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here is part 5, as promised. But i must warn you all that this part is not that good and i have not written it well!
I hope you like it tho....pls do leave comments would appreciate it!!
OMG...I DIDNT REALISE HOW LONG I HAD MADE IT....SRRY....
Part 5
Darkness surrounded the room, etched with a sudden threat, which neither souls were aware of….yet.
The moon shone down on them to reveal….one fast asleep and the other completely love loran and lost in his content….
He was wide awake watching her breath in and out in contented sleep, under the blankets that covered all that he had already claimed as his. He smiled as memories rushed through him remembering all that had been shared. He gently reached out and trailed his fingers softly down her bare back…feeling her shiver; he smiled….cruel torture…;)
Careful not to wake her, he got up from his resting position where he had been happily observing his wife sleep….oh such cruel torture, yet he was content…for now;)
Wishing not to disturb her from her frail condition of fatigue, he left a note on the table telling her all….if she ever awoke….where he would be…
*****
"Sanjana…….sanjana…..sanajana…." the wind whispered through the open windows as if to warn her that her lover had finally awoke. Her eyes flickered open immediately to reveal dazzling blue eyes. Her eyes gleamed like diamonds amongst the darkness of hushed secrets….where now…all would be revealed…..
"There is no place left to hide" she whispered to herself… "let my shadow devour him….amongst this everlasting night"
With those words, her petite body walked seductively out of the room, as if its mission had already started, but how could it….she had to find him first.
***
Noise greeted him as he entered the well lit restaurant, the normal hustle and bustle of people surrounded him, many he noted were couples caught in a passionate and romantic embrace…..
Oh how he wished she was here with him. He would love to tease her in front the many that would sit amongst them…..kissing her gently…letting her feel all…
Kissing…..he groaned on the inside, why did he have to remember it, wasn't it enough that she was not by his side…but watching the people do what he most craved to at this moment was plain torture to his lips as it brought back memories of the past many hours of what he and his wife had experienced. He acknowledged the fact that, if had they been anywhere at home then this would not have been possible…lest and he would have never been able to get to know his wife better , especially how she died softly when he kissed her….he groaned on the inside….he was doing it again…
With a deep sigh of longing, he scanned the busy room for an empty table for two, in hope that she may later come and join him.
There were a few he noted who were single, or perhaps waiting for their lover like him.
Still completely ignorant to many female stares he was attracting just by his presence. Had his wife been here I am sure they would not have dared disturb them….but the problem was no one knew he was married….not in this foreign town at least….
As he sat down sighing deeply and longingly, a bundle of giggling and blushing girls appeared out of no where shocking him to the core, dimly aware that this always happened he smiled, making them sigh in content. He turned away from their ever glowing faces not in the mood to chat…if they wanted something from him let them ask, why should he pester them….when all that was pestering him was his wife….
His thoughts flickered back to this morning, making a furious colour rise up…..
Oh how he had ruthlessly yet gently claimed her over and over as his own…biting her neck marking her as his….and then kissing her deeply...to her delight no doubt….
Yet his….his delight, pleasure only came when she whispered his name "Jai….jai" he shivered remembering kissing her…..remembering how he had coaxed and made her groan his name countless times…
His mouth had moved gently against hers…killing her no doubt…but he had also abruptly let go seconds too early….purposely…just for him to hear her say his name…again…and then he had rewarded her…she had soon caught onto his game…and soon she was groaning his name into his mouth while he devoured it hungrily….leaving her only space to breathe…..only his name, as he pushed her closer to him…letting the heat of passion radiate around them….
He was brought back to reality when a voice…an unforgettable….old voice crooned his name….a voice he wished he would never hear again, yet he did….he did….
"jai" she whispered only once but, once was enough to create an impact and see the colour drain out of his face….for his expression to change from that of a person deeply lost into that of anger and annoyance ….she only had to whisper it once….and he….he was hers…
Their eyes locked….and the rain fell, as if crying for his ill fate…the darkness was there now…she had entered his life once again…and now….all hushed secrets would be revealed….amongst the blanket of night…where all that lay hidden and undisturbed…would now finally uncover….to reveal all….
