ff-Tumse Mil Ke updated!! Final part g46 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
hey isha
that was so sweet. i love ur ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
wow! that was hilarious!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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plzz continue soon!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i LUV LUV LUV ur fanfic.. its hilarious! awww.... JB would look so cute drunk 2gether!! awesome part nad i cant WAIT for da next part!!! update soooooooon!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dont worry guys by tom i should have the next part really glad u all like it so much 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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funny as.. and i loved it..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks buddy.... πŸ˜ƒ u r a real sweet heart..... 😊

Thankzzzz a looooot..... πŸ˜ƒ

it was awesome, simply superb...... πŸ‘

u know its alwayz fun to c drunk people or read abt them..... they behave in such a weird way..... πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just read all the parts its great πŸ‘
and hilarious too.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww thanks every glad u like jai n bani bein drunk πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys here is part 8 i hope u all like it n have fun readin it 😊

Part 8
both jai n bani look n r shocked!!!!! to see that some shaadi bhraat is passin by 2 in the morning by there car...with the dhulan in a doli n the dhula on a horse... n cars some followin bak n goin towards the hotel near bye
jai puts bani down asks wat u put in my coke has i am seein elephants n horses!
bani- me too....
dost- me three

all three walk n jai goes n trips n almost falls on a woman n she turns around n ready to slap him when bani comes n says sorry on his behave n the lady leaves
bani- if u had to tease a woman would of found someone younger u men n ur taste...
jai- i wasnt tryint to tease i was goin to ask for my car
bani- car u had a car..

suddenly a teenage girl comes n asks them to join in n dance bani n jai who were fully drunk n had nothin bettr to do joins them...all three of them get seperated in the crowd...jai gets bumped n is near the doli n goes to see the dhulan to see she looked a lil like bani n so he thought it was bani...n starts talkin

jai- kajal ur gettin married n u didnt bother telling me u were gettin married n my god u got ready really fast n i didnt even buy u a gift...n u know wat esle now i am goin to talk to ur husband about ur drinkin habits not gud at all...n u take care of that ankle poor dhulan is all confused but reliazes he is drunk...n ignores him n smiles n jai leaves n bumps into dost..

jai- hey dost u know kajal is gettin married n she didnt bother telling us..she looks really pretty though i must say she got ready really fast...n wonder if we hadnt passed by she would of never gotten married...dost is shocked n jai tells him to go say bye to kajal...n hurry before she leaves dost is confused n does wat he says

bani on the other hand sees the dhula...goes to him n he looks lil like jai...so she does the same
bani- APPU ur gettin married n u tell me now...thats not fair u didnt tell me!! o well dont fall of this horse n i promise i never tell ur wife about ur serect drinkin habits n i am gonna go tell her some tips on how to train u to be a better person n smiles n leaves the dhula n his near by relatives all confused...

bani sees dost n yells- hey u know appu is gettin married n he didnt bother to us...yeh doc bhi na
poor dost is really confused now as jai told him bani was gettin married n now bani tellin jai is gettin married...n so he blurts out r u both gettin married? n u didnt tell me! suddenly jai finds them both n jai n bani r shocked seein each other

jai- hey ur gettin married!..n how u undress so fast? r u runnin away? hey i am not helpin u...poor dhula...let me go find n console him...
bani- me ur gettin married...n same to u how u get undress so fast? n how did u get off that big horse?? n r u runnin away
suddenly both brains work n start laughin like mad ppl n dost who is still confused...n the last thing needed was rain...THUNDER roared n soon all the bhraatis were gone with jai n bani wavin good bye in the rain...n a song plays in the background as jai bows n both pretend there in a ball room dancin away

Hai na bolo
Dil ye mera kho gaya
Haay ye kya ho gaya
Ye kaise ho gaya
Hote hote ho gaya
Hai na bolo
Hai na bolo

once again all three of them hold hands n start walkin in the rain...n reach jai's car finally to...
bani screams happily- PUSHKAR tum yahan!!!
puskhar- di u apna per si drink ki
bani- o fo pushkar here meet my frand...mr...mr....appu
jai- nahi...mera naam kuch aur hai...woh...snaps his fingers tryin to remeber
pushy- its ok appu
jai- ha appu hi hoga n smiles n offers him a lil bit of wats left in his coke bottle...which is liqour which bani kept refilling makin him belivie it was coke
bani- take it very tasty...n forces in his mouth leavin pushy coughin
pushkar- di isi mein apna sharab mix ki apne
bani- shhhhhhh whisper haan! per appu ko nahi pata

pushkar- hits his head with his hand n tells bani to get in the car n tells jai that to leave his car n take in the mornin as he will drop since he isnt in his senses...n jai's respond to that was..
jai- per meri car ko sardi lag chai gi ( my car will get a cold)
pushy- nahi lag gay gi u come with me...n forces him in the car...n drops jai first after searchin his car for an address...finally he takes jai n bani by there hands n goes to jai's front door n knocks...n the person who opens the door is shocked!

any guesses to who answered the door? i update the next part soon but i am gonna be really busy this week so i might not have it updated till wed 😊

Edited by lil_isha15 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg! tat is sooooooooo funny =)) i love ur fanfic! it cracks me up! its so different! haha appu and kaajal are getting married! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

continue soon! who do they see???

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