ff-Tumse Mil Ke updated!! Final part g46

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Tumse Mil Ke

hey everyone well i am writin a new fanfic which is really n i mean really differnet from wat u all have read so...😊 scroll down to read the first part

Jai Walia- isnt a businessman i was sick n tired of him bein that so he is a doc...whose really famous...kindhearted..sweet...dansing also his father had left huge fortune for jai n jigs but in the will everything is named for jai

Bani dixit- has 2 younger sibs...rano n pushy ( told u its diffierent) both parents died in a car crash works for a big company whose boss is no other than Pia whose character is completely different from...also bani is an acholic to know 😉how come ur gonna have to read

Pushy- the 2nd oldest a real brat being the only boy...also loves Bani n rano but really lazy

Rano- she isnt sweet at all towards bani is fine with pushy she loves them very much but is angry at bani for a certain reason n very straight forward

Pia- a big company owner whose really lonely but really sweet kind n not money-minded has no family 😊

Masi- Jai's n jigs masi whose always wishes the best for them n is after jai to get married

Jigs- she is divorced n has 2 kids shail n anu...she wants her kids to have the best in life n doesnt care for anyone else expect her kids her n wants the entire Walia fortune in her name but doesnt mind jai havin but always plottin ways to get it

Aditya- whose bani's Chacha n is a real sweetheart n also jai's friend who is hasnt met in years so will meet in

Ranveer- a doc at Jai's hospital really jealous of jai's sucess n always wants to beat him

Anu- carefree lil brat who gets whatever she wants

Sahil- another brat whose goal in life is to party n to find his dream girl

if any charcters i missed i add them in later as the story will go on u'll see them hope u guys will like my fanfic

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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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YAY!!! Isha!!! Can't wait for the 1st part!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww the chracterss sound....gudd...
will belukin forwardd to read it.....!!!
but bnai an alcoholic..
btt i am sure u will have somethingg gud in stock for us ....!!
thnksxxx...
mwah !!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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YAYYY!!!! sounds reallyy really interesting! Cant wait to read it! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

Party happening loud...whose who is at this party some call it party of the year...this is Pia Mittal's party as she has gotta a big busines contract...the sole owner of Mittal industries as wealth as she n same time she is very kind hearted n generous...her best friend that moved to mumbai recently who is also her new assissant
Pia- hello bani where r u?? y havent u come to they party
Bani- i am in the parkin lot i am gonnna be here soon
Pia- k hurry up
Bani comes wearin a black dress with a red roses on the top n bottom
Bani- pia congrats so hows everything going?
pia- cuz of ur hardwork i have gotta this contract...i told u bring pushar n rano where r they?
Bani lowers her eyes n then says- pushar he had another party to attend n rano..she wasnt feelin well
Pia- bani dont lie to me...cuz u cant but thats ok if they didnt want to come u enjoy the party though

Bani walkin around hears some women talkin..
woman# 1- did u hear that pia hired this gurl that..
woman # 2- o ya i did omg wats her name bani dixit i think
woman # 1- shameless u know but pia is very generous...these type of gurls dont derserve this

Bani who has tears in her eyes now thinks- the thing that i wanted to run away from is followin me here too! n goes n bumps
into someone
Man- hey arent u pia new assissant the gurl who
bani- who told u this??
man(laughs)- everyone knows ur workin for pia mittal n if ur with her u really arent hidden from the world...n plus i dont know
how Pia can trust someone like u

bani who couldnt control her tears runs to the bar n starts drinkin..drinkin n drinkin..finlly pia sees bani n goes to her
the cameras start flashing a report goes n says he's here...doc jai walia is here..
in a sexy black suit comes jai walia famous doctor n the best of the best...no one could steal the spot like he could...
party was goin n jai holdin his drink smiling away
pia- hello mr.jai waila
jai- plz call me jai
pia- i hope ur enjoyin the pary jai
jai- of cousre very gud

finlly pia sees bani n goes to her
Pia- bani wats wrong y r u drinkin so much
bani who has tears her eyes says- pia i told u i didnt want to be here!!! but u didnt listen u told me everythin be alright but no!
n bani runs away

without lookin where she is goin she bumps directly into jai n spills his n her drink on him...drunk as she was instead of aplozing she yells at him
Bani- r u blind cuz of u i dropped my drink
Jai- omg ur the one who bumped into me n dropped everything one me!
bani- wat r u lookin at get out of my way
Jai- wow till today i never thought there could be such a rude person
Bani- well now u met one k happy?? so now move out of my way
Jai reliazed how drunk n out of her senses she was did wat she said n moved to catch her fall as she culdnt even walk properly
Bani- ahhhhhhhhhhhhh leave me!!!
jai- u know wat fine
n drops bani on the floor whose really mad now leaves the party..poor pia reliazes that bani has gone missin n goes to serach for her
Pia- hmmm excuse me did u see a girl in a black red dress whose pretty drunk??
jai- laughs n says o that physco she left n thank god!
pia makes a funny face n leaves
Jai thinks to himself that before he meets more crazy ppl like that he'll jus leave too...

drivin away his phone rings
jai- yes masi i comin right now dont worry...n suddenly his phone gets switched off as he lost network...
suddenly his car stops too! poor jai has a phone n car that doesnt work! its a empty road where there are no sign of cars taxis
but rain for sure...thunder roars as jai thinks to start walkin when he suddenly sees someone...

hope u guys like it! 😊 do let me know if i should contiue!

Edited by lil_isha15 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow awesome fanfic dear
do post the next part soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww... sounds really good.....

so when r u starting it???? looking fwd for it....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 do post the next part soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow....gr8 ff.its seriously totally different 😉 ......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww...isha...awesome start 👏 👏 👏

poor bani...hug for her 🤗 itz okay....jai's coming for you 🤗 great part, hun!!! can't wait till u continue 😛

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