FF: LoveTriangle: pg. 11 (4/13/07) - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow cool-Plz update soon!!!

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omg i love it i love it lol plzzz contuine sooon sonner than ever plzzzz
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hey its been long time since u updated pls cont soon.........
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awwwwwwww dats so cute he luves her !!!!!!!!!
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hey its been sooooo long since uv uptaded...........where are u ????????????????????????? 😭..................soo many people are waitin desparately for ur next 😔 part................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon ur ff is really good 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys, I am really sry I never update. The truth is I got very caught up in school and I also recieved an pm that said my fanfic was not good, so I decided not to update anymore. 😭 I promise I will now. Thanks for the support!! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry, for not updating in a while. I will try my best to update more often. School always just catches up with you. Here's the next part. I hope you enjoy it. Please leave your comments. I really appreciate them.

Jai was very happy he had a bouquet of flowers in his hand and kept humming the tune to Bani's favorite song. (Kuch To Hua Hai) He walked into the office and gave the most amazing smile to everyone. They had all thought their boss, had gone nuts. Roshni had walked in about 15 minutes before Jai into his office. As, he just walked in he saw Roshni sitting in his chair with the phone.

Jai: Roshni what are you doing in my office, and that to in on my chair.

Roshni: Hey, Jai. I was just filing this file for you when the phone rang. I decided to pick it up, but you aren't going to be happy to hear this.

Jai: what is it…?

Roshni: well, um Bani.

Jai: What happened to Bani?? Jai just was thinking the worst things in his mind.

Roshni: She is not getting any better. She was rushed to the hospital last night. I am sorry Jai. The doctor's say she doesn't have enough time left.

Jai: What? I have to go meet her, right now. Why didn't anybody tell me this before?

Roshni: No, Jai. We need to go to the temple first and pray for her well-being first.

Jai: ok, you're right let's go.

Roshni smirked as Jai quickly got into his car and she jumped in the front side. Her plan was working. They reached the temple and Roshni and Jai got out praying for Bani. Roshni then dragged Jai to let one of the priests to read his hand. Jai was getting irritated and didn't get the point of getting his hand read, but the priest guaranteed that by reading Jai's hand he could try to change what was in Bani's destiny. Jai listened to the priest because he didn't want to ruin bani's life he loved her and would any day change Bani's destiny for his. The priest made a loud gasp and Jai stood still.

Priest: I am sorry but you fate is to be un-married for the rest of your life. Anybody who marries you will die.

Jai just stood their and couldn't believe what he was hearing. He couldn't love Bani. He had to stay away from her. He could never risk her life for his benefit. NEVER!! Jai got up and quickly ran to the other side of the temple; there he saw Bani and Tarun both at the temple. Bani was not sick it was a lie to meet Tarun. Tarun was holding Bani's hand and that was the last thing he saw. Jai came out of his flashback. He was talking to Nachiket his younger brother of his so messed up love story. He didn't want to get married. He had not seen Bani for the last three years and he couldn't ruin somebody else's life. The truth was they had received a marriage proposal by Pia, a girl who lived in Mt.Abu and her kundle matched to Jai's perfectly. No harm could be done to her if she married Jai. Jai was only agreeing to this marriage on his massi's behalf. He hated Bani for loving Tarun and the truth was that Bani had been caught by Roshni for stealing money from the office safe, that was the last day at his office and she was never seen again. The police officers had said she had acted to love me and Tarun to earn money. Bani was a fraud and that would never change it for Jai. Roshni walked into Jai's study. She was the happiest person on earth. Her plan had worked very well. Bani was out of Jai's life and he never wanted to see her again.


Edited by banirocks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey
is dis the last part ????????

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Posted: 18 years ago
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No its not....just a leap more will be coming...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NO!!! damn roshni!! please continue!!

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