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Posted: 19 years ago

Awesome again jaan.......there's something poetic about your writing.......just love it!😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
luvved it all the waaay! i luv the passion in ur ff! pleez do cont asap!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow i am speachless!!
i just read through your whole fanfic rite now and i have fallen in love with it!
it's intense, gripping, romantic and mysterious
i love your style of writing
plz continue soon

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great parts.... loved the lift scene.... was very very intense.... your warnings just makes me want to read your parts more..... awesome fanfic..... 👏 pls do cont soon


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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG SWEETU!!! THAT PART WAS JUST 😳 !!!! I love ur intense parts they are so well written!!! Pls continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome fanfic sweetu..lov rthe intensity...keep it up 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 awsome update
please continue soon
thanx
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome!! 😳 plz cont soon..it was intense!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
🤗 !!
THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH!! I really appreciate that you took YOUR time to read my ff, and thank you for such sweet comments...they are all really appreciated!
Hopefully part 7 will be up today!
I am glad that you all liked part 6 ( and the lift scene)!
Thank you all once again!
luv ya mwah
sweetu
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Posted: 19 years ago
Heya guys!!
thank you for reading my ff...here is part 7...though i must warn you read at your own risk....not very intense but i don't know if you will like it...pls though would appreciate your comments:D

Part 7

Entwined in one another's arms, gripping another as if scared to let go and loose the other. Neither awake, neither aware of what events lay ahead welcoming them in the morning bliss of the sunlight….just deep in content.

Yet the darkness still waited….waiting to pounce…

She awoke first, flickering her eye lids to find him almost touching her face, his breathe blew on her skin making her tingle and blush. Realising their position and mostly hers she lay still in silence watching him in deep content, giving her joy too to observe his quiet side.
Unable to resist the temptation to touch his peaceful lips, the very same which filled her with ecstasy…how peaceful they looked….but when they touched hers….it was quite a different story;)
She fingered them slowly enjoying the feel against her skin…she closed her eyes in content yet opened them quickly as she felt him move…she smiled still deep in content…but now he had given her room to awake from her slumber…
Getting up but realising too late, when his arm caught hers bringing her down again….except on top of him, that he had all this time been awake and had just been enjoying her undivided attention especially for his lips……

"Good morning Mrs.Walia….and how was your night, I am sure you'll agree with me that you enjoyed dinner…I sure did" he crooned huskily into her ear making her shiver as his fingers caressed her bare back…

Grateful that her hair hid her blushing face against his chest…she tried to move, yet found herself unable to as his fingers trailed up and down her back giving her pure bouts of joy…..oh the torture;)

"kya huwa…what happened, not even a good morning…. leave that, no kiss?"

Oh how could she move, let alone speak… his very touch was killing her and if their lips joined she dare not think what could occur. She could do nothing as she was the prey and he…the hunter. He was in control now, did he enjoy doing this she thought angrily….yet all anger was devoured when his touch become more intense…and his body more needy….his lips trailing over her hair, coaxing her to lift her head so they could meet, yet only she knew of the outcome if such an act took place….so she thought…

"Come on mrs.walia….bani, am waiting for your reply…what happened" he whispered, knowing very well what he was doing to her, knowing that his very touch killed her and left her unable to speak….yet he enjoyed watching her moan for him….he smiled devilishly….yet continued caressing her back….waiting her pleas, he was the judge and she was the defendant….now who would win in this case I wonder ?

She arched her back moving her head as much she could under such pure bliss of his touch knowing his purpose, but that was enough for him her one small movement and his lips caught hers with a groan saying "what took you so long"…
He caged her in kissing her till she no longer could…yet continued knowing that she wanted it more than him…oh such cruel bliss?
Until she groaned "Jai….jai pls…stop bus hogeya…pls jai..no…" Ignoring her petty pleas he drowned her words with his mouth….caressing her bare back which laid dangerously on his hands, supporting her, making him moan his name countless time into his mouth….;)

Hours later did only the couple appear, she looking a bit huffed and blushed while he looked contented and pleased. Such a controlling man….especially to his wife ;)

They descended down the hotel steps intending to do some much awaited touring and have a Proper breakfast?
No one could escape this stunning couple, he was what any women desired beyond belief and she….she was the women of any mans dreams. Both fixed with stunner looks and good physique, their every step was observed by the many that surrounded the hotel reception. Ye both completely lost in their own world failed to note such sudden silence to their arrival….

Out of the corner of her eye, she watched them completely love loran….she groaned on the inside and clutched her golden symbol , as if daring it to bring him closer to her now….yet how could she, the time was not right…yet her dazzling eyes followed their figures, amongst the many others….
She was not the phir se…she was not….how long could a man hide and run from its owner she thought …"Not long jai….not long".

Then picking up her purse, still clutching her golden symbol as if it gave her strength to go on and fight the battle she had already started, she followed the couple out into the sunlight as they got into their car to do some much awaited touring……"Oh bani " she crooned " just wait how I smother your every breath and rob it of you…yesterday was just a taster, next time this darkness will devour you whole…."

Completely oblivious to this strangers want the couple sad in the car entwined in one another's arms sharing a much passionate kiss….which fortunately bani had no intention of letting drop…As their lips moved in gently bliss…the figure that followed behind watched their every move with a hardened heart of cold and a mind now filled with pure desire….she clutched her symbol tightly once more to give her strength …strength to watch on….and strength to destroy all….



Hahah…I have not revealed anything….but if you go back...i have left a lot of clues….as to who this sanjana is…but in the upcoming parts will slowly reveal who this spiteful character is. Srry guyz, this part is no that good or well written….yet I tried my best and I hope you like it! do leave comments!

luv ya mwah
sweetu

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