I will conclude by this weekend. With KS storyline changing so drastically. I will end by two fancfics soon.
Here is the new fanfics:
It is very different from both my fanfics. This is about Jai Walia realizing what true love is and is touched by it when he least expected it. If I can describe the essesnce of my story it will be whether Jai will choose someone he loves or someone that loves him.
Characters-
Jai Walia – The Owner and Business Tycoon Jai Walia of the Walia Group of Industires
Dhruv Walia – Father of Jai Walia and the Founder of Walia Industry
Reema Walia – Mother of Jai Walia and homemaker
Jigaysa Kohli – Elder Sister of Jai Walia, married to Aditya Kohli now .She lives in Mumbai with her husband and her three children. Comes and visits her family from time to time.
Aditya Kohli – Married to Jai's sisteris a nice, decent man understands what Jai is going through is always there to support him. He has his own business but also provides consultancy to the Walia Group of Industries from time to time.
Bani Dixit - Friend and Confidante of Jai Walia, who is secretly in love with him and works with him at the Walia Group of Industry.
Pia Chopra – Upcoming sensational model, who Jai Walia is completely smitten by. She is aggrogant and for her relationship and love are only stairs to get what she wants. Her aim in life is to get it all without working for it. Her lastest victim none other than Jai Walia.
Tarun Sablok – Childhood friend ofJai Walia, who knows and understands him and has stood by him through thick and thin.
Roshni Mehra – Ex-wife of Jai Walia, a socialite who is nothing but trouble wherever she goes.
Rohan Khera – Ex- boyfriend of Bani Dixit, who has not given her anything but grief, is back to haunt her of the traumatic past she had with him.
Meghna Dixit – Mother of Bani Dixit, who is more of friend than a mother, who likes Jai Walia like her son and harbours the dream of having as his son-in-law.
Deep Singh Chopra – Father of Pia Chopra, a businessman, who seems to be enjoying his daughter's new found success, has already chalked her future plans without taking her into confidence.
Preet Singh Chopra – Mother of Pia Chopra, a housewife, loves her daughter very much and is worried about her new found success as she feels people may try to take advantage of her daughter and always accompanies her.
Rano Singh Chopra – Younger Sister of Pia , she loves her sister very much. She also harbors the dream of making into the world of fashion one day and plans to teach Pia a lesson about life.
Ranveer Kohli- Eldest son of Jigayasa and Aditya, loves Jai to death and works with him. He is very close to Bani and he is one person Bani counts on whenever she is in a jam. He also wants Bani to become a part of Jai's life and often creates situation to bring Jai-Bani close.
Sahil Kohli- Youngest son of Jigayasa and Aditya, loves Jai a lot and has just completed his graduation. He is close to his elder brother Ranveer and is joining Walia Group of Industry to help Ranveer out.
Anu Kohli- The only daughter of Jigayasa and Aditya, loves Jai a lot and is close to both her brothers Ranveer and Sahil. She is just graduated from NIFT and one day plans to become a top dress designer and Jai has a surprise stored for her.
Okay this is my character sketch.
This is a complete different storyline coming up part 1. Do not worry I put a lot of hilarious, romantic and emotional scenes between J-B. So sit back and enjoy......
PART-1
The Walia Group of Industries Office,
Nariman Point,
Mumbai
9:30 am, Friday Morning.
The car was speeding and Jai Walia was busy reading the Economic Times, Jai Walia the owner and business tycoon was going through a very bad phase of his life. His recent divorce with Roshni Mehra had been splashed all across the newspaer. Had it not been the support of his family and his close friend Bani he would not have survived, he probably would have had a mental breakdown. He was lost in his thoughts when the car reached in front of the gates of Walia Industry office.
He went into the building and walked up to the elevator. The Walia Group of Industries Corporate Office covered 5 floors of the Nariman Building. He had a private elevator, as he was about to walk in. His eyes fell on Bani, Jai always use to just go in a trance whenever he saw Bani, he had no clue why?
Today was no different. Bani was oblivious to his gaze, Jai thought how could someone be so simple yet so beautiful. Bani looked so nice in her blue salwaar Kurta, long open hair, small elegant diamond earrings and a simple make-up. She did not notice Jai and was busy in her own world.
Jai was standing in between the elevator door the lift attendant was unable to understand what was wrong with Mr. Walia, he had never seen Jai behave like that. He had already been holding the lift door for 10 minutes now. He had no clue how to approach Mr. Walia, lucky for him that Ranveer arrived just in time.
