FF: LoveTriangle: pg. 11 (4/13/07) - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome fanfic
just read all the parts
do continue it soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Guys I am so sorry. I have not updated in months. Well, anyway school is going great and I am beginning to love my teachers and high school. Here's Part 6!!! Enjoy!!!


Part 6


Bani is up and ready in the morning by 7:00 am. She quickly runs to the Bus stop as its raining very heavily. Jai is also ready and on his way to work. He had a very good night's sleep thinking of Bani. He is at a signal lost in his own world when he sees Bani and the bus stop soaking wet. He quickly opens the window to his car and calls her.

jai: "bani what are you doing outside. you can come in my car."

bani:"Don't worry mr.walia."

jai: "uh...bani, jai remember"

bani:"Sry"

jai:"no problem and your my new friend so I can give you a ride"

Bani gets into Jai's car and he drives off to work. Today is a very special day in the office as all the workers that are married bring in their children. Its kids day!!! bani loves children and has lots of balloons ordered from her friends shop. jai aslso loves kids and has ordered chocolates for all the kids. He has had quite a few girlfriends, but they never enjoyed kids day. All they enjoyed doing was eating out of jai's wallet. As they arrived to the office bani and jai saw the deliver guy with the treats they ordered for the kids. Bani quickly ran over to him and took the balloons and paid for them. Jai didn't know Bani had ordered something for the kids and was quite touched that she loved them so much. Bani went inside the office and said hello to all the kids. She already memorized their names. As, she was distubuting the balloons a group of small children begged her to sing a song for them. bani could never resist the childrens smilies and faces. She quickly agreed and they put her on the stage. The little girl Suneeta begged her to sing the song Kuch to Hua Ha from Kal Ho Na Ho. Bani started singing:

Kuch To Hua Hai
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai
Kuch To Hua Hai
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai

Kuch To Hua Hai
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai
Do Chaar Din Se Lagta Hai Jaise
Sab Kuch Alag Hai
Sab Kuch Naya Hai
Kuch To Hua Hai
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai

Cheezein Mein Rakh Ke
Bhool Jaati Hoon
Bekhayaali Mein Gungunati Hoon
Ab Akele Mein Muskuraati Hoon
Badli Hui Si Meri Ada Hai
Kuch To Hua Hai
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai

Pighla Pighla Hai Dil Mera Jab Se
Achcha Rehta Hain Mood Bhi Tab Se
Haske Milta Hoon Aaj Kal Sab Se
Khush Ho Gaya Hai Jo Bhi Mila Hai
Kuch To Hua Hai
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai

Rang Chamkilay Saaare Lagte Hai
Raah Mein Bhikre Tare Lagte Hai
Phool Ab Zyaada Pyaare Lagte Hai
Mehki Hui Si Jaisi Hawa Hai
Kuch To Hua Hai
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai

Dhyaan Ab Apna Zyaada Rakhta Hoon
Sochta Hoon Main Kaise Lagta Hoon
Aaina Ho To Dekh Leta Hoon
Kaise Yeh Chehra Aisa Khila Hai
Kuch To Hua Hai
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai

Yeh Nasha Jisme Dono Rehte Hai
Yeh Lehar Jisme Dono Behte Hai
Ho Na Ho Isko Pyaar Kehte Hai
Pyaar Mila To
Dil Kho Gaya Hai
Kuch To Hua Hai
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Her voice was so beautiful and she really got into the song. Jai who was distrubing his chocoaltes to the kids turned toward the stage and saw Bani she was like glittering under the spotlight and her voice was so beautiful he just went drooling all over. He kept wishing in his head that she was singing this song to him. Bani was feeling a weird feeling inside of her she felt as this song meant something to her today. After she was done the children and her danced to Shava Shava from kabbie kushi kabbie Gham. As the song ended, jai began singing.

Jai: Ha, ka bothe tu

bani: ha, ka may bothe

jai: sun sua ati may condala

bani: are kya karo jati may condala

jai: are ghom ga, gain ga, or ......kya kariga

Roshni: ashi kariga or kya

Don Don!!!! Stay Tuned. I hope you like it!!!!! I am really sorry about the hindi I am really bad at it. Well, if you don't understand its the part in Kabbie kushi kabbie gham after Sahva Shave. Where Ambitah and someone I forgot her name sing it and kajol buts in at the end.

banirocks

Leave your comments please!!!!

Edited by banirocks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
hey do you guys not like it!!! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
no no its not bad atall cot soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
Roshni? Where'd she come from???


