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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWWW...bani got rejected...woh ladka andha hai kya...humara bani ko regect kar di...o well...not thats where jai comes in ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwww poor bani! wats rong wit RANO!

omg that was hilarious! wen j and b were fightin lol!!! hahah!!! omg i couldnt stop ๐Ÿ˜†

ooo i wanna see jais reaction
๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ‘

Waitin fer ur updatesss

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Posted: 18 years ago
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isha just read all the parts from the begining.... loved ur ff...... really enjoyed myself..... its' funny to imagin Bani in a drunk state and Jai and Bani fighting .......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

isha just read all the parts from the begining.... loved ur ff...... really enjoyed myself..... its' funny to imagin Bani in a drunk state and Jai and Bani fighting .......

i am glad u liked it n enjoyed it n ya i usually have a gud time imaginin bani is a drunk state๐Ÿ˜† i'll be updatin soon!๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i wonder what will happen between them now....update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 7

hey everyone here is the 7th part Auditi i hope its long enough ๐Ÿ˜† n maddi i hope ur happy now

bani- yup...my sister thinks i killed my parents..me...bani has tears in her eyes...but how do i tell her that i die every moment..how do i tell her i loved them too n that i didnt leave the house...how do i tell her i didnt reject the guy..he rejected me n i went to stop him!!! n starts laughin out of no wear to see car right infront of her which suddenly stops n iches from bani whose still laughin...the person opens the door n its none other than our dear jai walia..whose shocked...

to see bani in a light pink..up to her knees dress n no shoes n a bandade ankle!

bani- hey doc! u also come to drink with me n dost...o welcome to the group cheers!!! n smiles jai is shocked out of his mind n is speechless seein bani in that condintion..

jai- tum yahan! wats wrong with u woman...first ur drinkin...2nd y r u out on the road in the middle of the night n alone...3rd looks down where the hell r ur shoes...wat r u doin here?

bani laughs- ur so funny doc well i am not alone on the road meet dost..the drunk man comes n shakes jai's hand while jai has a disgusted look on his face
jai- no ur goin home come n put on shoes as ur ankle will get worse...
bani- so wat if it gets worse tum bhi na appu ( dont ask me y i chose that name lol)
jai- appu!! whose that?
bani- tum
jai laughs goes in his car n gets a box out n gives it to bani... now bani whose fully drunk sniffs the box n says nope i dont drugs pushar says there bad! jai wouldnt help himself laughs n says this isnt drugs its shoes for u i bought them for u since ur other ones broke n was goin to ur house to give them to or ur neighbours n smiles.. bani like a gud girl puts her bottle down n ties her hand behind her bak n says
bani- pushkar says to never take things from strangers!
jai- whose pushkar n i am not a stranger u know me right...we met this morning
bani- O YEA!!!! i remeber dost this is the cute doc i was tellin u abut the phsyco one that broke my fav shoes n opens the box
bani looks at n its the same pair of shoes...she looks n gets all exicted n hugs jai whose jus stares at her...n she take them to her dost n says
bani- look my shoes thanks appu!!! n we should celebrate takes a sip n offers to jai who backs up sayin he doesnt drink...
bani- how is it possible u dont but u must have something!!!! plz nah hold on!
bani runs bak to her sittin place n sees a half empty coke bottle n gets an idea n is about to take it to n then thinks this is only half n appu will leave after that n thinks i cant let him jus have half n pours in liquor the one she was drinkin n thinks there we go now we can all have fun!
bani- appu here u go! its coke dont worry! its completely safe...n smiles jai who doesnt know wat to do takes n starts to drink n says
jai- think coke tastes werid...hippus best that i have ever hand n drinks on...
soon Jai is also laughin like bani...n is fully drunk along with the begger all three of them sing nursery songs..n suddenly jai looks n says

jai- kajal u see that bright stars there so pretty n bani is in all smiles n suddenly jai's phone starts to ring n its jigs phone he ignores the call n contiues to stare at the stars...n suddenly bani breaks his piece by screamin that she wants jilebis! n that there is man near by n they need to buy some n ice-cream also...jai who also joins in sayin n says n more of this coke...bani holds jai's arm as she cant walk n all finally come to daba....all three of them eat sweets jilebis...jai complains about not likin the coke n bani says she doesnt like the ice-cream...suddenly a bus comes n alot of ppl get off n there a couple of kids get off..soon the kids start playin around the fire n jai n bani stare at them...bani gets all exicted gets up goes to one of the kids n yells

bani- TAG!!!!!!!!!!!
all the kids start running even though bani is havin trouble soon she is runnin around like a kid n jai is watchin her...n he sees her coming forward n tags him...n wat else can he do he also runs behind him...n the begger soon also joins in n soon the entire daba is playin tag....

badal gaya mera jahaan
bas ek pal mein... bas ek pal mein...
mein ta kahan...kahan agaya bas ek pal mein
badal gaya mera jahaan...bas ek pal mein
tum ko dekh hai jab se...rehti ho tum isi dil mein mera
badal gaya mera jahaan!

its about 2 in the mornin jai n bani wave bye to everyone n head bak...n bani n jai r singing really loud n bad

Ye Meraa Dil Yaar Kaa Diivaanaa
Diivaanaa Pyaar Kaa Paravaanaa
Aataa Hai Mujhako Pyaar Me.N Jal Jaanaa......

as there walkin...bani falls n crys...jai asks if she is ok...which she nods too both stare at each other when dost comes n asks bani if she is okie dokie?? bani nods...
jai- u know u should take off those shoes there bad for u to walk in
bani- appu how will i walk then n wat if something sharp went in
jai smiles n picks her up n starts walkin but cant walk start either n asks bani- y do u call me appu?
bani suddenly loses her smile n dost comes from the bak n says that her dad use to call her that n her dad gave it a new defination it means a wonderful person! jai looks at bani whose looks at him n suddenly both look forward n shocked!!!!


y r they shocked got any guesses? i hope u all enjoyed my fanfic ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by lil_isha15 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

first!!!!!

OMG THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!! lolz! TAG! the so called COKE! lolz! EVERYTHIN! awsome! i was LMAO! lol!!!! AWWW THANK U SOO MUCH! im really happy! OOO y r they shocked! OMG! cant wait to read more!

love this FANFIC!๐Ÿ‘

LOV YA

maddi

Edited by loranlee4u - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
awww...ishaaaaaa!!! that was AWESOME!!!! poor jai drunk ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† i love it!!! awww...i feel soo sorry for bani....man...i really like this dost...he knows everything about her!!

awesome part hun!!! can't wait for the next one ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
man i thnk its Jigs!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg i am really falling off my chair.....
jai Walia became appu..... ๐Ÿ˜†

loved it,.....
kisko dekha yaar.... is aadhi raath ko...... i think its' pushky......

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