His mouth grim, not daring once even to say her name for fear…for fear of revealing all…
Her eyes probed his….seeing all…understanding all….her body smiled seductively…knowing all…
Her voice tingled like music to any mans heart, yet to his it was an organ playing the tune of death…..to all if she represented a red rose….to him it was black….anger and hatred filled his eyes yet still he remained silent as if thinking even saying anything to her was a sin….
"Jai….akhir tum mujeh bul hi gayei??..per meh tumhe kabhi nahei bhuli….never…kabhi bhi nahi ( translation= jai seems like you did forget me after all….but me how can I forget you…I never could….)"
No response as yet…her eyes twinkled…..
Ignoring his silence she sat down….not forgetting to purposely reveal the slit in her tight dress…that went up to her thigh….she smiled mischievously…completely aware that many men were worshiping her at this very moment…with their eyes….
"Tum bilkul badle bhi nahei….you are completely the same jai, you have not changed"
His eyes narrowed at her words…yet still he refused to say anything….
She laughed at his pathetic attempts to ignore her very words…but for how long would they play this game of cat and mouse….only she could wondered….
"mehne sunha…ke tume shadi karlei…..phir se"…..the last two words lingered out in the open for seconds as if not wanting to be covered….again by the darkness…
His eyes hardened and flared in anger….yet if you knew jai walia like she did….you would also see that he was scared….just those last words….had killed him pierced his heart cruelly making it bleed in distress…making him…scream at her through gritted teeth and flared anger that could devour anyone….
"shut up….just SHUT UP sanjana…..how dare you come back into my life when I have no wish to see you….for me….for me YOU ARE DEAD…."
Her eyes hardened…and seethed in agony to his last words….so he had finally replied after much coaxing….yet not how she had expected…..
Choosing to ignore his heart killing words….she laughed it off….
" toh meh bilkul sahei thi…jai walia has not changed….same anger….same temper….oh I wonder what you wife must say jai…such a temper….loose of control….oooh jai it is not good"
His eyes cursed her very words…yet he chose to remain silent until he was coaxed from out of his shell to kill her by his words….once again.
Yet still silence….
She smirked….at his tense face, wanting to touch him not knowing what his reaction would be but now completely seized with desire she…carefully as if scared yet determined… put her hand out and caressed his...making herself shiver yet sending no reaction through his body…..he didn't move….didn't try and stop her….her hands seductively moved up and down his arms…up and down slowly….oh such cruel torture she thought to herself….still no reaction….nothing…..not even resistance, it was as if he thought she were a bad dream and would go away….yet he knew it was her when her hands started caressing his neck…and face….moments after her lips met his ear and whispered chilling him to the coar…."Jai walia you are a liar…..you can never forget…" and with one last slow outline of his ear….she got up not before locking eyes…knowing all was understood…..
She stood up and looked directly at him...making him lock eyes with hers…
"jai walia….she whispered….can never forget sanjana…I am your first jai walia…and I always will be…..". With those last words she trailed the soft gold S that nestled gently on her neck…slowly….catching him in a trance…watching him follow as she slowly fingered her symbol…..
His eyes widened…as he remembered all…the S…..he moaned…the S said it all…..
Then she walked of…knowing that all had been understood by her words, actions and the S…she was not the phir se….she was the first….
***
To the many couples that surrounded and to anyone who entered it would seem that jai walia and this mysterious women had been a few moments ago locked in a passionate embrace….yet no one noticed except one….
Her eyes filled with pain and tears….her eyes locked briefly with his understanding all….she spun around letting her hair whip anyone in her way…..and ran….
His eyes softened…he gasped "bani"….so this was why she had re-entered his life…once again…to ruin his "phir se"…his eyes blazed in anger and pain…as he realised that she had seen all…and misunderstood….how much had she heard he crooned…
He got up…intending to follow her…soothe her…
So this darkness….had uncovered a truth…but what more was it hiding….what more was it hiding??
Ok ok… I am mean…hahah…many of you may have guessed a lot of what is going on between jai walia and sanjana, but a lot still remains……hidden from you all...but hahah…I didn't make an intense scene here….but…part 6….a little clue it will be...;)!
