Breathing...only for you UPDT prt3 pg8

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swati

@swatinarang

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Posted: 18 years ago

#41

awesome part Sweetu. plz continue soon

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#42

Hey lovely part. I am nursing a headache right now so I am gonna post a long comment. JUst one thing, I love how much he loves her quietly but isn't he a bit on the brutal side?

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Nina

@shahni4

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Posted: 18 years ago

#43

Just loved it Please update soon!!!

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shafaq

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Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#44

awww..!! hunii tht was a grr88 partt !! ur jst simplyy toooooo gudd...!!
hiunii do updatee sooon..!!
will be waitingg eagerliiiii...!!!!!!
thnksxx hunii !!
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Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#45

hey girl 👏
waht a fantastic lunch i had...garam garam soup with tortia chips and your mind blowing fanfic 👍🏼 ..i hi mujhe yeh Jai Walia bhouth hi pasand hai 😉
i love your fanfic..hope u continue soon

😳 R

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sweetu144

@sweetu144

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#46

😳
Hello, i am back.
But not for long.
😳 WOW, i was amazed at the number of pm's and requests i got for continuing this ff 😳
Thank you all those who wanted to continue this ff!
Well those who wanted it...the third part is on it's way.
Was emotionally blackmailed...how sad!
I do hope that you all will like this part.
Hope it isn't inapropriate, as if it is then i am well and truly sorry...not done or purpose.
will be posting it soon.
Luv
Sweetu 😳

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TINK

@TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#47

THANX SWEETU 😳 WILL BE WAITIN 😆

LUV
TINK

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sweetu144

@sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#48

For you Raania🤗-now your turn! (And all the others who wanted me to continue🤗)

Part three

Is Pain the price of Love?

The faint light of the moon shone, illuminating her features. She lay upon the bed in a heap of sheets that covered barely "the" tainted flesh. Her hair was scattered and fingers curled, in a relaxed notion. Steady breathes penetrated her soul.
She looked a true angel of striking beauty...well so he thought.

His mind burnt in a blaze, recounting the past feverish hours amid her presence….just the two of them.

His fingers reach out and trail gently the marked skin. So rough, so harsh…yet so filled with love. This one action made her move; he stops, eyes moving immediately up …not wanting to awaken the sleeping beauty.
She was a feather, one so delicate and easy to handle, reacting to his touch as if she were breathing.
Fingers continue to explore….moving slowly.

His eyes trail all over, noting each mark, cursing him self for hurting her so….
Oh how he craved to take her in his arms now and wash away all past hours of pain, wanting only... her to slowly and gently relive all in a passionate fire of burning love.
His fingers trail mercilessly upon her swollen and sore lips.
Oh how he had tortured and teased her….yet sent unimaginable tingles through her spine….

His eyes close and chest pound as he relives the intensity of her words, namely his name "Jai" resounding of her subtle lips. The memory entraps him….and he burns alive.
"Bane" hushed and gentle, evoking ripples of pure ecstasy…
He dares explore further upon her slender neck, biting now gently, evoking only further a more buoyant response. His fingers move finally up and slowly untie the delicate strings….oh so innocent.
Her eyes widen and he bites delicately in a rage of furious passion.
The rest of the night passes in a blaze of its own…
Yet she complains not….welcoming all…

He awakens suddenly, feeling her move slightly, from his stance noting a tear slide down. It hits her. She moves and eyes open.
He stares silently down…hand slowly moving out, eyes begging of apology.

Looking up now, she faces him. Allowing her eyes only to get deep and lost…
Her heart beats increase rapidly, as if running a marathon of its own. Her hand moves to cover gently his cheek, caressing softly the tear away…pulling him towards her…

No apology necessary only love.

The moment his breath touches her skin….she is lost.
"Baneee (pauses) I am sorry"
The words sear her ears…his touch so gentle and numbing to the soul.
Her back arches…
"Baneee".

Is Pain truly the price of love?

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Hello all,
Sweetu is back. Many of you may have not have known but I stopped writing. I still have. Was emotionally blackmailed to continue therefore I have. Yet only this once.
Am still thinking if to continue or not.
Sorry if this part was in any way inappropriate as I truly did not do so on purpose….sorry.
Waiting for comments.
Luv
Sweetu
P.S. Ignore all grammatical and spelling mistakes, am tired and not really sure of what I wrote.

Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago