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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks every one for ur comments i update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 6

sorry its kinda bornin but forgive the next part be much better ๐Ÿ˜Š

someone yells omg n both jai n bani turn to see at the door...dr.rai...masi and yes our dear jigs
jigs- omg bhayia yeh wat happened???
masi- oh jigs chup..walks to jai n asks .jai yeh ladki kaun hai? n smiles
jai- o no masi nothing like that
bani- i am goin bye doc! n smiles n about to leave..when masi gets exicted
masi- teri naam kya hai beti
bani smilse and is about to say..when jai interupts
jai- masi she needs to go home..as her kids r at home worried
bani turns around givin jai a killer look n is about to say something when he grabs her by the arm n says
jai- i'll drop her to the door as she cant walk probably
bani n jai reach outside n bani takes his hands off n yells
bani- kids!!! do i look like i have kids!!! n y u lie to ur masi!!!
jai- cuz otherwise she'd make u marry me
bani- ewww who in the right mind would want to marry u!!
jai- very funny n now my driver will drop u home n plz dont ever come bak stay healthy
bani- i wil die but i wont ever come to ur hospital

jai goes bak to his cabin n asks masi how come she came? masi tells him that she n jigs came to give him lunch but here there is another story happenin ๐Ÿ˜‰
jai- no masi nothing like ur thinkin she is ahh...
masi- dont need to lie i know she doesnt have kids or a hubby u do know u cant lie very well n laughs

bani tells jai's driver to take her to office where the reciptionist whose a really pretty gurl...droolin over a maginze n when sees bani stands up...
Bani- sonam ab kiska naam ka bhoot savar hai!!
sonam- doctor jai walia n smiles
bani- ahahahahahahahah ur gone crazy...out of this entire world if u had to find something it was doc jai walia whose already has a lose nut
sonam- *sigh* pyar ki hai to tum jaiso ka darna..n laughs
bani- u know he is doc not a filmstar pretend sick n get an appointment
sonam- u know how it is to get one like months n months of wait!!!
bani- oh really cuz i jus came from meetin him

shocked as sonam begged bani to go bak there n take her with so she could see her dream man...but bani who fully refused didnt want to talk the man who injuried her n broke her fav. sandals! while bani is bein conviced poor mr.walia has to clean up his cabin with an injuried foot...suddenly he looks on the ground to see a heel...n thinks god out of all the ppl he had to make him meet this crazy woman..n remebers her starin at her sandals n makin funny faces he comes bak to reailty n makes a call..

bani reaches home to be greeted by adi n pushy
pushy- di wat happended?
bani- o nothing jus i broke my heel n feel
rano comes from behind
rano- whose accident did u do now?
adi- rano wat r u sayin
rano gives him a cold look n tells bani to come with her n takes her away..bani has tears in her eyes n asks
bani- rano wats wrong with u y do u talk to me like that??
rano- u know very well y..n
pushy comes from behind with juice in his hands
pushy- rano u'll never change...how is it di fault in any way!
rano- if she wasnt this stubborn we would of had everything today
pushy-rano now ur bein stubborn y cant u get over it...ur not the only one that lost!
there is a heated battle between the sibs n suddenly bani yells
bani- stop!!! fine rano tell me wat i should i do wat do u want me to do huh? tell me i'll do want me to leave the house i wil!
psuhy- no di no one is leavin this house..apprenntly rano has lost it n doesnt know wat she is sayin!
rano is real mad n yells- i dont know wat i am sayin well if that day when mom n dad asked di to get married if she hadnt rejected that proposal n left the house we would of never lost our parents..cuz of her they left the house in such a storm to find her!! if stopped bein stubborn n listened to them havent driven the car they would of been alive..i will never forgive u for that di u made us orphans!!! n leaves the room...bani is shattered n pushy tries to stop her but she leaves the house shutin the door behind..adi comes n puts his hand on a broken pushy...

bani is walkin out in the night n is drinkin again..n meets a begger who also is drinkin...she goes n sits beside him...

bani- hey dost

begger- bani ur here after such a long time

bani- i know but u know wat i almost gave up this ( pointin at the bottle) but then.. begger- u needed its support again

bani- yup...my sister thinks i killed my parents..me...bani has tears in her eyes...but how do i tell her that i die every moment..how do i tell her i loved them too n that i didnt leave the house...how do i tell her i didnt reject the guy..he rejected me n i went to stop him!!! n starts laughin out of no wear to see car right infront of her which suddenly stops n iches from bani whose still laughin...the person opens the door n its none other than our dear jai walia..whose shocked...

bani- hey doc! u also come to drink with me n dost...o welcome to the group cheers!!! n smiles jai is shocked out of his mind n is speechless seein bani in that condintion..

thats it frands hope u liked it!๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by lil_isha15 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was an awesome part hun!
๐Ÿ‘
plzz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww...poor bani ๐Ÿค— how dare that guy reject her?! ๐Ÿ˜ก

๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† bani has a drunk dost...i like it ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

can't wait for the next part hun ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kya yaar ek toh itne diin baad update ki woh bhi not that long..... ๐Ÿ˜ญ

its really goood.... ๐Ÿ‘

plzzzz plzzzz plzzzzzz cont soon.... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww isha, loved it!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Auditi

kya yaar ek toh itne diin baad update ki woh bhi not that long..... ๐Ÿ˜ญ

its really goood.... ๐Ÿ‘

plzzzz plzzzz plzzzzzz cont soon.... ๐Ÿ˜Š

sorry have been really sick n have a high fever n plus i jammed my finger durnin football n i didnt want to make it too long but next one i make it longer jus for u ๐Ÿ˜† i update soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: lil_isha15

sorry have been really sick n have a high fever n plus i jammed my finger durnin football n i didnt want to make it too long but next one i make it longer jus for u ๐Ÿ˜† i update soon!



aww you jammed your finger and you are sick!
lo siento mucho!(i am really sowie_)
feel better
on the other hand that part was awesome!!!
i can't wait til the next one!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhh i'm so S.O.R.R.Y buddy..... plzzzz GET WELL SOON...... ๐Ÿ˜Š & then u can post a longer 1.... ๐Ÿ˜Š

actually it was long.... but wht to do nevaaa satisfied with the length of good ff's...... ๐Ÿ˜›

GET WELL SOON ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Auditi

ohhh i'm so S.O.R.R.Y buddy..... plzzzz GET WELL SOON...... ๐Ÿ˜Š & then u can post a longer 1.... ๐Ÿ˜Š

actually it was long.... but wht to do nevaaa satisfied with the length of good ff's...... ๐Ÿ˜›

GET WELL SOON ๐Ÿ˜Š

hahah No need for sorries well i am glad u liked it i am fine now lol i might update today or tom depends if i get time as i still have to finsih my hwk๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by lil_isha15 - 18 years ago

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