waiting my ff UPDATED! PART21 pg39 END!

he y guys...just wanted to tell u guys...that i am writing a new ff...called WAITING...it is very different from my other ffs...i dont know if u will like it...pls do leave comments!
areh...i have been forced into writing this ff cause one of my jaanus has refused to update her ff...till i do😆...ok my jaan..as promised here is my ff!! now update ur ff NOW!!...lol i dunno if what u said was an empty threat...but still i wrote one...lol😆😆😃

naah..i actually felt like writing another ff...but still this ff...is also cuz of ur threat jaan...😉😆😆...lol now update ur ff now!

hey and guys...i am also in the process of writing another ff....but that i will post later on...but i dont even knoe if i will post it tho...

this ff...has alot of disciption...and is long...i really hope u all like it😕...leave comments i will very much appreciate it!

but pls do leave comments...i will be posting it shortly!!

luv ya
mwah
sweetu😃

p.s. and thank u all those who encouraged me to write another ff ( u knoe who u r!😉😃)

i hope u all like them...all ur comments wil b emuch appreciated!


A NOTE TO ALL READERS AND A WARNING!
Ok i thought i'd write this just in case anyone finds this ff offensive in anyway
Regarding my fan fic i would just like to make a point, i only write for Bani and Jai no one else...so please no one hold anything against me....and i am truly very sorry if anyone is offended by my writing...but in my defence i must say i only write for the characters Bani and Jai.
And a humble appology to Ram(ji) and Gautami(ji)....if by chance you read my ff then i would like to appologise and say sorry as this ff is only written for Bani and Jai the characters....and is in no way ment to offend anyone, especially you both.Yet still if you are annoyed i can offer nothing more than my appology and then i shall stop writing this ff as i have no wish to offend anyone.

So WARNING...read my ff at your own risk...so as then you cannot hold anything against me yet still i appologise!
The ff is written for Bani and Jai alone.

Ok i thought i'd write this, written above, warning just in case anyone who reads my ff and finds it offensive.

ok guys..i myself am saying that this ff...is a pathetic excuse of a ff...lol...i dunno if u'll like it...itz so different!!
and thank u all my jaans who encouraged me to write another one...and thank u every1 who liked my previosue ff's...THANK U!

ok my jaan..see i wrote my ff...now hurry and update urs...am waiting yaar...u knoe who u r!!


Waiting

A tall masculine figure stood on the pavement waiting. Completely oblivious to the constant stares he kept attracting from the now many women who passed by him. For him, only one persons stare counted….it was hers.
He ignored the normal bustle of young girls…all giggling and blushing…coming up to him and flirting using lame and pathetic excuses. Careful not to hurt them, he swiftly smiled at them, sending them up to heaven and back and turned around…walking away from all…just waiting…waiting for her.

Shaped with a fit body, hansom face and good dress sense he was what any women would call "my prince". Yet he wasn't theirs...he only belonged to one, you just had to look deep into his eyes to realize to what lengths and how deeply he loved her…

Men looked on jealously, casual passers by, as to the attraction he was getting from the women, whether he realized it or not…there was now a huge group of women scattered around him just watching him very intensely…trying to memories his every apt movement…which left them all mesmerized beyond belief…

He felt a strange tingle up his spine and he abruptly turned around sensing her presence, he blushed at his reaction, but was not disappointed when a frail petite women came running around the corner…her cheeks flushed her hair flying lazily around her….she was what men would call "wow".
As his eyes fell on her…he examined her intensely and protectively…the breath got struck in his throat…he could not breathe…she was looking amazing…she was "wow".

She looked up and met his eyes and instantly melted…her cheeks flushed her heartbeat out of pace from the long run…some stupid taxi driver had refused to take her to her destination… "The raza hotel"…five star, where she was supposed to be meeting her "prince charming". She stopped abruptly as their eyes locked….completely ignorant of the profound and constant stares both were attracting from now a huge crowd of women and some men…

Her heart fluttered…she walked slowly towards him…but realized with a groan that she was not reaching him fast enough….oh how she craved to be in his arms protected from all… just with him….just for him to kiss her like he did leaving her breathless….just him and her…oh how she longed…and with one last thought, she quickened her pace to such an extent that she herself did not realize…she was now running… towards him..

He watched her intensely…the expression on her face was priceless…he smiled, as he read all that her eyes said…..his eyes softened as he watched her quicken her pace…till to that she was running….his heart melted oh how he just wanted to hold her and kiss her…kiss her till they both no longer could…

She flew into his awaiting arms with a soft thud, her breathing fast…but her heartbeat soon slowed down to that of the pace of her prince….
The many that surrounded groaned in annoyance at the acknowledgement that both "stunners" already had a love…and that was each other….mock jealousy written on their face, not even trying to hide their disappointment…the crowd dispersed…leaving the two lovers locked in a passionate brace which did not seem like it was going to break anytime soon…..

Few minutes later..
He broke apart from her…her eyes cast downwards her cheeks blushed…he gently touched her cheek…sending a warm tingle down her spine…making he quiver…he loved what his one touch could do to her…he loved tormenting her…he loved her reaction to his touch…he brushed his lips slowly against her cheeks…using all his self control not to grab her and kiss the life out of her, which he realized with a blush he usually did, right there and then…but for know that could wait…

Whether she knew it or not…the torture his touch gave her was double for him…

He swiftly caught her hand in his…catching her off guard and led her gently but quickly to the entrance to the hotel…where what both wished for awaited them…

The hotel manger smiled and welcomed them "Mr. and Mrs. Walia…all has been arranged please step this way…"

Staying in a foreign country…both had parted their ways…his for the meetings and her… for shopping…but being apart for even a second broke their hearts…

That night…two lovers met under the blanket of darkness…of love released…

She groaned softly as her quivering lips were caught in his…he groaned as he moved his lips against her softly…now not holding back...trailing his fingers through her hair….soothing all longing hunger with a satisfaction of her presence…her lips..

She pulled away gently and walked to the balcony...she smiled…at how much she had felt in that one soft kiss which had only lasted a few minutes….
He smiled at her shyness…but the strange hunger and longing erupted inside him again...clawing like an animal…

She gasped as a strong hand caught her around the waist and as soft lips slowly trailed down to her neck...biting her as if chiding her for leaving him…her breath caught in her throat...she groaned.…her flesh tingled with his touch…such torture…he enveloped his hands in hers turned her around and kissed her deeply…giving her no time to think…only enough for her to melt into him…

Waiting…waiting for what…waiting for someone to come into your life and fill it with dreams and hopes…that is exactly what these two lovers did…

Such unbreakable bond…that separation was not even an option…such love…that waiting in the end…benefited them both…as they had both finally found the one they loved..

Such profound and electric love that not even the darkness could torture them with its darkness of unsaid secrets…as what could it say when two hearts had finally met??



ok guys...there u go all done!! [;) leave comments!]

OMG!!! That was excellent!!!! The way u described everything was just superb. I wud have to say a job well done 👏 👏

that was excellent
sooo romantic and the words u used simple yet powerful 😊

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!!

Great describing words....very well written!!

Well Done!

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soo romantic WOW you are to good please count soooooooooooooooon 🤗

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that was so romantic 😳
plz continue soon

it is awesome 👏 please continue

😳 😳 awesome...welll done hun and you said it was pathetic pleaseeeeee...that was great so touching wow i wish i was Bani...ahem ahem ..ermm who are you waiting for to update their fanfic 😆 😆so is there going to be more ???