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lil_isha15 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for ur comments everyone! i update soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jigna_07

that was awesome shina!!!!!!!!!!!

hi hun...u got confused😆isha wrote it😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG! ISHA! that ROCKED! lolz! LOLZ! Lozl!!!!!!! hahaha Bani being an alcoholic! 😆 and jai and bani meetin! and all the others

ahhh how cute!!! dancin in the RAIN!!!! AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg how funny them givin names and she thinks Jai's name is Kajal! 😆

too good yaar

im still laffin imagnin it! lolz!

LOVED IT!
i reallt LOVED IT!
OMG PLEASE UPDATE IT ASAP!
waittinn to read more HUN!!!
lolz

btw hows updatin fer Hungama next???
let me no if ya can

CONT. ur FF! its awsome!!!!

lots of love alwayz
MADDI

Edited by loranlee4u - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

While drivin bani suddenly yells
Bani- JAI STOP THE CAR!!!!!
quickly jai does wat bani said n asks her wats the matter?
bani- i forgot my wine bottle n i think i left it behind it must be feelin cold...makes a sad face
jai- omg u stopped me for that...n its a bottle it doesnt get cold
bani- but i want it now!!!!!
jai- listen kajal...i buy u a new one once we get the city ok
bani- ok...comin bak into smiles
Jai thinks hey bhawgan when we gona reach the city n when this problem be off my bak!!
As jai is drivin bani's cell start ringing but she fell a sleep...jai stops the car n sees his phone got signal n couldnt stop smiling!
bani wakes to see that they arrived in the city
Jai- kajal where do u live
bani- me....mein...to...waha
jai looks to see a an ice-cream shop n nods his head thinkin god...
bani- i want ice-cream buy me some now!!!
jai- fine fine...u stay here ok...sit here...where do u sit
bani- here
jai comes bak to see bani not there anymore but across the street with her shoes in her hands n walkin n eattin chocolate...quickly he goes n gets he thinks about yellin at her then he thinks ppl might they he kippnaped her as she isnt in her senses..
bani- oh thanks jai u know i live 10mins from n there they sell the best gilabis u take me there k
jai like a kid goes in all smiles n says yes take me to the gilabi stand near UR house...
Finally after stopping at every stand in the way bani reaches her house n jai parks her car n calls his driver...
He looks at n house n reliazes Bani made me run around the city when her house was walkin distances from where they were!
jai- this is ur house nah
bani- yup n thank u want to come n have wiskey
jai- nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean next time..n thinks which i hope to god never comes agian!
jai car comes n he leaves...bani knocks on her door to see some elder man.
man- bani beta...ur in the wrong house but dont worry pushar is here he'll take u home he camin lookin for u
pushy takes bani home..which is next door
pushar- Di where were u everyone was so worried...n r u drunk?
bani- no pushar i am not drunk jus a lil
Rano- leave it pushar she is always like this i'll take her to her room...
bani- nah rano i mean i jus drank a lil woh pia ne kaha
rano- ok di jus stop it n go to sleep n we'll talk in the mornin!
adiyta- rano y r u so rude to ur sis?
rano- u know y.... n leaves

Jai reaches his house to see everyone sleepin n sneaks into his room...he takes off his jacket n his hand goes into his pocket to see a braclet n thinks oh this must be kajal's...n then smiles thinkin crazy gurl.
Masi comes from behind n asks whose the crazy gurl is she pretty wats her name where does she live?
Jai laughs- masi she is no one jus some drunk gurl i met...
Masi- well she has to be speaical for u to remember her right..
Jai - hmmm well she was pretty...her smile jus like a kid...very crazy n laughs
masi- do u know her name?
jai- i asked but she couldnt remeber so i called her kajal
masi- kajal pretty name n now u go to sleep i see u in the mornin

Bani wakes up in the mornin to have a huge headache...n starts sneezin n suddenly she starts remeberin stuff from last night...
bani thinks jai whose that? or was it rupa o god whoever it is i am gonna kill him for feedin my so much ice-cream now i think
i have gotta a cold...wait till i get a hold of him...n i think he made me go out in the rain too...god wat a cruel person! looks at the time n thinks cant be late for work today...comes downstairs to see aditya..pushy n rano eating breakfast..
bani thinks looks like i drank a lil too much yesterday..
rano- naasha katam hoga yeh aur bhi..
aditya- o rano tum bhi nah come bani have breakfast
bani sneezes n says no i'll be late for office i see everyone in the evenin

Jai wakes up sneezin n thinks....god never make me that gurl again or me bein the doc will have to be the patient...first she makes me eat ice-cream n then dance in the rain..god i hope she reliazes wat a kind person i was to tolerate her!!! jai gets dressed n leaves for work...

