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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

#351

ADitee just read part 10!!!!
He showed up to celebrate his birthday with her1!!!!!!!!!!!!1
i wonder what happens next!

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Ritika Sinha

@ritikas

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Posted: 18 years ago

#352

hey aditi...that was so cute!....loved the scene with the pesky kids....brought back very good memories 😛 ...hehehe..my heart went out to bani when she was waiting with so much anticipation!!....and wat can i say abt JW....managed to steal the thunder with just one line!!!....now that is the JW i love!!....good stuff!!...keep it up!

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Neena

@neenam

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Posted: 18 years ago

#353

...."Goes back to her kheer, starts eating loves it sinks into the couch the door bell rings.......This is IT! she thinks...... storming towards the door........
"Ek baar aur bell bajaya to tumhe mere ghar pe baandhkar rakh doongi phir kabhi apne ghar nahi ja sakte tum"

JW "Do you PROMISE Ms Dixit?' (husky)
Her kheer spoon falls to the floor from her lifeless hands with a shrill clutter................................
"
I want him to ring the bell again and demand that she ties him up and keeps him forever like she just threatened......

Edited by neenam - 18 years ago

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Kiran

@Kiran1977

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Posted: 18 years ago

#354

Hi Aditi,

Your FF is just great. Not only the romance and the fights, even the insecure feelings are fabulous.

Just love how your story leaves little detailles that come back in the flashbacks, like Jai likes Bani's hair down 😉

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Aditi S

@aditee

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+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#355

Thanks all, I apologize Part 39 B was almost done, but my PC crashed I was so engrossed in writing I failed to save the work 😭
Will DEFINITELY post today
I am truly sorry

Thanks a lot for reading and EACH AND EVERY COMMENT AND FEEDBACK

Love
A

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TINK

@TINK

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#356

😳 😳 oohhh... thanx soooo much 😉 keep it up 👏 👏 omg can't wait 😃

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mini11

@mini11

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Posted: 18 years ago

#357

👏
That was great I started reeding at the weekend & just couldn't stop. Spent most of my weekend reading the fanfic from the start.
Please, please continue!!!!!!!

Oh thanks for entertaining us at the forum.

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Henna 786

@Henna 786

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#358

WOW wat a FF.. been a silent reader.. sorry for not replyin earlier.. just found out about part 33 u c..

Read it all and loved it!! Cant wait for u to continue.. i knw how it feels wen u write somit and forget to save it and hten as a icin on the cake the comp crashes.. its happened to me may of tyms.. and one would actually think that id learn my lesson and start savin .. but me bein me never learnt 😆

Henna x

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