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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys shud i continue.if u feel bored plz let me kno.
bani is gonna cum to india in part 3.jai and bani gonna meet pretty soon.
i wud appreciate some response.i wudnt mind critics to my ff.i welcome them.it will improve my writin skils.
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Edited by frndsnstrngers - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Here part 3 hope u guys liked the previous parts.

PART 3

Jai went to his office.He was pleased to find his cabin renovated.The sight was very pleasing to his eye.He called for his secretary and ordered for a cup of coffee.He decided to go for a round around his office.

He was walkin observin his employes work.The usual sight of his female employees staring at him and observing every part of his body greeted him.There was also another known sight.His male employees snarling at their there (female)collegeas.

Suddenly out of nowhere a girl fell right into his arms. 😉 With effortless ease he managed to save her from falling.

Pushkar who was watching this from a distance reflected a most anguished face.He was actually dating that girl.He felt really bad(It was not knew to him).All his dates wud be more interested in his friend (rather boss)than him.

P:Vera u ok.

V:ya i am alrite.if Jai wudnt hav been here i wud hav been seriously injured.
with this she planted a kiss on jai's cheek

Jai expression didnt change.This was quite common to him.But though these situations were common to even Pushkar he frowned.

P:Sir mujhe apse kuch baat karni jai.

J:Ya sure com into my cabin.

Pushkar followed Jai into his cabin.
He closed the door and nearly blasted out to Jai.

P:kya sir aap bhi.all girls drool over u.aap kisi bhi larki ko chorte nahi hai.

J:maine kya kiye.i didnt drag her into my arms.she accidentaly fell into my arms.

P:Ya rite.all girls especially whom i date falls accidentaly on ur arms.

J:r u datin that girl.

P:ya !aur kya.

J:no its just she is not good.

P:kya sir ekto larkiya milti nahi hai aur jo aati hai wo aap par mar mitti hai.
he said all this with a puppy like face.

J:Dont worry mill jayegi kuch agle 30s saalo main.

With this both broke out into a laugh.

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Bani was in chicago attending the meeting.she finished it.early in the morning and decided to go back.
when she reached New York Rahul called her up and told her that her uncle is counting his breath so she must hurry and go to india to see him.Hurriedly she went to her house asked rano and pia to pack and they wud be off for India.No the exitement was scene in Bani's face but it was all fear and anxiety that it reflected.

B:pia plz jaldi karo.we hav to catch a flight.

P:di aap janti to hain na mujhe ye india jaise countries pasand nehi.aise nahi ho sakta ki u go and i will stay here.

R:Pia kuch to sharam karo.Uncle is in his death bed.stop arguin and hurry up.

Hurriedly they went to the airport.For some reason rahul had planned to acompany them.Maybe he didnot want to leave bani alone.

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Jai Pushkar and Aditya were also hurrying towards the Mumbai airport.Tarun Jai's college buddy was comin to town.Jai was very exited.He wud be seein him after a year.

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In the plane

Pia Rano and Rahul were sittin together.Bani's seat was quite far from where they were sittin.

Bani was sittin impatiently repeatedly glancing at the watch.Her co-passenger got were curious to know the reason behind Bani's impatience.
Hi am Tarun sablokaur aap miss...
B:Bani Dixit.

T:o,so aap inti ghabrahi hui kyun hai.is there any problem.or its just ur first time so ur afraid.

B:no nothin like that actualy i want to reach india as soon as possible.

T:wat do u do.

B:(bani didnt feel the need to hide that she was the mmd of Dixit enterprise)
I am the MD of Dixit enterprise.

T:So u r that Bani Dixit i have heard a lot about u.u hav achieved quite a lot of name and fame and yes money in four years.

B:Thanx.BTW wat do u do.

T:ah nothin much i am practising law.i am delhi based. Had com to NW for my clients work.Now i am goin to Mumbai to meet my friend.

They continued talkin.Time flew by.They reached Mumm#bai.

Bani and Tarun bid farewell to eachother.Tarun had earned yet another friend.And Bani felt that there was sombody whom she knew in Mumbai.

Rahul was watchin all this from a distance.He didnt like the sight.
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Hope u guys like it plz comment.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
Here part 3 hope u guys liked the previous parts.

PART 3

Jai went to his office.He was pleased to find his cabin renovated.The sight was very pleasing to his eye.He called for his secretary and ordered for a cup of coffee.He decided to go for a round around his office.

He was walkin observin his employes work.The usual sight of his female employees staring at him and observing every part of his body greeted him.There was also another known sight.His male employees snarling at their there (female)collegeas.