Bani sneezin unstoppably...
pia- i think u should go to the docs...
bani- no there too much work to do here n how can i jus leave..
pia- i am tellin u after wat happened last night
bani- dont worry about last night n i guess i should go to the doc i'll be bak in a while i am goin to the one near here the Hope hospital..
Pia- i have a friend who works there he came to the party last night too his name...phone rings
Bani- i'll go now k

bani leaves the office buildin...while jai enter Hope hospital...will they meet??

ok thats it for this part i am sorry it was kinda boring but next be better 😊 hope u all liked it


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Posted: 18 years ago
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first!!!!!!
isha that ws awesome!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 so they both end up blaming each other i am just waiting what will bani think of Jai in her totalsense really looking forward to it and 😆 😆 i am just trying to imagin JAI WALIA as doctor if he was really a doc i would go daily to his clinic and nice FF
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ahhhhhhhh!!! soo FUNNYyyy! and cute! OMG i wish they meet! lozl ... omg y is rano so rude???

its too good gurl! very interestin ! cant wait to read more 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww...isha....that was such a cute part.....geez bani wants everything...chocolate..icecream..whiskey...jai 😳 😆 that was awesome hun!!!

can't wait for teh next part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

jai enters the buildin also sneezin..dr.ranveer comes along n smiles at jai
ranveer- yeh kya aaj humara favourite doc bemara hai?
jai- oh its jus a sneeze dont worry u get rid of me that quickly..n leaves
Bani enters the hostipal sneezin...goes to the reciptionist..
bani- i am here for a check up r there any docs avaiable?
reciptionist- hmm i dont know let me see....there is doc walia he jus came but i dont think he'll be seein anyone
bani- wat u mean wont be seein anyone...u know jus get him plz
reciptionist signs n tells her fine
Bani sits n keeps sneezin uncontrolably n sees a framed award for best doc of the year Jai walia n thinks where have i heard that name....hmmm...he cant be the one i was...he seems to strict n old to be that..she starts walkin n relaizes that he must be really gud got soo many awards...bani waits....an hour has past
suddenly a sneeze comes its way n bani closes her eyes n on the other side jai comes whose also sneezin both eyes closed n bump!!! n sneeze...both dont look at each other n jai walks to the reciptionist
Jai- cancel all my appointments as i am not feelin well n might go home n again sneezes n goes the other way
Bani to the reciptionist- i have been waitin for an hour n goin nuts sneezin where the hell r ur docs i dont care which one send me to one
reciptionist- well ur number was next but the doc jus came n canceled it
Bani- WAT canceled it how dare he!!!! tell me his room number isi ke to mein!!!! meri appointment cancel!!! ahhhh mein is doc ko jaan se mar do gi!!!
reciptionist- i will set u with another doc
bani- NAHI!!! i only want this doc!! n leaves findin his room...bani whose is killer mode bumps in to ranveer...
ranveer- apa kaha ja rahi hai?
bani- doc walia ka murder kar na...smiles n apa meri help kare gay??
ranveer- smiles n says not today u go ahead down the hall to the right
jai whose sleeping remembers last night n sees bani's face n wakes up thinking omg wat a nightmare n i thought i had to face it thank god she isnt any where near here...suddenly he looks out his cabin window to sees a stormin bani comin towards his cabin...shocked jai gets up rubs his eyes n says hey bhagwan yeh kya dekh raha ho mein? yeh kahan se agai? n walkin backwards trips n falls down...ouch..first the sneezin n now this...gets up thinkin maybe its a nightmare get up jai!!! n looks outside to see no bani n is happy n thnks yes it was a dream a horriable dream n hears a knock n goes to open it.....


hehehh who would be at the door?? hope u enjoyed the part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hahahahahahaha...... 😆

its good par itna chota kyun hai????? 😕

plzzz plzzz plzzzz cont soon..... 😊

well i can imagine the gr8 JW falling from his chair......😆 & bani beating him up with ummmm her shoe.....😉

Edited by Auditi - 18 years ago

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