Ranveer saw Jai and looked in the direction of where he was looking, he saw Mamaji was looking at Bani who was still waiting in the line for the elevator. Ranveer was shaking his head, Mamaji why can't u tell her that u love her?
Jai looked nice in a black Armani suit and black polished shoes.
Ranveer walked up to Jai and said- Good Morning Mamaji, how are u this morning?
Jai just woke up from his trance and said- Good morning, Ranveer I am fine, I don't know what is wrong with the lift. I mean it is not moving.
Ranveer could barely hide his smile and the lift attendant was stunned to see Jai saying that the lift was not working. Ranveer said, Ah,......Mamaji for the lift to be working u need to stand inside the lift not between the door of the lift.
Jai now embarrassed and said, " I know !!! I know!!! I was testing to see if u r paying any attention. Now will u come or keep staring me. I mean Ranveer u have no value for time and call Bani also I cannot understand why does she stand in the line when I have told her she can use this elevator. Now go, and call Bani we have meeting and work to do Ranveer. Not everyone is lucky like u, some of us have to work for a living. "
Ranveer still smiling and shaking his head said," Ah.....I know, I understand that Mamaji, I will call Bani now. But look who is talking about time, I mean had u not been staring Bani maybe u could have gotten some work done? Am i right Mamaji"
Jai smiling and saying- Ranveer beta, tum pitna ka kaam kar raho!!! Ab Jao warna pata chala Bani hamse phele office pounch jayegi(Ranveer son, I am going to hit u if u do not go call Bani, otherwise she will reach office before us and we will just be stranded here looking like fools.)
Ranveer runs to get Bani who is about to step in the elevator and Ranveer pulls her and says- Arre Bani Mami, Mamaji aapko bula rahe hai!! and then he winks at Bani( Bani Mami, Mamaji is calling u)
Bani looks at Ranveer blushes a little and says- Ranveer, u and ur antics, will they ever stop? Pls do not call me Mami, I am not ur Mami and lets go since Mr. Walia is calling us!!!!
Ranveer smiles and says, Hey Bani I am just stating the obivious the way u have taken care of Mamaji throughout his messy divorce nobody would have done that. Had it not been for u I do not how things would have been.
Jai is now getting impatient and the lift attendant knows this lift is not going anywhere anytime soon. Already 35 minutes wasted. God !!! please help me!!!
Just then Ranveer and Bani walk into the lift and the lift finally starts to climb upstairs to their office located on the 25th floor.
Bani says - Good morning Mr. Walia
Jai says- Good morning Ms. Dixit.
Bani looks at him strangely as he never refers to her as "Ms. Dixit" Ranveer is also confused. Jai always calls her "Bani".
Bani asks Jai- Mr. Walia why are u addressing me as "Ms. Dixit"? U always call me by my given name Bani
Jai looks at her and says- I do I know that but I have also told to u to call me Jai not Mr. Walia. U r one of my closest friend and if u cannot call me Jai then I also cannot call u Bani.
Bani looks at him and says- But Mr Walia......
He cuts her in the middle and says, " The day u start calling me Jai is the day I start calling u Bani again.
Ranveer is enjoying this immensely he thinks with this live soap opera who needs Ekta Kapoor serials. Ah!! I love this !!!
Just as Bani is about to answer the elevator opens and the Walia Industry office comes.
They walk through the plush offices of Walia Industry it has been designed by his niece Anu. Jai loves her to death. And all three walk to their respective cabins and Jai just as leaving tells Bani this converstion is not over.
Bani's Cabin
Bani Dixiit is the Operations Manager of the Walia Group of Industries she handles all the hotels, malls, event management and other high profile functions she is one person that not just Jai but the entire Walia family trusts blindily. And she is very close to Jigayasa who treats Bani as her own daughter and is very protective about her. She like Ranveer wants Bani to be a part of Jai's life forever. And will do anything to make sure Jai-Bani get united forever.
Bani knows Jai since college days, she fell in love with him over a period of time and Jai has always been close to Bani. He shares a relationship with Bani that he does not share with anyone.
Bani swtiches on her laptop and starts to work getting presentation ready for a new mall project. She is working relentlessly.
Just then someone knocks at Bani's cabin, Bani without looking up asks the person to come in. She is none other than Jigaysa who has come to invite Bani to attend her 35th marriage anniversary which is this evening.
Bani looks up and sees Jiggs- "Arre Jiggs aunty aap?" (Jiggs aunty you?)