-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
the don don was good this was cool and now lets see what roshni got to say
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
hey this is cool please up date soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank You!!! I really enjoy hearing your thoughts about my fanfic. Sorry, I have not been able to update lately. Here is my Chirstmas present to all of you!!! I hope your Chirstmas is full of wonderful surprises and love.

Part 7:

Jai turned around to meet his eyes to Roshni, his ex-girlfriend. He had broken up with her 2 years ago, as she was only using him for his money. Jai's eyes turned cold looking at her.

Roshni: Hello Jai, how are you doing?

Jai: Fine,thank you Roshni

Roshni looked over at Bani and disgust came into her eyes. She was pretty with her hair in a long braid with two strands of her hair hanging on the sides of her face. She was wearing a simple chana-choli. Roshni knew the minute she saw her she was from a very cultured family and had very good values. This disgusted her as Jai could fall in love with such dirt. She looked over her up and down making rude comments in her head. Bani was becoming very uncomfortable the way she was looking at her. Bani walks up to her and takes out her hand.

Bani: Hello, I am Bani. I am Tarun's secretary.

Roshni: Hello, I am Roshni Chopra, Jai's girlfriend.

Jai: Ex-Girlfriend

Bani: Well nice to meet you why don't you join our party. Today is children's day and we are throwing a party to celebrate these cutie pies. Don't you love kids.

Roshni: No, I do not like children at all they cry and whine to much, and they ruin a woman's figure.

Bani was shocked at this woman and her remarks. She could not believe that this lady was Jai's girlfriend. It disguisted her. She quickly made some excuse and ran away.

--Meanwhile at the Airport--

Tarun had reached back to Mumbai and was heading to the office. He was very excited to come back and see Bani. He told his mother how he felt about Bani and she was very happy. She wanted him to quickly get married to her and bring her to him. She always loved Bani as a daughter and could not think of a prefect bahu (bride) for her son.

--Back at the Party--

Jai was very depressed to see Roshni after so many years. He had always hated her and was ashamed to think he once liked her. Thats why over the ages he had turned very cold. Recentally Bani had brought this sunshine into his life and he had become less cold. Roshni had some wicked ideas up her sleeve (as always)
and she paided the waiter to give Jai this glass of juice with a some mixture in it. The waiter was giving the glass to Jai, while Bani was standing near him. Jai took the glass of juice while bani took the other glass of juice.

Jai: hey, Bani do you want this juice. I don't like apple juice.

Bani: Sure, I don't like orange juice with pulp in it anyway. Jai you are to funny. If you didn't want the juice you could have taken a different one.

Jai: Yea, but who cares you don't like orange and I love orange juice. I don't like apple and you love apple juice so whats the difference.

Bani took the apple juice from Jai and drank it quickly. It tasted a bit odd to her, but she totally forgot about it when she saw Tarun walk through the entrance.

Bani: Tarun, you are back!! You should have called me. I could have picked you up from the airport. How is aunt? You didn't leave her just when she was not well, right??

Tarun: Bani, hold on to much at once. I am fine and so is mummy. And no I did not leave her when she is unwell. And, The aiport thing. I wanted to surprise you.
How did our project go?

Jai: hey Tarun, you have one heck of a secretary. She did a wonderful job on the presentation.

Bani: thank you, Jai.Come on lets go have some fun.

The music started and everyone started to dance once again. Roshni was in the corner watching Jai, Bani, Tarun, and all the children dancing. The only thing she had her eye on was Jai, waiting for the drink to turn into effect, so she could fly out as superwoman. Bani was dancing with Jai and talking while Tarun was getting something to eat. Jai turned around to talk to one of his clients when Bani started feeling dizzy and her head was pounding. Her knees were giving in and she slowing fell to the floor. Jai and Tarun both turned around.

Jai: Bani

Tarun: Bani


The End!!! I hope you have a great Chirstmas and a wonderful week.

Love,

Banirocks


P.S. If you have any ideas for my fanfic or suggestions you can send me a private message. I am always open to new ideas. Don't forget to leave your comments!! And if you just want to be my friend. I am welcome to that to.
Edited by banirocks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
I read all the parts, I loved how Jai kicked those bad guys but and he said to Bani his Bani😳😳😳
I hope Jai confess his love before Tarun does
I am glad that Roshni planned backfired😡😡😡
awwwwwwwwwww and they sang and bani n jai both love kids thats so good😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
haila!
now both men there!
oh man that Roshni!
grr!
awesome job!
continue soon!

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