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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will try to update soon but i cant promise as i said before really busy this week!! thanks for ur wonderful comments 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG!! LAMO!! What a laugh riot!! 😆 😆 😆
awesome part yaar! 👏
plzz continue ASAP! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 that was too good pls update soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i wounder who is at the door...cant wait to find out... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg.. that was hilarious!! 😆
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loved the part where Appu<jai> tells pushkar that my car will get a cold!
hilarious!! keep it up!!

plz do continue!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 9

hey everyone arghhh after seein Jai n pia lil one night stand really made me mad at jai n i wanted to kill him but dont worry i didnt hehehe as i am bak to my senses now n i couldnt make it all that funny so forgive me if it isnt!

So pushkar with all his might comes across this big mansion tells bani to sit quietly in the car n to not touch anything! but the he thinks again n takes bani out too n knocks on the big door...while waitin jai talks talkin again
Jai- yeh kis ka ghar hai...Nanaji
pushkar- mein tumara Nana nahi.. pushkar hoon aur yeh tumara ghar hai!!!
jai- meri ghar really how lovely...so y r u here?
puskhar hits his head thinking where did i end up? n y isnt anyone openin the door? n suddenly bani speaks...
Bani- cuz appu we live here...
Jai- really u guys live here but i thought i did o well...but u know kajal we shouldnt have left the car itni sardi hai..meri car ko to kal fever hoga zaroo...masi always says dont stay outside too late n come before dark...n looks around...relaizes its dark outside n says oh no masi toh buhot maragi! n starts banging the door!!!
suddenly a person opens the door n is shocked...
person- who r u ppl?
puskhar- ahh.....looks around for Jai who was beside him n sees that bani took him away n is helpin her catch flies in the night...he goes n gets jai n brings him infront...ahhh do u know him?
the person looks at him n says - no i think u have the wrong house this is house is Mr.Ranveer Mital's house
jai smiles at him says- gud morning...how r u... puts in foot in to go when pushkar pulls him bak n says sorry to the guy n jai escapes again
Pushkar disppointed grabs jai n bani who r like tryin to catch flies n r laughin there heads off...suddenly the man calls him again sayin i know who this man is he is Doc.Walia...ahhh he lives near here....n explain the address to pushkar who gets really happy!!!
Finally puskhar once again comes but this time puts bani in the car so she couldnt take jai n fly off again tryin to catch flies...knocks on the door n our dear tony comes out..all shocked..
tony- mr.walia?apa
pushkar- o thank god u know him well he kinda got drunk so i brought him home plz take care of him i have to go n bye!
pushkar gets in his car n leaves...n takes bani home n puts her to bed!
In the morning Jai wakes up holdin his head...n then he remembers last night n seein bani n dost...he thinks omg this gurl is goin to be the end of me i better save myself now before i am dead!!!! tony comes in with coffee...
Jai- ahh tony did everyone see me when i came home last night???
tony- no sir only i answered the door everyone else was a sleep
Jai- thanks tony u may go...tony goes but then jai stops him....ah who dropped me home i dont remebr comin by myself was it a girl?
Tony- no sir there was a young man who was very much in his senses i didnt see any girl
Jai thinks wat how is this possible if i was with Kajal..n looks up to see his mirror n sees bani anger sayin duffer NOT KAJAL BANI!!! jai turns around thinks kal raat ka nasha lagta utara nahin ...n gets up n thinks who was the boy? n wat if...oh no woh toh gaya poor dude he doesnt know who he kidnapped god knows wat she must of done to him n smiles....comes out of the shower...n thinks but if she didnt reach home but o well y do i care....i dont know wat kind of alchol she gave me but seriously i didnt know it could have this kind of effect...n goes to his closet n thinks wat should i wear...hmmm suddenly he hears a voice sayin the white one...jai says thanks n looks in the mirror to see bani behind him...TUM...turns around she isnt there...n thinks oh no wats happenin to me....n then now he is all ready n about to leave when he sees bani again n is shocked n before he can say somethign she says dont forgot ur pants u idot! jai looks down he was pantless...n looks up to see no one...poor dude is really scared now n goes to masi..
jai- wat happens if someone does black magic on u?
masi-hmmm i dont know beta i have never done it on anyone..
jigs- i;ll tell u..that person doesnt seem to be his senses anymore n the person...gets cut off by masi sayin that there is no one black magic in this house n its pure n that y r u askin jai?
jai shakes his head sayin no reason jus curious u know...n leaves to work...
Bani on the other hand wakes up....n looks at the clock n screams OMG i am LATE SHIT!!!!!!!!!! n runs quickly gets ready n runs downstairs....n sees no one is home execpt her house maid susanne-
bani- susanne where is everyone?
susanne- everyone left as everyone had to go somewhere early in the morning u came late last night so..
Bani- oh no i got drunk again...tell me i didnt bring a begger home again!
susanne laughs n tells her no that pushkar brought her home n then she suddenly asks whose appu as u talked about him so much durnin ur drunk state n kept sayin appu nahi aisa nahi!!!! hehehe bani gets the wrong idea...hahahah but really she was tellin him that he didnt know how to catch flies....so she kept sayin asia nahi... suddenly bani remembers most of the stuff n thinks she will kill that doc if he ever comes nears again....ahhh how dare he touch me how long was i out?
susanne- hmm u left around 10 came home around 3am n pushkar u were appu most of the time n that beggar..
now bani gets all mad n thinks wat does that stupid doc think he can hang out with me for 5 hours!!! no never...omg it wasnt like he was drunk n ouch y the hell is my ankle hurtin so much n suddenly remebers work...n leaves
Pia is workin on her laptop when bani enters...
Pia- bani...how r u where u been since yesterday no phone call u know i was soo worried...n o ya how was ur appointment r u fine now...
Bani thinks ever since that appointment i have gone nuts...but not to be rude nods her head...suddenly pia says u know Doc.walia he is so kind i was jus readin in the paper how he made a lot of donations towards the hopostial out of his own pocket money....u met him right..
Bani smiles - yes yes i have met the great man indeed i have...so kind..yes yes...n thinks poor pia doesnt know how she is callin nice...come on lets go see him n congrats him come one...n grabs bani n takes her along ...
while jai is sitin in his cabin n jus about to relax when he hears..WAT how dare u call him call him right now....n gets up n says oh no god plzz no...dont let it be her...plzz....n hids under his table n starts prayin....
suddenly his door brusts open poor dude is really scared n peeks n sees no one...n thinks thank god it was a dream thank thank...n gets up n suddenly pia n bani actually comes...n JAI SCREAMS!!!
Jai- ahhhh plzz dont hurt me i swear leave me alone!!! plzzz shoo!!
pia- mr.walia wats wrong??? r u ok?
jai- reliazes its not a dream n that bani is here n standin behind pia n thinks oh no..n smiles o sorry i thought nvm how can i help U?
Pia -i came for no reason jus to see how things were going n see ur hospital n to congrats u n...her phone rings n pia leaves the room....
Both jai n bani r alone...jai is scared n bani is furious...

