ff:AADAT pt 23 pg 45 5/5 - Page 3

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hunn.. read the 4 parts.. ur ff rocks!! plz do continue!!

i loved the fact that u made bani also rich!!

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guys hope u like reading my ff(though i am getting enough feedback 😡 😭 )Here is part 5 for u.dont worry jai and bani hav somthin nice in store 4 them.this part is dedicated to nyzbabigyal for writing such a wonderful ff"pyar??????????????ho gaya"thanx for entertaing us.

PART 5

Most of the journey was welcomed with silence.Soon the car got stuck in a Mumbai traffic(guys heard a lot abt it.maybe its quite similar to wat we face in kol)Jai was getting disgusted.Though he didnt show his anger off cause deep inside he knew that this traffic is the reason that is makin him stay with bani for a little more time.he ridiculed himself for thinkin this.

There was a ice cream parlour nearby.Bani saw that a group of girls were sitting there nnd admiring HER DRIVER sorry ...........JAI.for some silly reason she got red with anger.Jai was resting his hand on the gear handle(guys i dont kno wat exactly it is called)Bani kept her hand over it and clutched it tightly.she was not a like u wud do that but she felt an unknown jelously rising in her when she saw some stupid girls staring at Jai.Jai was feelin very pleased and deep inside thanxed the girls.he was enjoyin this and was thanxin all the gods he knew.he understood that there was somthin special in Bani that was attractin him.He wished to find out the reason.but he had to break this moment as he very well knew that this will make Bani very embaressed.

J:Ms dixit though i am enjoyin every bit of it but i shud tell u r rather clutchin to my hand strongly.did u learn judo frm somwhere.sur u got strenght.

Bani flushed hearin his comment speacially "i am enjoyin" part.she knew she was also enjoyin Jai's company though both werent talkin much to eachother.

B:uh sorry.

J:no its ok.rather wonderful to keep ur hand over mine.

B:Mr Walia u shud concentrate on drivin.

Jai looked at the road.the traffic hadnt cleared.

J:Bani i must say u concentrate on things quite efficently.u c the traffic hasnt cleared up still.

Both knew the conversation wud land up to destinations feared by both.thanx god Jai phone rang.

J:hello natasha kya huya.

N:bhaiya aap kab aa rahe hai.

J:i am stuck in a jam(lookin at bani)so it will take somtime.how is mamaji dion.

N:he is doin all right waitin impatiently to c u.

J:bye

the diconnected.

B:how is uncle doin.

J:he is fine

After somtime.

J:i hope u dont mind me askin a qustion.

B:go ahead Mr Walia.

J:how r u related to mamji.

B:he is actually my fathers elder brother.

J:o i c.

B:how r u related to him.

J:actually he was my fathers best friend.my sister married his nephew so we started to called him mamaji.

B:u mean Kunal.how is he.is he back.gr8 i would get to see him.............she continued blabarin.

The traffic had cleared but Jai was concentratin more on Bani's happy face. They reached Sharma residence.

N:where hav u been.

J:uh i was stuck in ajam so it took this much time.can i meet mamaji.

N:oh yes.(she eyed Bani,she had never seen her bhaiya with a girl since she knew jai was a workalcoholic and didnt hav time 4 these.she was rather amused.intersetingly she was partly right. Jai wud never had given a lift to a stranger but Jai knew Bani was not a stranger to him.)

J:uh this is Bani.......sorry Ms Dixit....... Ms Bani Dixit.

Bani cuttin them short.

B:u must be natasha.Kunal's wife.nice 2 meet u.

N:same here.but i didnt recognize u.

K:Bani i was awitin for u.Mamaji told me ur comin.nice to c u lil sis.

B:Kunal u hav become a handsome young man.gr8 goin u ahv forgotten ur sis completely.

K:Bani u dont kno u look absolutely smashin.and ur tellin me i am lookin handsome.i am givin u a bit of an info.Jai is raely seen with girls.and i c ur 1 of them. i must tell u r lucky enough.after all JAI WALIAis the most hunted over eligible bachelor in town.
Bani flushed hearing this,Jai was observing all her movements.he was having a strange feelin.like he wanted to hug Bani and and.....................(guess it ur self)

B:May we go and c uncle.we r not here to discuss jai and me.

Jai had a strange felin when Bani called him by his name.He felt nice.

in the bedroom where mamaji was resting

Bani went inside and sat beside him.

B:uncle aap kaise hai.

U:Bani tu kaise hai.pia aur rano kaha hai.

B:woh hotel gaye hai.

U:are jai tu bhi aagaya.2day is my lucky day.i am gettin to c all my kids together.

J:mamji aapne mujhe bulaya tha.

U:haan.beta.i had made a promise to ur father that his daughter will marry my nephew.and it did happen.but....(jai face crushed as soon as he heared the but......Bani to noticed that)according to his wish my duaghter cudnt marry u.........she died.......died the day of ur engagement..................(a droplet of tear trickeled down)jai wasnt effected much by this.Nitu and he were childhood friends.But both did love eachother.when nitu died jai didnt lose his love but a true friend.Jai knew Tarun and Nitu loved eachother,He didnt want 2 com in between his two best friend.but he had no other way.many a times he had tried to talk to mamaji about this but fate didnt allow him........nitu didnt die in an accident it was a suicide.only jai and tarun knew it.After that Tarun had numerous times tried to end his life.But Jai was thier always by his side.soon he was able to wash away those memories from him.)

U:i recently got 2 kno that nitu didnt face ne accident.she commited suicide.i want 2 meet Tarun.

J:Mamaji but....

U:Jai beta i want to correct my wrong steps apologize to him.sorry i made u three go thru all this.its my fault.all my fault.it is because of me that nitu died .i am the culprit.he broke out into a sob.

