Breathing...only for you UPDT prt3 pg8

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Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 19 years ago

#51

OMG! CAUGHT UP WITH ALL THE LAST TWO PARTS!!!! WOW SWEETU THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!! SIMPLY MAREVOLUS! 😳 YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!! 😉 OR ELSE!.... 😆

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Raania

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Posted: 19 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: indian_godess
OMG! CAUGHT UP WITH ALL THE LAST TWO PARTS!!!! WOW SWEETU THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!! SIMPLY MAREVOLUS! 😳 YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!! 😉 OR ELSE!.... 😆

Godess

nahi toh hum log dande aur joote lekar ayege ...kui???😉

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desi chic

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Posted: 19 years ago

#53

Sweetu,

Whatever made you quit writing, because I did happen to notice and I was just about to approach you with my danda 😆... But on a more serious note, I've said it so many a time before. You're writing is extremely amazing, it is very detailed and vivid.. The subtle expressions, the notions of love/hate/pain everything... You bring the emotions life. Your fingers type up magic. So don't give me excuses.. I want updates. I'm a great fan of yours and it will be quite unfair to upset any of your fans. I am leaving this post expecting another from you soon. Please do continue because I really enjoy your eloquent writing, it just makes my jiya go dharak dharak....

Cheers,
dc

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Niroo

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Posted: 19 years ago

#54

hey sweetu.. that was so sweet & cute.. u have to continue please.. please please....

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Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 19 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Raania

nahi toh hum log dande aur joote lekar ayege ...kui???😉

yup, you got that rite Raania! you hear that sweetu? we'll come chasing after you, me with the joote and raania with the dande, if you don't continue!!! 😆

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sweetu144

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Posted: 19 years ago

#56

😳 😳 awww you guys are such sweethearts....threatening me like that 😕
Thanks Raania 🤗 you are such a sweety yaar...like poetry now i am touched 😳 , you truly are too sweet! 😳 aur yeh kya threats....ouch (BTW still mad at you!)
Thanks TINK 🤗 you are sweet, your lost for words....i am at a loss on how to possibly thank you for reading my updated part 😳
Thanks DC, you truly are a sweetheart. I am well and truly touched by your comments...thanks is just not enough 🤗 🤗 , I do hope that you will continue to like my writing 😳
Thanks usa30172 for reading the updated part truly appreciate it 😳🤗

AND...What are you two girls planning...threatening me like that
Chalo we shall see if i continue or not...we shall se.
Luv
Sweetu 😳

Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago

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huma

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Posted: 19 years ago

#57

that was really amzaing pld dnt stop writing ur realli good at it! pls update soon! 👏 👏 👏

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shafaq

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Posted: 19 years ago

#58

😳 Hun ! tht was an awesome part !! breath-takinglyy marvellous !
awww jai feling soorry for hurting her !! hun ! ...i would love if u had moree idalogues...but i guess teh description does the same to us ...as teh dialogues would doo !! wooww hun!
andd yh plzzz contiuee soooooonn !! u havee to ..u r sooo good at it ! u cant end it ere ! 😛
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