hehehe u guys r gonna have to wait for the next one so if i have time tom the next part will be up or friday forsure 😊 i hope u enjoyed n had some laughs!


Edited by lil_isha15 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!! isha! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! lolz! Catchin Butterflies! LOLZ! i could imagne them! Sorry to mention in ur FF but i agree wit u! IM mad at jai 2! Newayz back to ur LOVELY FF! OMG HAHAAH JAI IS SCARED OF BANI! that is ADORABLE! hahah! And he keeps on seein her! AWWWWWWWWWWW! ppoorr dude things its alchol! LOLZ! that was realllyyy GOOD! i loved it! like alwayz 😳 cant wait to read more of ur ff!!!

Edited by loranlee4u - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: loranlee4u

OMG!!!!!!!! isha! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! lolz! Catchin Butterflies! LOLZ! i could imagne them! Sorry to mention in ur FF but i agree wit u! IM mad at jai 2! Newayz back to ur LOVELY FF! OMG HAHAAH JAI IS SCARED OF BANI! that is ADORABLE! hahah! And he keeps on seein her! AWWWWWWWWWWW! ppoorr dude things its alchol! LOLZ! that was realllyyy GOOD! i loved it! like alwayz 😳 cant wait to read more of ur ff!!!

aww thanks maddi wat would i do without u ppl😆😃

Edited by lil_isha15 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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bechara jai!!!!!
actually funny...jai!!! 😆 😆 😆
isha that was awesome!!
awww i didnt get my pm
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: jigna_07

bechara jai!!!!!
actually funny...jai!!! 😆 😆 😆
isha that was awesome!!
awww i didnt get my pm

reallly???? omg who did i send that too😲😆 ur not the only one i have done that to srav so many times i either send her the wrong thing or send it n she didnt get it

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