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AWWWWWWWW. SOO CUTE. lOVED THE PHONE CONVERSATION AND MISSING EACH OTHER BIT. PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.😃 😃 😃

ps : THE FACT THAT FF IS GOING TO END SOON , MAKES ME 😭 😭 😭 CAN WE PERSAUDE U TO START AN OTHER FF IN THE NEAR FUTURE 😉 😉JUST A THOUGHT 😉 😉

Originally posted by: skn700

AWWWWWWWW. SOO CUTE. lOVED THE PHONE CONVERSATION AND MISSING EACH OTHER BIT. PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.😃 😃 😃

ps : THE FACT THAT FF IS GOING TO END SOON , MAKES ME 😭 😭 😭 CAN WE PERSAUDE U TO START AN OTHER FF IN THE NEAR FUTURE 😉 😉JUST A THOUGHT 😉 😉

that would be great if you could Aditee..since you are an awesome writer!😊

thanks for a gr8 episode.
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Aditee........U rock as always. Just superb, have no words to describe how fabulous this FF of yours is !! 👏

Distance and the inanimate tel is certainly making B voluble , effusive . Lingeringly she is admitting that she wants to talk to JW, then that she misses him and badly and she wants JW to reciprocate in no less than an elevated measure. The is progression for u….. B unleashed & unrestrained though in her own ingenuous way.
The caring, shielding face of JW echos and equals B achy yearning.
B carrying along JW old black polo t was was so endearing.

"B wants to spend the whole nite talking, she wanted this banter. She was not hungry. She was not thirsty, not even sleepy. She just wanted this banter to continue all nite long..... she lay there on her bed, eyes closed, hugging her pillow to her thudding chest, gently tapping her (one over the other) feet, causing her anklets to chime....... her cheeks aflame, her voice soft, rolls over to the front, buries her head in the pillow....... inhaling all the scent of him in one go......... from his tee....... "   ;that precis charmingly perfect in encompassing B's mood

Thanx Aditee for this prolonged tel sweet nothings b/w our adorable twosome. Enjoyed it and waiting to see where this conv will finally lead them.//CAT

😉 yaar that was great can't wait for the next part 👍🏼

Just wonderful. Keep up the wonderful job. Its a pleasure reading your FF..

Aditee you are too good 😉 😳 👏

OMG ADITI!!!! I loved Part 34B!!!! It was sooo aweosme!!! Please continue with 35 asap!! How did he know that her finger was hurt??? 😉

The part as usual was just great. I really like the endings... the punch lines... I wish you seriously consider writing for a living...

I loved that Bani showed her stubborn-ness coz this is her character that he keeps suspecting and loved the fact that she held her ground and did not give in when the roses arrived. You maintained the JW characteristic of not apologizing that easily... else where is the fun??? It is this very character that we love to hate!!!