Suddenly out of nowhere a girl fell right into his arms. 😉 With effortless ease he managed to save her from falling.

Pushkar who was watching this from a distance reflected a most anguished face.He was actually dating that girl.He felt really bad(It was not knew to him).All his dates wud be more interested in his friend (rather boss)than him.

P:Vera u ok.

V:ya i am alrite.if Jai wudnt hav been here i wud hav been seriously injured.
with this she planted a kiss on jai's cheek

Jai expression didnt change.This was quite common to him.But though these situations were common to even Pushkar he frowned.

P:Sir mujhe apse kuch baat karni jai.

J:Ya sure com into my cabin.

Pushkar followed Jai into his cabin.
He closed the door and nearly blasted out to Jai.

P:kya sir aap bhi.all girls drool over u.aap kisi bhi larki ko chorte nahi hai.

J:maine kya kiye.i didnt drag her into my arms.she accidentaly fell into my arms.

P:Ya rite.all girls especially whom i date falls accidentaly on ur arms.

J:r u datin that girl.

P:ya !aur kya.

J:no its just she is not good.

P:kya sir ekto larkiya milti nahi hai aur jo aati hai wo aap par mar mitti hai.
he said all this with a puppy like face.

J:Dont worry mill jayegi kuch agle 30s saalo main.

With this both broke out into a laugh.

-----------------------------------------------------------

Bani was in chicago attending the meeting.she finished it.early in the morning and decided to go back.
when she reached New York Rahul called her up and told her that her uncle is counting his breath so she must hurry and go to india to see him.Hurriedly she went to her house asked rano and pia to pack and they wud be off for India.No the exitement was scene in Bani's face but it was all fear and anxiety that it reflected.

B:pia plz jaldi karo.we hav to catch a flight.

P:di aap janti to hain na mujhe ye india jaise countries pasand nehi.aise nahi ho sakta ki u go and i will stay here.

R:Pia kuch to sharam karo.Uncle is in his death bed.stop arguin and hurry up.

Hurriedly they went to the airport.For some reason rahul had planned to acompany them.Maybe he didnot want to leave bani alone.

--------------------------------------------------------

Jai Pushkar and Aditya were also hurrying towards the Mumbai airport.Tarun Jai's college buddy was comin to town.Jai was very exited.He wud be seein him after a year.

-------------------------------------------------------
In the plane

Pia Rano and Rahul were sittin together.Bani's seat was quite far from where they were sittin.

Bani was sittin impatiently repeatedly glancing at the watch.Her co-passenger got were curious to know the reason behind Bani's impatience.
Hi am Tarun sablokaur aap miss...
B:Bani Dixit.

T:o,so aap inti ghabrahi hui kyun hai.is there any problem.or its just ur first time so ur afraid.

B:no nothin like that actualy i want to reach india as soon as possible.

T:wat do u do.

B:(bani didnt feel the need to hide that she was the mmd of Dixit enterprise)
I am the MD of Dixit enterprise.

T:So u r that Bani Dixit i have heard a lot about u.u hav achieved quite a lot of name and fame and yes money in four years.

B:Thanx.BTW wat do u do.

T:ah nothin much i am practising law.i am delhi based. Had com to NW for my clients work.Now i am goin to Mumbai to meet my friend.

They continued talkin.Time flew by.They reached Mumm#bai.

Bani and Tarun bid farewell to eachother.Tarun had earned yet another friend.And Bani felt that there was sombody whom she knew in Mumbai.

Rahul was watchin all this from a distance.He didnt like the sight.
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Hope u guys like it plz comment.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hope u guys liked it leave ur comments.
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gr8 fanfic! 👏 👏
loved all three parts
plz continue soon

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wow hun a very interesting
story please continue soon 😛
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interesting - When are JB gonna meet - continue soon!!
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PART 4(this part is dedicated to cordeila as a request that she starts a new ff soon)

Bani bid Tarun farewell and hoped to see him again.
Rahul had booked a car beforehand.since they didnot hav much time before gettin to india he had managed a santro.
Pia refused to get into the car.she found it rather very very difficult to manage herself in a 4 seater car with 5 people in it(guys it also had a driver)After lot of persuasion she got inside the car(zada nakra mar ti hai jaise jaiselmer ki rajkumari hai)After they had taken the first bend crash................

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Jai and Tarun were meetin eachother after wat seemed to them was eternity.The greeted eachother with a long hug.

J:Hi ya Tarun.lookin good.

T:who says who.zara ghum ke dek abhi bhi sabhi ladikya tujhe hi dekh rahi hai.kya yaar meri kismat kabhi nahi badlengi gi.us larki ko dekh
(There was a girl abt 25 starin at Jai as if she had just seen a alien .......... but.......a handsome alien)
meri taraf to kyon dekta hi nahi.

this brought a smile to jai's face after witnessin Tarun's famous puppy life expression.

