FF: fix you MESSAGE pg 38 IM BACK!!!! - Page 7

Bani u go!!!

Jai will be coming behind!!!!!! 😉

heyy guys workin on part 7
would like to remind you, rhea is ADOPTED. not jai's kid. this is an integral part of the next few episodes. so ya(:
cya in a few min!
luv kav

ok part 7's very short but im doing part 8 right away. enjoy!
and guess what happens nxt!
The next day, bani dropped her daughter off at school for what she hoped would be the last time. She had alredy told Avi to inform the principal of her decision and all the formalities had been taken care of. Bani would be moving temporarily to hydrabad and then she would be travelling overseas to London in conjunction with the Chopra project. She had a meeting with Mr Chopra anyways and she planned to use this meeting to throw her husband off her track.

"darling, please don't talk to your friend today." Bani told her daughter again.

"Yes mommy. Is that the reason why we are leaving?" She asked, her eyes large and brimming with tears.

"yes my love, it is. It will be ok. We will come back some day. Now hurry up and go to school, its your last day here, you don't want to be late!" Bani said.

As soon as rhea had left, bani sped to her office to meet Avi and make all the arrangements for leaving soon. In so doing, more then half the day went past and Bani got home just in time for her daughter's arrival.

The weather was horrible, and it seemed to reflect Bani's emotions. The rain fell from the skys as though it represented bani's unshed sorrows. She packed the last of her necessities and made all the arrangements so that her house could be locked up for a long period of time. Avi would check in often but she still felt safer if her house was packed the way she liked it.

Bani finished clearing out the fridge and sat upon the couch , thinking about the time she had spent 7 years ago with Jai Walia. He would have made a great father, she thought.

sorryyyyy part 8 will be up soon!

WOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!.. i just read d 7 parts and wow.. amazing.. jai's been wit his daughter all this time.. and bani's changed - glad to see that.. fo sure.. she's a businesswomen.. wow.. and rhea is sooo cute...awwwwwwwwwww.. wow.. now bani's moving.. understandable.. but jai's gonna be right behind her.. that's fo sure.. can't wait to fo d nxt part.. amazing 👏

thanks loads nyzbabigyal(: twas so sweet of you to read and comment.
could all of you out there tell me, is it normal to recieve 2000+ hits and 50+ comments?!i wonder why ppl dont want to help improve the writer's work....
and thanks soooo much to those of you who commented!! you all are damn sweet(:

😛 WOW...just amazing!
I love the way you write...the way the words flow is amazing...i truly am amazed at your skills 😳 👏 👏 !
I am sorry for not replying earlier...as time is what i just do not have....but if it makes you feel better then i MUST say that i always make it a point to read your updates 😳 !
Your an amazing writer...please don't get discouraged!
At times i too recieve the same problem...a few comments and alot of views....so keep smiling 😛 !
Truly your ff beats mine 😳
Do continue soon...will be waiting! 😛
Luv ya
Sweetu
BTW...So cute, I wonder what "his" reaction will be when Bani and he finally meet...can't wait yaar!

aww!!........part 7 was awesome hun......but Bani - how logn will you run for?!!

Hope Jai and Bani come face to face soon!😉

thanks you guys your soooo sweet. and sweetu ur FF is sooo nice ok! i just read all of it today! and i commented too! lol thanks(:

Hey Kav,

Ur FF is too good. Part 8 just got to come soon......
I'm glad I stumbled onto your FF man!!!!!!!! 😃

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Very well written!!
Keep up the good work...
Dying for Part 8...

Love,
~Zahra~