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Posted: 19 years ago
nice yaar so very nice 😳 😳 😳
loved it...Jai sounds so yummy... šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sweetu....that part was really good!!! Please continue soon!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
šŸ¤— !!
THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH! I cannot even begin to express how much i appreciate your sweet comments and encouragement!
Thank you for liking my ff and part 7!
Part 8 will hopefully be up soon, in some time!
THANK YOU ALL, once again!

Luv ya mwah
sweetu
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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG...i read all these 7 parts right now...and its almost 5AM here...i tried my best 2 stop myself and go 2 sleep and read rest of it tomorrow...but couldnt stop..
OH Well!..its amazing.. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ ...continue soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok guys…I an now assure u that this part is not written well at all…as I am in a hurry to go somewhere and am also a bit busy! Though would appreciate your comments!

WARNING...READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!!!!!;)

Part8

The sunlight hitting the water shores left a dazzling affect on the many watchers, giving a romantic affect and feel to the place where many couples stood mesmerised by its very beauty.

Yet only one man just could just not stop looking ... its beauty… its perfection at every angle, radiating curves… it was his wife. Completely ignorant and unaffected by the magnificent sight that was available in front of his eyes, only aware of one such "attraction" standing next to him whom he wouldn't mind touching or looking at leave alone, be with all day....

Oh such cruel lust, how he dared many times with his eyes to touch her revealing skin, kiss her….he even imagined making love to her in the spectacular waters view that held her joy, glee and made her eyes sparkle, exactly as she did when they were alone…together…in one room…oh such cruel excitement…:)
Desperate beyond belief to catch her sight just once, amazed at her reactions to what beheld her sight, certainly not him…for the moment, a frown of annoyance crossed his face…yet he would have her…oh yes he would. Unable to hold his desire he crept behind her…wrapping his hands around her waste and gently brushing his lips near her ear to only feel her tingle, and whispered…
"Chalo bani…bus hogeya…chalo…lets go back to the car" His grip tightened, his husky voice indicating exactly what he wanted, she had to smile at her husbands cheek…always craving for more hardly ever satisfied with what given…
She held her hand over his…mocking him yet murmured none the less…" kya huwa…what happened don't you just love the view, we haven't even eaten yet…what is the rush all of the sudden…I thought you were satisfied with what we were doing today, and we have only just started….and how can we go back…the boat has already started to move…."

She smirked…pleased with her reply...yet she still had not finished…knowing how much he was longing for her, just by his very touch she could feel his passion, longing and lust radiating through her body…making her want him…yet still she wanted to see the sights today….so not wanting to put him through any more lust longing she whispered, to soothe him, only so that he could hear ….
"….at nigh…you will get your deserts….after dinner of course;)" and that was it…all she had to say, and he was satisfied…. yet he still wanting something to soften the hunger for her that had awoken, his eyes begged her…yet no response came… yet…..;)

Completely aware of her husband's pleas, she had no choice but to ignore them…for the moment, while she let the breathtaking view hold her eyes and fill it with longing and desire for the future….. Never letting go of his hands which encircled her petite waste.:)

As their time came to an end, for watching the magnificent views of the waters held with magic of the sunlight, the many that surrounded started coming off the boat which had now parked it self nicely on the waters shore.

Jai still dazed at his wives response, didn't realise what was happening, only aware of her fingers slowly stroking his, as if trying to soften his longing. She pulled him gently off the boat and led him back to their car, fully intending to soften his pleas:)

In the car, watching her still dazed husband….she casually trails her fingers up and down his neck feeling his body tighten and to vibrate soft waves of pleasure...to her touch. She lets her lips trail his neck only to soon find his lips softly caressing and eating hers…his hands moving down loosening all, pulling her trembling body closer to his, caging her in on the seat…lying on top of her yet breaking his fall…and letting his lips meet hers with a groan of " bani...". Kissing her long and hard, allowing his lips to caress hers and his tongue to move softly over them…

His body was burning with passion and hunger, just wanting her and telling her so with his action….which made her groan his name in pure pleasure….

The moving car was slowly moving through the traffic, while its passengers were locked in tight passion …

A person behind continued to follow them… it was her...sanjana...her eyes were burning in anger, realising all…his actions, his touch upon "hers". She had been watching "them" on the boat careful to keep her distant, analysing all…yet never making her presence felt…"oh" she crooned to herself "Bani be prepared….this darkness will now devour you whole" indicating herself, as the brutal storm.
Caressing still her golden symbol…which somehow still held Jai as hers, now revealed amongst the faint glint of the sunlight something engraved with powerful emotions and love….

"Forever we entwined
Together as one
Our hearts shall
Always meet as one
As long as you have yours
We are forever one…"

-JS-
(-symbol engraved with love- )


OK, ok I know this is getting confusing…but all shall soon be revealed….if you have questions regarding this part or are confused do pm me and I will try and ease your confusion…....but srry if it is confusing and not well written as am a bit busy and bit in a rush! srry guys! but do leave comments



Luv ya
mwah
sweetu 😳

p.s. the last part...my short poem...is a riddle..guess if u canšŸ˜‰
i just hope you are not all too confused....and if you all would like me to write an intense part...pls do tell!
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
didi..... it was awesome.. not as intense!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
didi..... it was awesome.. not as intense!! 😳 😳 😳 but npz.. when u get a
chance to update do so plz!!!!!


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Posted: 19 years ago
damnnnnnnnnnnnn 😳 WOW.. so intense.. that was gr888.. can't wait fo d nxt part.. really wanna know who's followin 'em šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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as usual sweetu dear
fab part
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Posted: 19 years ago

WONDERFUL PART

PLZZZZZZ CONT

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