J:chal wo saab chor.how was ur trip.

T:nice.actually pretty nice.

J:Tarun to jabhi ye bolta hai iska yehi matlab hota hai that u met yet another girl.

T:ya u r kinda of right.i did meet a girl rather a lady.she is similar to u.

J:good goin Mr Sablok.kuch hi ghanto main bahut kuch deduce karne lage.

T:are aise kuch baat nahi hai.she is a good person.nice to talk to.

J:tum kabse larkiyon se baat karne lage.

T:jaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiii

with this both broke out into a laugh.

Jai Tarun and Pushkar got into 1 car follwed by Aditya.

They were movin straight and suddenly got hit by a speeding car comin from a no-entry direction.

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the driver of bani's car had got confused with pia and Rahul's contradictory directions and resulted it to move into a no-entry and thus it had hit pushkar's car.

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Pushkar got out of the car.he was fuming wuth rage.Pia also got out both broke out into a fight,Pushkar wudnt hav shouted at a pretty girl like Pia rather pick up that oppotunity to flirt with her.But he was angry.He had recently bought a new shirt and after droppin jai and tarun he was goin for a blind date.he had got a chocolate ice cream(guys i just love chocolate) and with the accident it resulted that the ice cream fell on his shirt.

Pu:hey gari chalana nahi ata to chala kyun rahe the.

The driver had got raelly nervous 1st pia and rahul and thenthis guy who was really fumming with hot rage.before he cud answer it was pia.she got out of the car and.

Pi:are kon kise keh raha hai.khud to teekh se kana bhe nahi jante(lookin at his ice cream smeared shirt)aur mere driver ko drivin ki pat pare ne chale.

Pushkar was very dumbfouned.he didnt expect such a answer he had rather expected the driver to say sorry. but he faced rather weird charges.

Pu:Hello ma'am aap ki so-called distinction holder driver gari no-entry se le kar aa raha ta.

they nearly were hell bent to fight kung fo on the road itself.Bani was gettin late.she got out of the car and wuth the help of rahul was tryin to stop pia.Meanwhile Jai and Tarun had got of the car.people had surronded the place.Aditya had also arrived.

B:plz pia janne do.der ho rahi hai.

Pi:di waise bhi aag is gari mai hum nahi ja sakte.so lets teach his guy a lesson.

J:pushkar chor de yaar.jada damage nahi huya.

Pushkar lookin at hi shirt.

Pu:kya sir ab mai date par kaise jao.

T:woh date toh gaye.isi larki ko pata ley.i must tell u she is sexy(sorry Tarun i dont feel so)

Bani and Tarun and noticed eachother now.After settling the situation she said thanx to tarun.

B:Mr sablok thanx.it was ur mistake.

T:no its ok

J:u both kno eachother.

T:ya she was in the plane with me.

Jai twited his eyebrows a little bit.thank god Bani hadent noticed it.He cudnt continue ne longer bacause his cell phone rang.

B:Mr Sablok i am rather in a hurry so i hav to leave.i will get in touch with u later.

T:its ok Ms dixit.but how will go.ur car has broken down.

B:its ok i will take a cab.

T:no we will leave u.

B:there is no need for it.we will manage.

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Jai on the phone

J:hello jai walia speakin.

N:bhaiya this is natasha.

J:ha bol.

N:bhaiya can u come to mamaji's place.he wants to see. u

J:ok.btw how is he now.

N:he is ok.but come as soon as possible.

J:bye

N:bye

they disconnect

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Bani and Tarun

after lot of persusion she agrees that tarun will drop them to there detination.

But pia refuses to go any where she wants to go to the hotel 1st and then meet her so called uncle.Rano was genunly not feelin well just then Jai enters

J:where do u want to Ms............

B:Ms Dixit.i want to go to Pali hill.Mr...............

J:Walia.Mr Jai Walia.(with a smirk smile on his face.He was proud of his name ,"so r we")

i am also goin that way.i can drop u.Tarun,Pushkar and Aditya can drop this ladies and off course this gentleman.(he said this with emmense confidence in himself.he had this borne idea that no women wud deny him.but somhow he felt bani was different.so after a long pause not havin any response he said...........)
i guess u dont hav ne problem by me giving u lift.

Bani at first was mesmerized by Jai's looks.But she had controlled herself deliberately.with a controlled undertone bani spoke

B:No Mr Walia i hav no problem to that.

J:Fine then lets leave.Bye Tarun.I will meet u.