Jiggs smiles and says- God !! Bani itna kaam mat kiya karo!!! Kaisi ho tum?
And u r looking very pretty this morning!!!! Jai Bhaiya to aaj gaye??
Bani blushes again and says- Kya Jiggs aunty aapko subah subah koi aur mila?? Yaha kaisa aana hua? ( What Jiggs aunty u did not anyone else in the morning to make fun except me? What brings u here?)
Jiggs - Arre Bani aaj meri shaadi ki saalgarah hai aur main aur Aditya chahte hai ki shaam ki party main tum bhi aao?
Bani hugs Jiggs and says- Arre Jiggs Aunty Happy Anniversary!!! I will try to come but cannot promise.
Jiggs - I am not listening to any of ur excuse, I have already spoken to ur mom she is coming and so are u. And u r coming because u are part of Walia family and u r like my daughter so I will not cut the cake if u don't come. And no work there come and enjoy!!! ok I have to leave now !!!! See u in the evening.
And Jiggs walks away and is happy that Bani will come in the evening for the party and Jiggs has plan to get Jai-Bani close. She knows Bani loves her Jai Bhiaya and will never admit it.
The whole day Bani is busy with meetings and presentation.
Friday evening 7pm
Kohli House
The whole Kohli house is decorated with lights and flowers, the party is at the grand scale. The entire VIP and important people including media is present at the event.
The Jiggs and Aditya are welcoming all the guests they look very happy.
Ranveer, Sahil and Anu are also enjoying themselves with their friends.
The entire Walia family is also there.
The party is at full swing and people are enjoying themselves immensely.
Jiggs is looking very nice in her latest designer saree and Aditya in his latest Sherwani.
Ranveer, Sahil and Anu have also picked up nice outfits for themselves are looking cool.
Jai Walia is dressed in a casual attire and is looking like a million dollar.
Jai is getting bored and is just looking around when Jiggs comes and says- Jai Bhaiya, aap akele kya kar rahe hai? Bani bus aati hi hogi?(What r u doing alone? Bani will be here shortly)
Jai just smiles and does not respond. Jiggs tells him he should start living his life again and forget the past and enjoy himself.
Just then Bani enters the party with her mother. Bani is looking so beautiful in a nice chiffon pink saree, with a simple diamond necklace with matching earrings, simple make up, light lipistick and a smile which can take any man's breath away. She is making heads turn in the party.
Aditya sees her and says- Bani, how r u? God!!! if I was a little younger or u were a little older I would have married u!!!
Bani is too stunned to react her mother Meghna starts to laugh at the joke and then Jiggs comes and says- Aditya, leave Bani alone.
Just then Bani's eyes meets Jai's and the world for Bani comes to a standstill the staring session continues and both are unaware anymore of the surroundings around them.
Jiggs calls Bani and her mom and Bani meets all the members of the Walia family who are happy to see her and all are enjoying Bani's company.
Just then a five-tier chocolate laced anniversary cake is brought for Aditya and Jiggs to cut.
And they cut the cake and all the people are enjoying this family ceremony. Jiggs shares the piece of cake with everyone and starts with Bani. Bani is a little surprised at this gesture but smiles and goes along with it. She is happy that all the members of the Walia family love her so much except for one person who she loves so much- Jai Walia.
Jiggs signals Ranveer and he knows what to do? Jiggs asks everyone to dance and DJ starts playing the songs and people get all funky and start to jive.
Jai and Bani are standing together and talking when Jiggs comes and ask Jai to dance with Bani And they go on the dance floor and the music changes from a fast to a slow number and it is a sweet number playing from the movie Jurm:
Jab koi bat bigad jaye,
Jab koi mushkil pad jaye,
Tum dena mera saath,
Ao Humnwaz.
And Jai and Bani's eyes are locked and their body is moving in one rythmn. And they dance so well. The entire Walia family is looking and thinking they are made for each other and only wish one day Bani becomes their bahu for real.
But it is too soon for Jai and they have to give it some more time.
They only wish Jai agrees to this marriage................
End of Part -I
Preview of the next part-
After the dance has finished, just as Jai and Bani are walking Bani's leg gets tripped in her sandal and is about to fall when Jai saves her and then their eyes lock again.
GUIDE TO ALL PARTS-
Part- I - Pg 1
Part-II Pg 3
Part-III Pg 4
Part-IV Pg 5
Part-V Pg 6
Part-VI Pg 8
Part-VII Pg 9
Part-VIII Pg 10
Part-IX Pg 10
Final Part- Pg 12