FF: Mujhe Maaf Kardo (II) Test 4 Jai - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
OMG!! not another one!! i'm already addicted to 4 of ur FFs, how much more addicted can u make me. God woman, u gotta put a limit on these kinds of things 😆 😆 ok, since i know it's gonna be as great as all ur other FFs, i'll let u continue 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
great.another ff.im so exicited.cant wait to read it. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
Part 1

Jai is drinking away!!!!!!!

He cant control it!!!!

He keeps thinking about Bani!

The more he does..

The more he drinks!!!!

Pia is telling him to stop!!!!

And she's like lets go!!

Jai is like I am not going!!!!

But Pia tries her best

And she takes him!!

She barely makes it to her room!!!!

Jai is looking at her

Pia is like what are you doing to urself?

Jai is quiet!!

Pia is like I cant see you like!!!!

She;s like it hurts for me to see you like this!!!!

She's like Di doesn't love you at all!!!!!..

She's like she hurt you more than anyone!!

And she's like saying how she regrets what she did to him

But now

All that changed

And how she loves him!!!!

Jai is looking at her!

Pia is like I love you!!!!! I love you lots!!!

She's crying

And she hugs him!

Jai is like get away!

He's like I don't love you!

But she says I do!!!!!!!!!

She's like we can give us a chance!!!!!!!!…

And she hugs him!!!

And she's not letting go!!

Jai doesn't know what to do!!

He's not even in his senses!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Part 2

And then

Slowly his arms go around her!!!!

And they both are hugging!

And the scene fades away!!!!!!!!!!

IN the middle of the night

Jai wakes up!

His head is pounding

And he sees Pia sleeping!!

And he's shocked

He quickly lets go

He's like what have I done?????

He takes his coat

And he leaves!!!!!

And he walks into his room!!!!

He's still in a shock!!

Hes' like why did I do that???

He cant believe it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And then his phone rings

He's thinking who could it be…

He looks

Bani's name is flashing!!!!

He's shocked!!!

He just keeps looking at it!!!!!

And then he answers it

But he doesn't say anything!

Bani: Mr. Walia?!

Jai is quiet!!!

She's like I know you are there!!!!!!

And then she starts talking and talking

And being sweet and romantic….

And then she starts to tell him everything on what she did and why she did it!!!!!!

And about the past events that have been going on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But she doesn't tell him who was behind his property!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And then he feels has if Bani is talking from right there

When he turns around

She's standing right there!!!

He's shocked!!


The End!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Part 2

And then

Slowly his arms go around her!!!!

And they both are hugging!

And the scene fades away!!!!!!!!!!

IN the middle of the night

Jai wakes up!

His head is pounding

And he sees Pia sleeping!!

And he's shocked

He quickly lets go

He's like what have I done?????

He takes his coat

And he leaves!!!!!

And he walks into his room!!!!

He's still in a shock!!

Hes' like why did I do that???

He cant believe it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And then his phone rings

He's thinking who could it be…

He looks

Bani's name is flashing!!!!

He's shocked!!!

He just keeps looking at it!!!!!

And then he answers it

But he doesn't say anything!

Bani: Mr. Walia?!

Jai is quiet!!!

She's like I know you are there!!!!!!

And then she starts talking and talking

And being sweet and romantic….

And then she starts to tell him everything on what she did and why she did it!!!!!!

And about the past events that have been going on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But she doesn't tell him who was behind his property!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And then he feels has if Bani is talking from right there

When he turns around

She's standing right there!!!

He's shocked!!


The End!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Preview for tomorrow:

Bani is all lovey dovey!!! Jai doesn't react!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17


NO UPDATE TOMORROW..... 4 PARTS PER FANFIC ON SUNDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WILL NOT BE HOME THATS WHY!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
lol, finally updated, and just in time too cuz i just got home 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
so glad that you started this! i think that we all need fresh look at the situation. atleast we'll know that in your fanfic...pia will never get her claws into Jw...right???? (hint hint...what i wouldn't want to read...hehe)

great start to a great ff...
thanks again!
dipu00
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
firstly congrats di for the 6th ff..!!

loved the parts!!

looking forward to the parts to all the ffs!


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