T:But jai y this sudden change of plan.(tarun was not offened.Though bani was leavin he stilled had the company of two beautiful women)

J:Actual Tarun, Natasha had called me up.Mamaji wants to meet me.

T:U mean Kunal ka mama.

J:ya gettin late so catch u later aab ghar ja di wait kar rahi hogi.

A:ohhhhhh no.

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In the car:

J:so Ms Dixit where do u exactly want to go.

Without wastin anymore time Bani handed over to Jai the note which had the address to her destination.when jai glanced at the piece of paper he was delighted.the address was his mamaji's house address.Jai didnot find any reason to be happy about but for some strange weird reason he was happy without doubt.

J:Ms Dixit there r lot of co-incidents happenig to ustoday.this is the same address as to the place where i am suppose to go.

Bani also felt a tinge of unknown pleasure.She knew she was enjoyin this handsome strangers company but she was more than happy to know that she wud be able to stay with him for some more time.she shook her head in disbelief to wat she was thinkin and answered.........

B:i see we do r facing similar situtions.(she said this with delight and understood that Jai had noticed that 2.she quickly managed her wayward thoughts and blabard........)
i hope uncle is ok.

J:oh yes he is good 2day.i jus spoke 2 to my sister 2day.

the rest of the journey was entertained by silence.Both thinkin about the other and wonderin y they were bothered by a complete stranger so much.it was just a co-incident that had co-incidentally brought then 2gether and thwy wud be finding new paths after sometime.But both didnt know that destiny had something else in store for them.

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thanx for ur comments.hope u guys liked it.maybe i wasnt upto the mark abt Jai and Bani's 1st meeting.But u c they r complete strangers.i cudnt find a better way to introduce eachother.i guess i am not draggin but entertaining u.plz post in ur response n suggestions.it helps me to continue.
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PART 4(this part is dedicated to cordeila as a request that she starts a new ff soon)

Bani bid Tarun farewell and hoped to see him again.
Rahul had booked a car beforehand.since they didnot hav much time before gettin to india he had managed a santro.
Pia refused to get into the car.she found it rather very very difficult to manage herself in a 4 seater car with 5 people in it(guys it also had a driver)After lot of persuasion she got inside the car(zada nakra mar ti hai jaise jaiselmer ki rajkumari hai)After they had taken the first bend crash................

--------------------------------------------------

Jai and Tarun were meetin eachother after wat seemed to them was eternity.The greeted eachother with a long hug.

J:Hi ya Tarun.lookin good.

T:who says who.zara ghum ke dek abhi bhi sabhi ladikya tujhe hi dekh rahi hai.kya yaar meri kismat kabhi nahi badlengi gi.us larki ko dekh
(There was a girl abt 25 starin at Jai as if she had just seen a alien .......... but.......a handsome alien)
meri taraf to kyon dekta hi nahi.

this brought a smile to jai's face after witnessin Tarun's famous puppy life expression.

J:chal wo saab chor.how was ur trip.

T:nice.actually pretty nice.

J:Tarun to jabhi ye bolta hai iska yehi matlab hota hai that u met yet another girl.

T:ya u r kinda of right.i did meet a girl rather a lady.she is similar to u.

J:good goin Mr Sablok.kuch hi ghanto main bahut kuch deduce karne lage.

T:are aise kuch baat nahi hai.she is a good person.nice to talk to.

J:tum kabse larkiyon se baat karne lage.

T:jaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiii

with this both broke out into a laugh.

Jai Tarun and Pushkar got into 1 car follwed by Aditya.

They were movin straight and suddenly got hit by a speeding car comin from a no-entry direction.

----------------------------------------------------

the driver of bani's car had got confused with pia and Rahul's contradictory directions and resulted it to move into a no-entry and thus it had hit pushkar's car.

---------------------------------------------------

Pushkar got out of the car.he was fuming wuth rage.Pia also got out both broke out into a fight,Pushkar wudnt hav shouted at a pretty girl like Pia rather pick up that oppotunity to flirt with her.But he was angry.He had recently bought a new shirt and after droppin jai and tarun he was goin for a blind date.he had got a chocolate ice cream(guys i just love chocolate) and with the accident it resulted that the ice cream fell on his shirt.

Pu:hey gari chalana nahi ata to chala kyun rahe the.

The driver had got raelly nervous 1st pia and rahul and thenthis guy who was really fumming with hot rage.before he cud answer it was pia.she got out of the car and.

Pi:are kon kise keh raha hai.khud to teekh se kana bhe nahi jante(lookin at his ice cream smeared shirt)aur mere driver ko drivin ki pat pare ne chale.