This part wasn't written well…so please excuse it!!
would appreciate your comments!
luv ya
sweetu
I hope you like it tho....pls do leave comments would appreciate it!!
OMG...I DIDNT REALISE HOW LONG I HAD MADE IT....SRRY....
Part 5
Darkness surrounded the room, etched with a sudden threat, which neither souls were aware of….yet.
The moon shone down on them to reveal….one fast asleep and the other completely love loran and lost in his content….
He was wide awake watching her breath in and out in contented sleep, under the blankets that covered all that he had already claimed as his. He smiled as memories rushed through him remembering all that had been shared. He gently reached out and trailed his fingers softly down her bare back…feeling her shiver; he smiled….cruel torture…;)
Careful not to wake her, he got up from his resting position where he had been happily observing his wife sleep….oh such cruel torture, yet he was content…for now;)
Wishing not to disturb her from her frail condition of fatigue, he left a note on the table telling her all….if she ever awoke….where he would be…
*****
"Sanjana…….sanjana…..sanajana…." the wind whispered through the open windows as if to warn her that her lover had finally awoke. Her eyes flickered open immediately to reveal dazzling blue eyes. Her eyes gleamed like diamonds amongst the darkness of hushed secrets….where now…all would be revealed…..
"There is no place left to hide" she whispered to herself… "let my shadow devour him….amongst this everlasting night"
With those words, her petite body walked seductively out of the room, as if its mission had already started, but how could it….she had to find him first.
***
Noise greeted him as he entered the well lit restaurant, the normal hustle and bustle of people surrounded him, many he noted were couples caught in a passionate and romantic embrace…..
Oh how he wished she was here with him. He would love to tease her in front the many that would sit amongst them…..kissing her gently…letting her feel all…
Kissing…..he groaned on the inside, why did he have to remember it, wasn't it enough that she was not by his side…but watching the people do what he most craved to at this moment was plain torture to his lips as it brought back memories of the past many hours of what he and his wife had experienced. He acknowledged the fact that, if had they been anywhere at home then this would not have been possible…lest and he would have never been able to get to know his wife better , especially how she died softly when he kissed her….he groaned on the inside….he was doing it again…
With a deep sigh of longing, he scanned the busy room for an empty table for two, in hope that she may later come and join him.
There were a few he noted who were single, or perhaps waiting for their lover like him.
Still completely ignorant to many female stares he was attracting just by his presence. Had his wife been here I am sure they would not have dared disturb them….but the problem was no one knew he was married….not in this foreign town at least….
As he sat down sighing deeply and longingly, a bundle of giggling and blushing girls appeared out of no where shocking him to the core, dimly aware that this always happened he smiled, making them sigh in content. He turned away from their ever glowing faces not in the mood to chat…if they wanted something from him let them ask, why should he pester them….when all that was pestering him was his wife….
His thoughts flickered back to this morning, making a furious colour rise up…..
Oh how he had ruthlessly yet gently claimed her over and over as his own…biting her neck marking her as his….and then kissing her deeply...to her delight no doubt….
Yet his….his delight, pleasure only came when she whispered his name "Jai….jai" he shivered remembering kissing her…..remembering how he had coaxed and made her groan his name countless times…
His mouth had moved gently against hers…killing her no doubt…but he had also abruptly let go seconds too early….purposely…just for him to hear her say his name…again…and then he had rewarded her…she had soon caught onto his game…and soon she was groaning his name into his mouth while he devoured it hungrily….leaving her only space to breathe…..only his name, as he pushed her closer to him…letting the heat of passion radiate around them….
He was brought back to reality when a voice…an unforgettable….old voice crooned his name….a voice he wished he would never hear again, yet he did….he did….
"jai" she whispered only once but, once was enough to create an impact and see the colour drain out of his face….for his expression to change from that of a person deeply lost into that of anger and annoyance ….she only had to whisper it once….and he….he was hers…
Their eyes locked….and the rain fell, as if crying for his ill fate…the darkness was there now…she had entered his life once again…and now….all hushed secrets would be revealed….amongst the blanket of night…where all that lay hidden and undisturbed…would now finally uncover….to reveal all….
