FF: LoveTriangle: pg. 11 (4/13/07)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi I am Banirocks----and I am rly getting sad watching Kasam Se these days. I just wish Bani would just confess her love for Jai already. So I am going to write a new fanfic--I will still coutinue my other one if you like it. I am always open to constructive critism and love to hear you point of view on my writing. Thank You and Enjoy!!

Bani was an only child who lived in Mt. Abu untill her parents death in a car crash. Her best friends mom helped her get a new apartment and family with her in Mumbai. Her best friends name was Pia and she was a very pretty girl who all the guys would fall for. She and bani were like sisters except bani was more simple and more pretty inside. Bani works in the company of Walia Industries under Tarun Sablock. Tarun and her were like best friends, even though she was his secretary, he always maintained a very friendly relationship to her. Tarun secretly loves Bani but she doesn't know this.

How is that for a start will continue after lunch.....Don't forget to leave your comments...sry if I am copying some of your fanfics

Banirocks 😛

Enjoy!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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great start!!!
please continue soon!!!
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Part 2:

Bani and Tarun were working on a project together when Tarun got a call from his best friend, Jai Walia. He needed him to set up his house to look very beautiful as he was having a pooja for Krishna's birthday. Tarun said that he would love to attend the pooja and would bring some people that were very capiable for decorating the hosue. Tarun gave this job to bani as he trusted her the must out of everyone. Bani went back to her apartment got changed and tied up her hair into a neat professional bun. She was wearing a very pretty pink salwaar. With very simple but elegant embriodery. bani was a very religious girl and had kept a fast today for krishna's birthday, nobody knew about this except Pia. After she was ready she made some parsandam to give to the Walias.When she reached the house with Tarun she was amazed to see the house as if it was a palace. She entered the house and started looking up as if she had never seen such a house so grand.

Jigyassa: "Hey, girl!! Get to work. you aren't here to just sit around."

Tarun: "Auntie this is Bani she is my assistant and she is going to conduct the workers to decorate the house, and please talk to her with respect because she is my friend first than my employee."

Jigyassa:"oh, sry I didn't know" in a very annoyed tone.
"Jai, is upstairs looking for you. You go I will show bani around."

Jigyassa showed bani around the house very fast then set her to work. Bani was very fond of roses so she decorated the house in beautiful colors. The house was full of roses on the railings in all different colors. The House looked as if an angel came down and made it into a heaven. As she was finishing up Jai Walia was coming down the steps she didn't notice who he was and bumped right into him.

Bani:"I am so sry are you ok."

Jai:"Yea, please watch were you are going."

Bani:"Sry."

Jai:"No Problem, I'm Jai and you are?"

Bani:"I am bani dixit."

Jai:"Nice to meet you enjoy the pooja, I have to go."

Jai then walked up to Tarun and started talking to him. Then as he was talking he looked around and saw the decorations in the house. He was speakless. Taran then told him about bani and how talented she was. Jai didn't remember the girlb(bani) that bumped into him a few minutes ago. Bani was in the restroom and she applied some make up and took her hair out of the bun it was in.

Tarun:"Let me introduce you to bani, she did all the decorations."

Meanwhile bani was coming out of the restroom and jai saw her he didn't recongize her as she was looking much more pretty now.

Tarun:"Hey Bani come here, one second."

bani:"Ya, coming."

Tarun:"This is bani"

Bani:"I believe we have met already. Hi once again I am Bani Dixit and your Mr.Walia right?"




Edited by banirocks - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...great start...keep them coming...really enjoying them... 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yeah, that was great, plz continue soon (by soon, i mean right now 😆 )
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Amazing hunni.. i like it! plz do continue!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hun both parts rocked
can't wait to read more
pls cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great job!!! This seems like it is gonna be an awesome ff!!! I really hope you continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow.. sounds gr88.. tarun already knows bani and jai sorta seems as if he'll start fallin fo her.. i just hope pia doesn't come and ruin everythin.. that was gr88888.. plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part 👏 👏 👏 do continue..

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