Pushkar was very dumbfouned.he didnt expect such a answer he had rather expected the driver to say sorry. but he faced rather weird charges.

Pu:Hello ma'am aap ki so-called distinction holder driver gari no-entry se le kar aa raha ta.

they nearly were hell bent to fight kung fo on the road itself.Bani was gettin late.she got out of the car and wuth the help of rahul was tryin to stop pia.Meanwhile Jai and Tarun had got of the car.people had surronded the place.Aditya had also arrived.

B:plz pia janne do.der ho rahi hai.

Pi:di waise bhi aag is gari mai hum nahi ja sakte.so lets teach his guy a lesson.

J:pushkar chor de yaar.jada damage nahi huya.

Pushkar lookin at hi shirt.

Pu:kya sir ab mai date par kaise jao.

T:woh date toh gaye.isi larki ko pata ley.i must tell u she is sexy(sorry Tarun i dont feel so)

Bani and Tarun and noticed eachother now.After settling the situation she said thanx to tarun.

B:Mr sablok thanx.it was ur mistake.

T:no its ok

J:u both kno eachother.

T:ya she was in the plane with me.

Jai twited his eyebrows a little bit.thank god Bani hadent noticed it.He cudnt continue ne longer bacause his cell phone rang.

B:Mr Sablok i am rather in a hurry so i hav to leave.i will get in touch with u later.

T:its ok Ms dixit.but how will go.ur car has broken down.

B:its ok i will take a cab.

T:no we will leave u.

B:there is no need for it.we will manage.

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Jai on the phone

J:hello jai walia speakin.

N:bhaiya this is natasha.

J:ha bol.

N:bhaiya can u come to mamaji's place.he wants to see. u

J:ok.btw how is he now.

N:he is ok.but come as soon as possible.

J:bye

N:bye

they disconnect

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Bani and Tarun

after lot of persusion she agrees that tarun will drop them to there detination.

But pia refuses to go any where she wants to go to the hotel 1st and then meet her so called uncle.Rano was genunly not feelin well just then Jai enters

J:where do u want to Ms............

B:Ms Dixit.i want to go to Pali hill.Mr...............

J:Walia.Mr Jai Walia.(with a smirk smile on his face.He was proud of his name ,"so r we")

i am also goin that way.i can drop u.Tarun,Pushkar and Aditya can drop this ladies and off course this gentleman.(he said this with emmense confidence in himself.he had this borne idea that no women wud deny him.but somhow he felt bani was different.so after a long pause not havin any response he said...........)
i guess u dont hav ne problem by me giving u lift.

Bani at first was mesmerized by Jai's looks.But she had controlled herself deliberately.with a controlled undertone bani spoke

B:No Mr Walia i hav no problem to that.

J:Fine then lets leave.Bye Tarun.I will meet u.

T:But jai y this sudden change of plan.(tarun was not offened.Though bani was leavin he stilled had the company of two beautiful women)

J:Actual Tarun, Natasha had called me up.Mamaji wants to meet me.

T:U mean Kunal ka mama.

J:ya gettin late so catch u later aab ghar ja di wait kar rahi hogi.

A:ohhhhhh no.

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In the car:

J:so Ms Dixit where do u exactly want to go.

Without wastin anymore time Bani handed over to Jai the note which had the address to her destination.when jai glanced at the piece of paper he was delighted.the address was his mamaji's house address.Jai didnot find any reason to be happy about but for some strange weird reason he was happy without doubt.

J:Ms Dixit there r lot of co-incidents happenig to ustoday.this is the same address as to the place where i am suppose to go.

Bani also felt a tinge of unknown pleasure.She knew she was enjoyin this handsome strangers company but she was more than happy to know that she wud be able to stay with him for some more time.she shook her head in disbelief to wat she was thinkin and answered.........

B:i see we do r facing similar situtions.(she said this with delight and understood that Jai had noticed that 2.she quickly managed her wayward thoughts and blabard........)
i hope uncle is ok.

J:oh yes he is good 2day.i jus spoke 2 to my sister 2day.

the rest of the journey was entertained by silence.Both thinkin about the other and wonderin y they were bothered by a complete stranger so much.it was just a co-incident that had co-incidentally brought then 2gether and thwy wud be finding new paths after sometime.But both didnt know that destiny had something else in store for them.

------------------------------------------------------

thanx for ur comments.hope u guys liked it.maybe i wasnt upto the mark abt Jai and Bani's 1st meeting.But u c they r complete strangers.i cudnt find a better way to introduce eachother.i guess i am not draggin but entertaining u.plz post in ur response n suggestions.it helps me to continue.
debolina
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