His mouth grim, not daring once even to say her name for fear…for fear of revealing all…
Her eyes probed his….seeing all…understanding all….her body smiled seductively…knowing all…
Her voice tingled like music to any mans heart, yet to his it was an organ playing the tune of death…..to all if she represented a red rose….to him it was black….anger and hatred filled his eyes yet still he remained silent as if thinking even saying anything to her was a sin….
"Jai….akhir tum mujeh bul hi gayei??..per meh tumhe kabhi nahei bhuli….never…kabhi bhi nahi ( translation= jai seems like you did forget me after all….but me how can I forget you…I never could….)"
No response as yet…her eyes twinkled…..
Ignoring his silence she sat down….not forgetting to purposely reveal the slit in her tight dress…that went up to her thigh….she smiled mischievously…completely aware that many men were worshiping her at this very moment…with their eyes….
"Tum bilkul badle bhi nahei….you are completely the same jai, you have not changed"
His eyes narrowed at her words…yet still he refused to say anything….
She laughed at his pathetic attempts to ignore her very words…but for how long would they play this game of cat and mouse….only she could wondered….
"mehne sunha…ke tume shadi karlei…..phir se"…..the last two words lingered out in the open for seconds as if not wanting to be covered….again by the darkness…
His eyes hardened and flared in anger….yet if you knew jai walia like she did….you would also see that he was scared….just those last words….had killed him pierced his heart cruelly making it bleed in distress…making him…scream at her through gritted teeth and flared anger that could devour anyone….
"shut up….just SHUT UP sanjana…..how dare you come back into my life when I have no wish to see you….for me….for me YOU ARE DEAD…."
Her eyes hardened…and seethed in agony to his last words….so he had finally replied after much coaxing….yet not how she had expected…..
Choosing to ignore his heart killing words….she laughed it off….
" toh meh bilkul sahei thi…jai walia has not changed….same anger….same temper….oh I wonder what you wife must say jai…such a temper….loose of control….oooh jai it is not good"
His eyes cursed her very words…yet he chose to remain silent until he was coaxed from out of his shell to kill her by his words….once again.
Yet still silence….
She smirked….at his tense face, wanting to touch him not knowing what his reaction would be but now completely seized with desire she…carefully as if scared yet determined… put her hand out and caressed his...making herself shiver yet sending no reaction through his body…..he didn't move….didn't try and stop her….her hands seductively moved up and down his arms…up and down slowly….oh such cruel torture she thought to herself….still no reaction….nothing…..not even resistance, it was as if he thought she were a bad dream and would go away….yet he knew it was her when her hands started caressing his neck…and face….moments after her lips met his ear and whispered chilling him to the coar…."Jai walia you are a liar…..you can never forget…" and with one last slow outline of his ear….she got up not before locking eyes…knowing all was understood…..
She stood up and looked directly at him...making him lock eyes with hers…
"jai walia….she whispered….can never forget sanjana…I am your first jai walia…and I always will be…..". With those last words she trailed the soft gold S that nestled gently on her neck…slowly….catching him in a trance…watching him follow as she slowly fingered her symbol…..
His eyes widened…as he remembered all…the S…..he moaned…the S said it all…..
Then she walked of…knowing that all had been understood by her words, actions and the S…she was not the phir se….she was the first….
***
To the many couples that surrounded and to anyone who entered it would seem that jai walia and this mysterious women had been a few moments ago locked in a passionate embrace….yet no one noticed except one….
Her eyes filled with pain and tears….her eyes locked briefly with his understanding all….she spun around letting her hair whip anyone in her way…..and ran….
His eyes softened…he gasped "bani"….so this was why she had re-entered his life…once again…to ruin his "phir se"…his eyes blazed in anger and pain…as he realised that she had seen all…and misunderstood….how much had she heard he crooned…
He got up…intending to follow her…soothe her…
So this darkness….had uncovered a truth…but what more was it hiding….what more was it hiding??
Ok ok… I am mean…hahah…many of you may have guessed a lot of what is going on between jai walia and sanjana, but a lot still remains……hidden from you all...but hahah…I didn't make an intense scene here….but…part 6….a little clue it will be...;)!
This part wasn't written well…so please excuse it!!
would appreciate your comments!
luv ya
sweetu
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