Bani dint understand all of this she just knew that her uncle needed a shoulder to cry upon.she gently assured him that all will be well.

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hope u guys like it.jai and bani scenes will be comin up shortly.hope i am not borin u.there r lots of twists and turns comin up.stat tuned

debolina

preview:wat will mamaji say to tarun.he has a marraige proposal maybe...................stay tuned.
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preview :wat will mamaji say to tarun.maybe....he is got another marriage proposal for him............stay tuned there is lot of drama comin up.
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very nice
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please continue i am reali looking forward to it

The previous part is on page 4.thank u 4 likin my ff.I live in west bengal.and now is the festive season so was a lil busy.sorry 4 the inconvenience.comments are welcome.

PART 6(dedicated to my 1st frnd in if sangita)

As per uncle's requst Tarun was called.Everybody left uncle alone for rest.Bani was highly confused as to wat was gion on.She turned to Jai with curiosity and concern.Jai was impatiently waitin for Tarun.Jai knew that Tarun had left Mumbai only to get rid of Nitu's memories which always haunted him.Jai explained to /bani every thing.Startin from the marriage proposal given to him,Tarun-Nitu's relationship,Nitu's suicide,and everything.It seemed that Jai had opened his heart in front of him and Bani was healin his bruised heart.Jai and Bani felt a unknown sensation.Outside Tarun had already arrived.He was engrossed in all those past moments he and his lost beloved had spent happily,somtimes fightin.
Tarun was taken to uncle's room.Jai and Bani were also present.

T:Mr Sharma u wanted to see me.will i be any help to urs.(tarun was oblivius of the fact that uncle had come 2 kno about the truth)

U:Tarun beta.i hav com 2 kno of eveything.

Taruns face shrunk.He suddenly went back to that day when Nitu mat with the accident.his eyes were filled with tears.

U:Beta i am sorry for everything.though i kno sorry is a very small word.i hav ruined ur life.i want u start life afreash.get settled though i kno i hav no rite to say this.

T:No Mr Sharma.i had always respected u.i had no ill feelins rowards u.it was my fault.i didnt hav the courage to speak 2 u.

U:lets forget about the past.i hav very lil days left.i hav my will done.my lawyer is here.i want him to read everything in front of me and everybody who r close 2 my heart.

L:I Mr Raman Sharma divide all my property equally amongst my nephew Kunal his wife Namarata.Jai Walia.Bani Dixit and Tarun Sablok. My business will be handeled by the names above and all my assets will be shared by them...........

U:this is my will.since i will be shifted to Jai's
house 2day so i was thinkin if Bani will also move in with me there with her sisters.Jai i hope u dont mind.

J:Mamaji yeh aap kya kehrahe hai.woh aap hi ka ghar hai.and Ms Dixit is always welcome.

Jai felt very happy since Bani was movin to his house.Jai had felt somthing forvBani and he knew wat.he was aware that it was a very short time interval that they had met but he felt sure that Bani held a special stand in his life.he aws planning to tell her this as soon as she moves to his house.

Bani on the other hand felt very uncomfortable in movin into Jai's house.though she knew her heart was very very..........happy.Jai's sight comforted her eyes.she knew she wudnt be alone there.she also had found her brother who happened to live in the same house.

(BTW uncle is been shifted to that house since in his house there will be no one to take care of.So Jai had decide that uncle wud shift to there house)

U:Bani can u com with me.i want to go 4 a walk.

Bani and uncle left.uncle felt alot better after havin vent out his feelins.

Jai and Tarun decided to wait for them so that they will leave for Jai's house together.

Alone uncle and Bani were walkin in the garden

U:Bani i hope u dont mind me sayin somthin.

B:No uncle u hav all rite upon me as a father has over his daughter.

U:i want to see ur marriage.do u love somone.

Bani blushed crimsone.she knew alredy that she was fallin for THE GREAT JAI WALIA.maybe had started lovin him.

B:No

my last wish is to see ur marraige.hope u will keep my words.

with this they returned back.

Jai when saw Bani felted that she aws extremely flushed.he felt the urge of kissin her.But stoped his wayward impulse.

he approached Bani and asked her to sit in the car as they are ready to move.

Bani obeyed him.she felt her knees weak everytime Jai approached her.

On other had Jai had done this on porpose.He awnted to be alone with Bani.these few hours of the day had changed his life path,now he didnt want to walk alone but wanted Bani to be by his side.

he wanted to propose Bani 2day.he knew it was a sudden decision.and Bani may feel awkward as this was there 1st meetin after all.But he was Jai Walia and he didnt learn to wait.

IN THE CAR:

Jai wanted to kno whether Bani had ne1 in her life.
after beatin around for several minutes he asked.

J:So Ms Dixit r u involved with nebody.

Bani was a bit atken aback.she knew she wasnt.but wanted to see Jai's reaction to her yse.

B:yes

Jai applied the brakes abruptly.he felt anger seth in him.he felt like knockin that damn man out and tell her that Bani aws only HIS.

B:Mr Walia y did u stop the car.

Jai with stuborness and anger said:Oh no nothin Ms Dixit.Just nothin.
though he very well knew that he was boilin inside.Jai and Bani reach home.Except for Tony no 1 was at home.he asked Tony to open the room 4 Bani.

J:Tony will show u ur room.Ur sisters will be arrivin any moment.

B:thank u.But Jai hadnt heard her thank u he had strided back to his room his den long before.

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hope u liked it.Jai will be proposin to Bani very shortly.Navs plz help me out with the romantic scenes
debolina

hope u guys liked it posy ur comments.
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Originally posted by: hp85

please continue i am reali looking forward to it

thank u 4 likin my f.iam highly oblidged.hope u life part 6.wat is ur name or rather wat shud i call u.
debolina