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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: wateverr

wowwww guli..u've got me addicted to sooooooooo many of ur fanfics! u're my fav fanfic writer 🤗 can't w8 for the other parts!!! 😛





Awww thanks sweety!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plzz cont sooooooooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
I will u guyz!!!

Dont worry!!

20 parts are ready!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just waiting to be posted!!!

And that will happen when i post!!!!!!

gotta wait another 6 hours!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Part 3

Jai is shocked!!!!

He cant believe it!!!

Bani's standing right there!!!!!!!

He's looking at her!!!

She's crying!!!!!

She starts talking more!!!

She says

I couldn't take it!!!!

Today I had to see you!!!!!

And I had to tell you!!!!!!!

And its KC…..

And I even fasted for you!!!!!!!!!!!

And I wasn't going to eat or drink anything!!

Until I saw you!!!!!!

Bani starts crying

And getting all emotional!!

Jai is just looking at her!!

And he has a blank face!!!!!!

Bani starts coming to him!!!

And she goes on again!!!!

About what she did!!!!!

And how Krishna is no more and what not!!!!!

But she says

I want to start over!!!!

She's like..

We can make things better!!!!!

And she wants to start over!!!!!

And she takes out her mangalsutra

And puts it out in her hand!!!

He looks at her!!!!!!

Bani is crying!!!!!!!

And then

He slowly takes it!!!!!

And he puts it on her neck!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
Part 4

And she fills her maang!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And she breaks her fast!!!!!!!!

And she bends down to touch his feet

But he stops her!!!

And she hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!

And she's crying!!!!!

Jai doesn't know what to do or say!!

He's just stunned!!!

Bani looks at him

And says I love you!!!!!!

I love you a lot!!!

And I am sorry for hurting you the way I did!!!!!

And she hugs him again!!!!!!!!!

Jai closes his eyes!!!

And he's feeling really guilty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And he's like what have I done??

I committed such a grave sin!!!!!!!!!!!

Scene fades away slowly!!!!!!!!!!

Next Morning

Pia wakes up!!!

She sees that Jai isnt there!

And she's like

He probably left in the middle of the night!!!!!!!!!!

She goes and gets ready!!!!!!

Jai is sleeping!!!!

Bani comes in with a tray….

And she's smiling!!!

She puts it down!!!

Jai opens his eyes……

And sees her!!!!!

She's giving that big smile!!!

And he sits up!!!!

Bani sits there!!!!

Bani: good morning!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Part 5

He's quiet!!!!!

He doesn't say anything!!!

Bani: Whats wrong? Are you okay??? Are you sick??

He's quiet!!!

Bani is getting worried!!

She feels his forehead!!!!!!!!!!

Jai: I am fine!!

Bani: U seem sad!!!

Jai is like I am fine!!!!

She hugs him again!!!!!

And he has no expression at all!!

And then

Pia knocks on his door……

Cuz its locked!!!!!!!

They both look!!!

Bani says I will be back!!!!

Jai is shocked!!!!!

He's like omg!!

What if its Pia!!!

Bani opens it…

And when Pia sees her

Her face drops!!!!!!!!!!

Bani is smiling!!

And hugs her!!!

Jai is looking at whats going on!!!!

Pia cant believe it!!!!!

Bani is like how are you??

Pia is like when did you come?

She says last night!!!!!

And she starts thanking her for taking care of Jai and what not

Pia gives a fake smile!!!

Bani is like…

U know who's also here…

Pia says who!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
Part 6

Bani: Pushkar!! And he's in room 312!!!!

Lets say that they are in room 309

Pia is shocked!!!

Jai is wondering at the turn of events!!!!!

Pia says really???

Bani says yes!!!!!

Afterwards……

Jai comes out from his shower!!!!

Bani was reading a magazine..

And she sees him

And she comes to him!!!!!!

Jai is looking at her!!!

And then….

She fixes his shirt collar!!

And puts his head out a little bit!!!!!

And isnt saying anything!!!

And then

She touches his face!!!!

Bani: Mr. Walia….. is something bothering you?????

She says…..

U aren't the same as I know you!!!!

Jai is shocked!!

She says…

Tell me!!!!

Jai says nothing is wrong!

I am fine!!!!!

Bani: are you sure?

Jai: yes!!!!

Bani hugs him!!!!!!!

Jai closes his eyes!!!!!

Afterwards

They go out!!!!

Bani is shopping and what not

Jai is just tagging along!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
Part 7

And she's shopping

And she has a smile on her face!!!!!

And what not

She remembers when she went shopping with Jai!!!

And she picked out a white shirt!!!!!

She smiles!!!

Jai's lost in his thoughts!!!!

Bani comes there!!!!

And she's like where are you lost?

He's like no where!!!!!!

He's like u ready?

Bani is like lets go!!!

She ends up buying some things!

To take back over there!!!

Jai wants to talk to Pia!!

But Pushkar is the same way like Bani!!!!

Pia needs to talk to him to!!!

But will they ever get a chance?

They come back into their hotel room!!!!

Jai's cell rings!!!

And he sees the name flashing!!

Its Pia!!!

He says excuse me!!!

Bani smiles!!

And says okay!!!!

He steps out

And they both talk!!!!

Jai is like we have to talk

And about yesterday

He's telling her

it was a huge mistake!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He says I don't have anything towards you!!!!!!!!

I shouldn't have done wat I did!!!!!!!!!!

Pia is hurt!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Part 8

She's trying to tell him that she loves him!!!

And that it wasn't a mistake!!!!!!!!!

He's just keeps saying what a mistake it was!!!

And then he hangs up!!!!

Pia is hurt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai comes back!!!!!!

He comes in

Doesn't see Bani!!

And is thinking

Where is she?

And then

Hands start coming under his arms!!!!!

And she hugs him from the back!!!!

She's like what took you so long?

He says he had an important phone call!!!!!!!!!!

Bani: More important than me???

Jai closes his eyes!!!!!!!

In the middle of the night…..

Bani is sleeping!!!

Jai is sitting up!!

And he's looking at Bani sleeping!!!!!!

He keeps thinking about the turn of events that have been occurring!!

He gets out of bed!

Puts his robe on

And stands by the window!!!!

He's thinking about everything whatever happened with Bani and what not!!!

And then

How Bani told him everything!

He's thinking to himself

Why didn't she tell me this before???

If she had told me this earlier…

Then whatever happened…

It would not have happened!!!!

But she kept it from me!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Part 9

Bani moves a little bit

Opens her eyes

And doesn't have Jai there!

She looks…..

And she sits up!!

She's like what are you doing????

Jai turns around

And sees her!!!

She comes out of bed

And by the window

She's like what happened?????

She puts her hand on his shoulders…..

And he turns

And looks at her!!!

Jai: Bani… why didn't you tell me everything before?????

about what you were doing!!!!!!

Bani looks down!!!!!

And she's like I had to!!!!

She said..

I did this for you!!!!

And I wanted you to be mad at me!!!….

I did this for a purpose!!!

But now…

Since we don't have to get the divorce……

I gave you back everything!!!!

Jai's thinking

If only you told me all of this earlier!!!

She's like don't worry about it anymore!!!!!

She's like come on get some rest!!!!

Next Morning

Bani wakes up

And she doesn't see Jai there!!!!

She's like where did he go?

She gets up

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