Breathing...only for you UPDT prt3 pg8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Dude... that was really good!! please continue!

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Nabila

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetu144

15 minutes later and out he walked…a loose robe hung from his body…his hair was wet and droplets still clung to his body.

mmm😳..........I can so imagine that!

Fab part my jaan!👏

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Meera

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

WOW Awesome work Sweetu!!! I'm so glad u started another ff!!! It was really an awesome beginning!! I can't wait till u continue!!!! Please do so soon!!!
Luv ya,
Meera

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Sophia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

OOOHHHHH MMMYYYYYYY! 😳 😳 😳 that was realeee good, 👏 👏 did i read at the end u say BORING, ok you need to take a few and read what u wrote, IT WAS AWESOME, 👍🏼 you are such a good writer. 👍🏼 👍🏼 Look frwrd to the next chap. Post soon Plz.

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Nabila

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

sweetu!!............update soon na!!😛

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Wow that was really good,brillant
Hun please write soon

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shafaq

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

wwwwwooowww..!! hunii tht was grr88 .u r jst soo amazinggg....!!!
hunii do updatee soon....!!
will be waitingg eagerlii....!!!!!!!
aww man.....
thnksxxx
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Khushboo Bindra

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

That was breathtaking. The way he gave into lust was scandalous. Him kissing her raw... a dream come true. Great job, I believe you are one of the few writers who can get my BP high first thing in the morning (US time) with such a sexy tantalizing read.

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sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part 2

Why does loving you hurt so…

How would she have known…that 3 hours after he had shouted, loosing his cool, at her…. Rasshi had finally exploded explaining all….
At first a pained expression entered him…but that soon changed to anger and love.
Turning away from his family…he had left the house not to return until the early hours of the morning….where he had promptly gone to her room…
Opening it softly…allowing only the light to touch her …he had seen her tear stained face…and uncomfortable posture...it made his heart scream and lips throb…yet still he was confused…besides hiding all from him she had lied….lied to him…didn't she trust him…he felt betrayed…but at the moment he felt in dire need to comfort her but more himself…so he took her in his arms...allowing her body to curl to the warmth of his…
He takes her to his room…where he allows her body to rest against the pillows….
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Ignoring the question she heads down hiding herself from the family…she meets eyes with his briefly but turns away walking out of the house…needing to overcome her grief…she does not return until the late hours of the night…..

As soon as her footsteps enter the house she hears her name being thundered…
"Bani"
Shocked, her glistening eyes look up to meet his…shock takes over her body numbing it of all movement.
His eyes were so deep…
Her heart thuds faster…his footsteps approach….
His eyes are burning….
"Bani" he says once more…but this time softly…with more remorse but still holding that tone of threat…
Minutes pass in silence as she wonders why he cares so much about her when just the night before he had severely broken all ties….

Turning away from her gaze he grabs her wrist forcing her up the stairs to his study…where he locks the room behind in a soft click…
His back faces her….he can feel her trembling (still holding her arm)…he wants to do so much but his anger has overpowered all emotions…
Having not heard from her all morning and coming back home just to acknowledge that she had not returned had sent him into turmoil…

Minutes pass…his breathing is husky and deep….he finally finds his voice and mutters…
"Why did you do this to me baneee" Tone soft and gentle
She does not reply….stays quiet….
Asks again "Why did you do this to me Bani….why" Tone harsher
She does not reply…her mouth is numb….
He turns around gripping her hard…shouting now…he has lost his cool…

Holds her hand tightly…..brings her back to his chest, her hand is tied behind her back, in his hold…he whispers harshly…. "Am I hurting you baneee….am I…"
She squirms…pain shoots through her arm….yet still her mouth remains shut…instead tears blossom but nothing falls….her breathing is heavy….eyes burning….his hold is cruel and firm…
Breaths with a husky tinge of passion and cruelty… "Am I hurting you bani…."
Holds her tighter….she squirms still yet….
"Am I bani"….whispers into her ear….his breath upon her neck…
Lips roving over the delicate area of her bare neck…marking her…
She squirms….but alas to no avail
In between breaths she manages to mumble "please….leave me…."
He laughs huskily….his breath upon her ears…
"Leave you….now why would I want to do that" whispers softly…
She shudders…the pain is intolerable…but still she holds on….not wanting to wither in front of him…
He trails his finger …pain killingly slowly along the line of her already tense neck….as if in a motion to soothe all pain….instead he deepens her discomfort….shhhhhhhhh
She breaths….whimpering…
"please"….

His muscles are tense….his mind is awash with so many emotions…so many things…his eyes are piercing……
The news he had just found….the truth…all that had been hidden had finally been unveiled.

"Tell me baneee" whispers it in an icy tone…. "When were you planning on telling me…."
Her back stiffens, his words… she understands all
….Her mouth forms in a sudden plea to wail…but she stays silent…allowing all pain to stroke her body…
"Tell me bani" hold is harsh and firm…..tone is a little gentle…

His breath tingles slowly down the length of her neck…his grip tightens….." tell me baneee"

A single tear falls…the pain is killing…but she tunes out of it….finally whispering…
"Sorry"
Another tear falls…
"I did this for you…."

His mind is still awash with confusion…but right now he needed answers…..
"How long have you been hiding this from me" The words are bitten out with a touch of threat….

She whimpers as his hold tightens more…
"I…I…"
And finally in a mass of tears she says all…
All is revealed…

She finally lets out a penetrating groan…one filled with anguish pain and passion….as soon as her moan of surrender is let loose…his lips find hers loosening his hold….as if soothing……
The soft movement of his upon hers is all that is needed to soother her of her aches…
Her mark tinges cruelly…..as his fingers burn in a fire of rage and intensity….
His touch in unforgiving…and marks her at every step…
She does not resist instead welcomes all….
So brutal but to her is pure passion…
Only hours later do his actions soften…she whimpers… his mouth trails the lengths of her marks….it trails all over….soothing…..

The pure satisfaction of having you as mine...is true bliss…

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Hello all you lovely and sweet readers of mine…Finally decided to update!
Hope you like it...had to change the story a little…like I said is a short ff…and here jai finds out the WHOLE truth…even about jigs and property….all!
Do leave comments am waiting!
Do excuse if this part is in any way inappropriate. Next part will be updated soon…
Luv
Sweetu.
P.S. Sorry if this is boring…
Sorry for making my Jai Walia sound "demanding"...yet all shall be revealed soon...so please...relax! ( whatever i write i always have a reason for it!)😳

Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago