ff-Tumse Mil Ke updated!! Final part g46 - Page 2

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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
Great Part Isha!!! I love the fact that this time I can read one of ur ff's from the beginning!!! poor bani!!! But ya ya Jai is coming for her!!! Please continue soon Isha!!!
Luv ya hun,
Meera 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
man....i can't wait for jai and bani to fall in love...the drunken patient...and the handsome doctor.....sparks will be flyyyyiiiiing 😳 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: inavars

man....i can't wait for jai and bani to fall in love...the drunken patient...and the handsome doctor.....sparks will be flyyyyiiiiing 😳 😆



I agree!!!😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
glad u all liked it i will update the next part soon! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: lil_isha15

glad u all liked it i will update the next part soon! 😉

can't wait!

yep...i'm stalking ur ff😈😎😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
😆 😆 i am almost done srav i have no life so i have been writin it all day 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 2

Jai suddenly sees someone...he cant tell who that it is but one thing was for sure that person wouldn't walk straight…n was walking nice n slow…jai started walking n soon could hear the person who was humming a really beautiful tune also was carryin something...jai rubbed his eyes n kept walkin suddenly the person fell n jai ran n caught the person jus on time...n it was none other
than our dear bani...thunder roars n both jai n bani stare at each other...suddenly bani breaks the slience by saying
Bani- TUM!!!! (who was completly drunk)tum...tum...put me down!
Jai who snaps out drops her again n she is on the floor..
bani- owwww tum pagal insaan koi aisa neechai rakth hai!
jai- lekin tum ne to kaha ta put me down so i did n gives her a evil smile
bani holdin a wine bottle takes a sip n gets up n points her finger on jai n is about to say something when suddenly...HIPPUS!!
jai who jus stares at bani n brusts into laughter
bani- y r u laughin at me?
jai- ur soo cute ur completly drunk but u still think u can argue with me
bani- i am not drunk i am jus...jus
jai- ok ok ur not drunk but y r u walkin alone around this time where's ur car?
bani- car woh...to o ya mein...mein chordi (smiles)
Jai- chordi kahan and why?? now confused n angry at her stupidness
bani- ur such a duffer havent u ever heard of dont drink n drive or is dont drive n drink? n its jus 2 blocks from here
Jai thinks to himself o bhawgan to help me u had to send only her n when she is fully drunk thanks!
jai- ok lets go get ur car my car is broken i'll drive u home n send ur car bak in the mornin ok!
bani on the other hand starts countin stars not payin attention to one word wat jai had said...frustrated he takes her hand n says but before he could
bani asks- tumara naam ka hai?
jai- jai walia..aur tumara kya hai?
bani-mera naam...mera naam bhi jai walia hai n laughs like a crazy person
jai- nahi mera naam jai walia
but then he knew there was no use so he took a deep breath n calmed himself down n told her once again to lets go get her car
finally bani understood n said ok i'll lead the way but went the opposite way...
jai signed n thought jai tu to gaya n took her the right way n both started walkin as n bani started even singing really loud!
jai- hmmm ok listen wats ur name tell me?
bani- i said mera naam Rupa hai
jai- rupa??...r u sure
bani- nahi mera naam jai walia, rupa, rano, pia, pushy hai n laughs
jai knew this wasnt workin n he couldnt jus keep callin her...her so he deicided to give her a name
jai- ok tumara naam hai...pagal...i mean kajal hai
bani- kajal...mera naam hai n smiles even more
Jai looks at her n how she jus like a kid lookin at the stars n drinkin aways with her wine bottle...
jai thinks if i wasnt in such a deserate situation i would of never tolerated her!
Suddenly out of no where rain starts pourin....
bani- rain...barish!!! o i love barish n starts dancing
jai- shit omg mera suit tumari car how far is it?
bani not payin attention to anything he is sayin grabs his hand n starts makin him slow dance
jai- wat r u doin
bani- dancin stupid
jai- no music
bani-music hai na listen n bani starts hummin
finally puts down her bottle poor jai cant do much starts to dance n suddenly he starts to stare at hum the tune it was odd but now he could hear music play in the background
Tumse yoon milenge
Humne socha na tha
Aur yeh zindagi
Tumse yoon milenge
Humne socha na tha
Aur yeh zindagi
Mehkege tumhari baho mei
Tumse yoon milenge
Humne socha nath
Aur yeh zindagi

n then the rain slows down jai wonders wat kind of gurl is she..who has no sense of who or where she is can make on feel so happy now even if jai wanted to be mad at her he couldnt...then he thinks jai this gurl has made u go crazy think logical u cant hear music this a drunk women!

they start walkin n bani starts to talk about stars n chocolates everythin a lil kid could talk about walkin the rain all jai could do was stare at her...n suddenly her car comes n she goes on walkin when jai asks
Jai- is this ur car
bani- haan!!!!! yeh meri car hai...aur yeh hai iski keys
jai- thank god!!!! give them to me n tell me where u live?? i'll drop u n return the car to u in the moroning k
bani- kajal...tum...goin?
jai- wat mera naam kajal nahni jai hai kajal tumara naam hai
bani- o sorry fine tum meri car nahni use kar sakta!
jai- fine i am sorry now kajal listen sit in the car quietly n we'll go home ok
bani who nods like a lil girl sits n both drive off...

ok everyone thats it for now i hope u all liked it! 😊 😊




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Posted: 19 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: lil_isha15


bani- car woh...to o ya mein...mein chordi (smiles) man isha........she's soooo cute....i can sooo imagine her drunk and saying that😆
Jai- chordi kahan and why?? now confused n angry at her stupidness
bani- ur such a duffer havent u ever heard of dont drink n drive or is dont drive n drink? n its jus 2 blocks from here
Jai thinks to himself o bhawgan to help me u had to send only her n when she is fully drunk thanks!
jai- ok lets go get ur car my car is broken i'll drive u home n send ur car bak in the mornin ok!
bani on the other hand starts countin stars not payin attention to one word wat jai had said...frustrated he takes her hand n says but before he could counting stars....that reminds me of the kid inKKHH
bani asks- tumara naam ka hai?
jai- jai walia..aur tumara kya hai?
bani-mera naam...mera naam bhi jai walia hai n laughs like a crazy person 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
wow! wat a ff!!

do continue!!

👏
lil_desi_goddes thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
wow! wat a ff!!

do continue!!

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