ff-Tumse Mil Ke updated!! Final part g46 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
lol! fantastic.. plz do continue!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
its so different Jai walia is a doctor 👏 👏 and Bani is alcaholic hmmm its realy interesting ..... 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
awesome part ishaaaaaaaaa 👏 👏 👏

awww...poor kids...both sneezing 😆

ooooh....jai to gaya...can't wait for the next part...storming bani 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
thanks for all ur comments i'll be updatin soon 😃 i think u'll all like it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
awesome parts hun!! 👏 👏 👏
Bani is such a cuttteee drunk! 😆
plzz continue soon! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Part 5

jai opens the door to see a nurse...she needed some papers signed n a relif on jai face accures...he closes the door...poor bani falls as her heels break n holds her sandal thinkin this might come in use...
there is another knock on jai's cabin...
jai think the nurse forgot something n opens to find his nightmare infront of him...
Bani holdin a sandal with murderous look on her face which soon turns into a shock..
Jai n bani- TUM!!!
jai- omg plzz leave me alone u bhoot y r u hauting me....jai thought he was dreamin again confused bani who was already furious yells! takes her sandal n throws it hard on the floor n hits jai's foot...
bani- bhoot i look like a bhoot to u??? omg who gave u those awards for bein a doc?? i want to kil that person n cuz u i am in this state!!! n sneeze
jai whose hoppin on toe n in pain- me..u mean cuz of u i am in this state since this morning i have been sneezin non-stop n now i cant walk thanks!!! n sneeze!!!
bani- well thanks to u...i have been sufferin the same n thats y i cam here!!
jai- well it was ur fault n omg ur in ur senses but it stil seems as ur drunk! come to think of i am gettin the idea u have no brain
bani gives him one cold look n says she wasnt drunk!!! n even i she was where were ur senses??
jai- first i help u instead of thankin me ur yellin at me!!! never again will i help a drunk woman on the street late at night!
Bani- helped me!! u got me wet in the rain...i ate all that ice-cream god know wat else i might of done n u jus stood there n watched thanks alot! n thank u soo much for droppin me at the wrong house n wat else do u want me to thank u for??
Jai- omg...o ya i made u do all that...i was the one sayin o jai plzz i want ice-cream..o jai plzz lets dance in the rain...o jai
suddenly senior doc comes sees a woman with one sandal in her hand a doc on one foot now 2 n both yellin on top of there lungs n asks wats with all the shoutin..jai u should know better this is a hospital n there r patients n y r u yellin
Jai- woh..woh..yeh
Bani- he was checkin me n i hurt my ankle so i was screamin n he was screamin over me to tell me to be quite i dont who gave him the degree to be a doc... n smiles ..i mean whose that great person i personally want to kil..i mean thank him for makin mr.walia here such a wonderful doc! n smiles more
Senior doc- well the looks of it..its seems jai is the patient but anyways my name is Mr.Rai n u r
Jai- Kajal..
Bani confused... Kajal...no mera naam bani dixit hai
Jai- nahi tumara naam...kajal hai...doc dont worry u go she has some brain problems too n whispers in her ear did u drink before u came here?
Doc. Rai- well bani or kajal plz try to make too much noise n jai help her...poor soul doesnt know her own name
bani turns around smiles n takes her purse h hits jai but instead of yellin she whispers
bani- who the hell u think u r...changin my name...my name isnt kajal its bani u want proof n starts lookin in her purse n says that poor doc thinks i am crazy... poor jai is now defendin himself by standin on one side of his table..soon papers r flyin has bani tryin to get jai...slips on her broken sandal falls on the floor..n bani follows the broken sandal on the floor makes her trip too n is now on top of jai...both stare at each other n then bani gets up
jai gets up n says- ahhaah ur here to kill me arent u...who sent u after me..plz mera maa mujghe maaf kar do!!!
Bani- omg tum please mujhge maaf kar do!!!! ek to tumara room itna messy hai...arent hospitals r suppose to be clean
jai- o ya i made this mess nah...u came here like a hurricane n destoryed my cabin
bani goes near him who baks up to bends down n picks up her sandal...n says as walkin backwards
bani - never again will i step in this office aaagaiin ahhhh...trips n falls...again but this time she isnt able to get up
jai goes n asks if she is ok as bani is in pain n screams
bani- dont touch me...this is all ur fault ouch!!! somebody help me call the doc..
jai- u really dont have any brains...i am the biggest doc in town ppl come to me n ur callin someone esle let me see...
jai lifts bani from the floor n thinks where to put her cuz his cabin has turn upside but then he sees his table n puts her on the table n checks her ankle n bani screams!!!
jai- shut up plzz...u know wat do u drink 24/7
bani- no n u shut-up as it hurts...jai lifts her feet
jai- u do know i can break it n u could do nothing about it
bani- u better not otherwise i'll break u into two n u wont be able to do anything about it
n tells her its a minor twist n she should be fine n gives her some cold pills to cure her sneezes...bani gets up but falls down...but jai catches her
jai-man ur really in a hurry to get out of here...hold on i'll tell my driver to drop u off since u wont be able to drive
bani- y r u all the sudden bein so nice for?
jai- i am not i jus dont want u to get into an accident n come bak here n smiles
bani gives him a cold look this time slowly stands n starts walkin...n looks at her shoes n thinks my poor favourite shoes looks at jai n think its all his fault..
suddenly like jai sensed wat she said jai says- its not my fault u broke ur favourite shoes...
bani thinks did he jus read my mind or am i talkin out loud...
jai laughs n says dont worry i dont read minds i figured they were ur favourite cuz u were makin all those faces n starin at them..suddenly someone comes n yells omg!!!!!!!!! both jai n bani look at the door n r shocked...

who is that there shocked to see??? anyways i hoped u all enjoyed the part! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
plzz continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
wow! hun.. u gotta continue on!!

beautiful!! plz do continue!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
awww....awesome part ishuuuu!!! i can sooo imagine that!! poor jai....his cabin's a mess 😆 😆

i wonder who came to visit! can't wait for teh next part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
awesome part!! 👏 👏 👏
plzz continue soon! 😃

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